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Lee Wilson

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  1. Yeah, I suppose I could have handled that differently, but it made sense for what was coming.
  2. I guess that’s something. I didn’t think it was too obvious, glad it wasn’t Always possible I suppose. Makes sense. I was figuring they were in their rooms doing homework or something. Lost a day? No, saying it was Monday would have given away the twist. You guys knew he looped out Sunday morning and thought he’d gone to bed Saturday night. He just doesn’t know it yet.
  3. How will he handle it? We shall soon see.
  4. I could definitely see how you'd take it that way. Of course, I didn't see that while I was writing it. Perhaps he still was feeling the effects of his first patient's suicide, and it clouded his judgement. More likely, I simply didn't think that scene through well enough.
  5. I felt great, leaving work after that appointment. I started down the path of getting Steve comfortable with who he is, and I also tricked Ed into realizing he wasn't as tolerant as he thought he was. The kids noticed my good cheer when I picked them up from daycare. The conniving little devils decided to take advantage of it. They whispered quietly in the back seat. It didn't take long before I found out what they wanted. I guess Billy lost the virtual coin toss. Or maybe it was Rochambeau
  6. I remember the first step Call it season number one I didn't think it was bad Just something done for fun I was young, she was younger Show me yours, I'll show you mine We had no idea it was wrong But in a flash, it wasn't fine We, interrupted by a mother She, showing a lack of class Spun me 'round to face away and spanked me on the ass It was much later then, and time for season two The boys and I were naked 'Twas not much else to do Perhaps al
  7. A short one telling the story of how someone might discover they’re gay.
  8. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    I would have liked one more chapter too, but ending how it did left us to use our imaginations about their future.
  9. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    Nice story. Although I was a lot like the Adam in chapter 1, he was a lot luckier than I ever was in chapter 2.
  10. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Good start to another possibly great story. Signed, Adam You could have been describing me, except I have blue eyes.
  11. I'll have to look for a place to have them donate a dollar or two. 🤑 I see myself in a lot of them. I'm not as nice as it appears. No argument here. Prejudice is prejudice. Unless it's simple stupidity, I have no tolerance for it whatsoever.
  12. Well, they're all doctors, so they need to spend their money on something if they don't do drugs. This story will likely be very light on sex. Gotta "stick it in" somewhere. The world is full of hypocrites. I said most people don't hate ... He had the impresion, obviously false, that he would remain with his son, so the gayness factor didn't worry him.
  13. Short and sweet. I think the comment I left says enough: A touching story of a friendship that hit some bumps, but ended up with love. It deserves all 5 stars it got.
  14. Lee Wilson

    SW2

    Even later to the party. I’d have added an epilogue that gave Brett exactly what he deserved. I won’t go into any details, but suffice to say, what he did to Josh would be nothing compared to what I’d give him. Regardless, a touching story of a friendship that hit some bumps, but ended up with love. It deserves all 5 stars it got.
  15. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    A truly beautiful story about young love and the struggle to find it. I’m glad I found it and now have to look for more of your stories @Ivor Slipper.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I considered the sad emoji, but decided on love. Even though the story so far had its sad points, the end of the chapter is looking up. Off to read chapter 2 now.
  17. Yeah, then all the rest of the customers could have a little piece.
  18. Bad eggs need to be destroyed properly. Football? I've already had a few football players in my stories. Hope springs eternal.
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 10 S2

    Christmas in April, way cool. I'll echo everything above, both care needed when heroing, and the activities at the hospital. Devin was kind of a hero there too, and he didn't need to make himself bigger.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 44

    I have to admit I’m an old fart. But I don’t understand the significance of meta. The only use I’m aware of is as in metadata, but I can’t see how that’s relative. Google tells me it’s a technology company. Again, no help. It’s probably not germane to understanding the story. I just feel like I’m missing something like an inside joke. That said, Diego needs to get GPS chips planted in the boys bodies somehow, so when dickhead takes off with them, they can be tracked.
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 42

    If Steve kept the camera pointed at Calvin, there’s no way the judge would know got sure. Just because Calvin said he had a gun, there’s no proof. Plus he took it apart, made it temporarily useless.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 40

    I want an Uncle Billy. Waaaaah.
  23. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 39

    I’m getting confused. Who is whose daddy? 😇 These lighthearted chapters are a nice break.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 37

    Bryan, tell us what you really think. Daddy wants to know.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 36

    There’s one more thing that an eleven year old wouldn’t think of. Medical history. Adoptees rarely know if there’s anything lurking in their future.
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