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  1. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. On the bisexual piece, I guess I wouldn’t even be writing here if I wasn’t.
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 47

    Lee Wilson commented on John Henry's story chapter in Chapter 47

    Another good job @John Henry. more background, which I’m guessing means mire excitement next week.
  3. Lee Wilson
    I used something different with Bart in chapter 6. Quite original if I might say do myself.
  4. Lee Wilson
    Well, if the restaurant choice is the biggest criticism, I’ll take it.
  5. Lee Wilson
    Jason has good kids. I do like Olive Garden. It’s possible to like multiple Italian restaurants.
  6. Lee Wilson
    I like Olive Garden. Love the Zuppa Toscana. I just think Carrabba’s is better. Almost exactly. Just not ‘String Theory.’ Indeed. I know I’m only funny once in a while. I keep trying though.
  7. Lee Wilson
    That’s probably a good thing. Not letting the future happenings affect the edit. 6 has its ups and downs, but they’re mild.
  8. Lee Wilson
    Apparently I’m too predictable. But, I’ll keep you in suspense for maybe 5 or 6 days. I’ll be looking forward to your reaction after chapter 7.
  9. Lee Wilson
    Jason will be fine. You’re right about Bart. A little more on him in chapter 6.
  10. Lee Wilson
    Yes, even Mason was reasonable.
  11. Lee Wilson
    Brandon left for the funeral home after an early lunch with us. The next day was Thanksgiving. I couldn’t see much other than the remaining family to be thankful for. The weather was extremely nice for late November, so I took the kids for a walk on the beach. While walking along the water, we talked about what to do for dinner tomorrow. I knew I wasn't up to cooking a big meal, if Brandon's Dad even had the food at home. I sent Brand a text to see if anybody came down with Mason. He said yes, h
  12. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. With this one I had to do the Happily Ever After. I end too many stories with one or two low spots.
  13. Lee Wilson
    Thanks, and yes, here comes the wedding.
  14. Lee Wilson
    I get some things right.
  15. Lee Wilson
    Yep, they needed a break from the hassles.
  16. Lee Wilson
    Definitely. Like the commercial said. Priceless, but no sarcasm.
  17. Lee Wilson
    Which parts Bill W and Zuri improved too
  18. Lee Wilson
    No, this is the same story, enhanced.
  19. Lee Wilson
    And that’s true for most of the different disciplines under the “engineering” umbrella. Nobody would want a Civil Engineer to design the circuitry for a medical device. Named similar, completely different. Just like your case.
  20. Lee Wilson
    Wanted to handle this one separately. The idea of faith was the impetus to writing this. Yeah, it’s not a strong hold in this story, really just the two points; post funeral and the closing paragraph. Loose connection to the Anthology topic.
  21. Lee Wilson
    Life sometimes sucks so badly….
  22. Lee Wilson
    Mechanical and architectural drawing can lead to multiple disciplines in engineering. Civil Engineering, Industrial, Mechanical, Structural, etc. Software engineering is where Richard ended up, even with an Electrical Engineering degree. I guess I could have added that tidbit. Nice suggestion.
  23. Lee Wilson
    She'd kissed her husband Richard goodbye as he left on a business trip a few hours ago. Richard had been a software engineer for sixteen years. He was a good worker and respected by his peers and management. Trips to train their customers were often requested by the company. It was one such trip he was taking. Tina was just getting back from their elementary school after taking the three kids to the book fair. The two oldest attended school there. All three of them liked reading to different deg
  24. Lee Wilson
    Initially written for the "Leap of Faith" Anthology, a couple readers made some suggestions to make the story better. It has more dialog and more depth to the characters. Hopefully if you enjoyed the previous version, you'll like this one as well.
  25. Lee Wilson
    How does a man deal with the death of his wife and picking up the pieces? Sometimes not well. This is an updated version based on some user input. Hopefully it reads a little better.
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