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  1. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 66

    Lee Wilson commented on John Henry's story chapter in Chapter 66

    Well played. You had me fooled. So fooled that even after the disclosure of the nightmare, I was expecting them to be somewhere in Mexico, having taken the kidnapping route themselves that was mentioned a couple chapters ago. But you made it turn out right. And this passage was awesome:
  2. Lee Wilson
    Thanks for the compliment. I hope the rest is just as gripping.
  3. Lee Wilson
    Appreciate the feedback. No doghouse for you.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Chapter 1

    It took a little while to get into the story, but it finally hooked me. Very enjoyable. I do have one nit-picky item. It’s Counselor Troi, not Troy. You never want to tick off a Trekker. We’ll sic the Klingons on you. 😄
  5. Lee Wilson
    Or a really bad way, depending on your perspective. Abel and Kathy will not be thinking it's good.
  6. Lee Wilson
    I think I quoted this song once before, but since it's appropriate: B-b-b-baby, you just ain't seen n-n-n-nothing yet
  7. Lee Wilson
    It's been a while since you got your hands on my early drafts. You been on vacation or something?
  8. Lee Wilson
    Yes, and I bet you can guess who I'll get as your detention monitor. I won't say any names, but kb is a hint.
  9. Lee Wilson
    That's me; Roller Coaster Tycoon.
  10. Lee Wilson
    Well, there is indeed more to the story. I'm on chapter 9 with no end in sight. 😁
  11. Lee Wilson
    It's still a way away, and not to spoil anything at all, but the South Carolina connection will come back up at some point. For your last sentence, all we have to do is wait, I guess.
  12. Lee Wilson
    Thanks, but I think we've passed from coincidence to reality. Hehe. There will be more on Nick's two-day journey in a later chapter to help explain some of the coincidences.
  13. Lee Wilson
    Saturday Brendan woke up before Nick the next morning. Nick was lying on the couch and the blanket was on the floor. The T-shirt rode up a little, but Nick was still covered down to his upper thighs. Brendan was thankful for that, especially after Nick's disclosure from his visit to Burger King. He put the blanket back over Nick and went into the kitchen to put on some coffee and start breakfast. During the week he normally only had toast or a bagel, but on the weekends, he liked a little m
  14. Lee Wilson
    Glad you are liking it so far.
  15. Lee Wilson
    I believe the authorities will have everything under control.
  16. Lee Wilson
    Imagine that, me, writing an uplifting story. At least partially.
  17. Lee Wilson
    I’m still figuring out how to play the religious nutjob angle. Obviously a little foreshadowing with Nick asking Brendan to say grace. I’m sure I’ll get there. No teeth involved yet, but we’ll see.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Chapter 1

    @weinerdog, why did you hijack @kbois' GA account?
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Maybe it's me, but I think his so-called "friends" went a little too far with the antagonizing. If I were Jason, I would have left before most of what was said, was said. Otherwise, it was a good story.
  20. Lee Wilson
    Not all my protagonists are partial assholes.
  21. Lee Wilson
    That mirror may turn into one of the funhouse variety in a few chapters.
  22. Lee Wilson
    Hmmm. Maybe you'll be right.
  23. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, I tried to make it look like CPS was uncooperative and even going to the police might not have been ideal. That, and like you said, it'd be less interesting. Like I mentioned above, more detail is forthcoming.
  24. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. Yeah, the kid's had it rough. You'll find out more. Brendan is a nice guy. I'm reminded of a Beatle's song, 'The Long and Winding Road.'
  25. Lee Wilson
    I'm hoping it will be enjoyable. Some serious tones, but no 'Rocked to the Core' moments.
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