Definitely a nice bus ride. Too bad Ken and John decided to be hangers-on, but the boys are doing well.
Hmm, a compliment in chapter one and a (minor) criticism in chapter two for your editor. I guess the editor in me is coming out. Wilmington, Delaware would have been a better choice. 95 doesn’t go through Dover. Although a side trip down route 13 is a nice one-time deal. The Chesapeake Bay Bridge Tunnel is quite a sight.
A little late to the game, and I don’t mean that it’s 1:48 AM here. Great start. Looking forward to the journey. Hopefully they end up in Davie and can double date with Derek snd Jeremy. We could co-author a combined sequel.
I would like to commend you. I’d noticed in the past your misuse of there for their. You corrected that. Good going.
I don't think it's years, but number of stories. I haven't been in the moderation queue for a long time and have been here 20 months.
And no, you don't need to be nice to people at the grocery store. The robots that work there, maybe, but not people in general. I mean, what if you were looking for Elio's pizza and had to ask someone? OK, bad reference, that story of mine isn't here.
Ah, the innocence of youth. Totally accepting. I wonder if Brett really "knew all about the sex stuff," his attitude would be different.
An angry Lucas is not a good thing. Watch your backs Ned and Owen.
Oh, believe me. If there weren't two other people living here, I'd only have clothes on if I was planning on going somewhere. Or simply going outside to get the mail or pick up my grocery order.
Well, hopefully you'll like what happens to the boys on Thanksgiving.
I'll be there next year to sample that fine choice of a menu. Thank you, thank you very much. Elvis.
It took a few minutes for Jerry to sort through his stuff. Fortunately, it was delivered. I joked he'd have to swim naked if it wasn't there. I'm not sure he hated the idea. Anyway, we swam for almost two hours, then headed to the showers. Even though it's Sunday afternoon, there's one kid in there. He's in one or more of each of our classes, so we all kind of know him. He looks embarrassed so we figure we almost caught him wanking. He's covering himself up, but we already saw he was hard. Leave
The hate just flows out at the Myers household. Brandon sure knows how to twist the knife to get his parents going.
Dylan and Billy are quite a pair. I have a feeling we’ll be hearing more about them.
Oof. Any Lee Child fan would have a field day with this one. No. No. No. Tom Cruise was a terrible choice to play Jack Reacher. Alan Ritchson plays him in Prime’s “Reacher” series. And even he’s a little too small. Reacher in the books is something like 6’5” 250 pounds. Alan is 6’3” but a much closer approximation than Tom’s 5’7”
As for the rest, good observations. The gang slip wasn’t intended to be race related, just simply that gangs are typically seen as bad.