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Inside the panic room, one of the robbers saw the blank video screens, “Those work?” “Of course.” “Turn ‘em on.” Eight screens lit up. Three were inside, each pointing at an exterior door. Four more looked out from each corner of the roof of the house. The last one was a view of the basement outside the panic room’s door. Jerry surreptitiously enabled the view screen in the basement that showed the interior of the panic room. He hoped at some point the police would search the base
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Thanks. And how the thieves knew will indeed be explained.
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Just? Hmmm. Including? Hmmm also.
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True across the board.
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Thanks. You will have to wait a bit for chapter 3. About 21 hours.
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Just the rooftop guy so far. Perhaps something different for the others.
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Maybe. But I think you may be surprised.
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Yep, this is a quick one, almost no waiting.
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Well, in that case, perhaps you will get it upon his return, and a little in the epilogue.
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Thanks much. I'm afraid everybody will be disappointed because tomorrow's chapter is the end. Maybe I need to find a way to continue this one.
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Glad you're enjoying it.
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Jerry put his ear buds in, making sure they connected, “Can you hear me Julius?” “Yes, but be quiet.” Jerry made his way to the master bathroom, locking the bedroom and bathroom doors behind him. “I’m in the master bath. I don’t think they’re...” Jerry heard the window breaking, “They broke a window.” “Then maybe you want to shut up?” “Okay, okay. I’m nervous.” He didn’t stay quiet for long, “Was that a gunshot?” “Probably. And unless you want the next bullet i
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All good ideas. None right. The answer why appears shortly.
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Thanks. I guess my brain just needed a break.
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Thanks. I look forward to its reaction.
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More bang coming up.
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Thanks. Yeah, I think I packed a lot of action into 3000+ words.
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Thanks. Well, the prompt pretty much guaranteed a speedy plot.
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That's coming soon. Parts 2 & 3 tomorrow and Wednesday.
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Julius was awakened by the phone ringing. ‘Damn him. He wants the phone on his side of the bed, but he never hears it.’ “Trevor, wake up.” Nothing. Julius shoves Trevor. “Huh?” “Answer the phone.” “Wha…” “Answer the fucking phone.” “Why’s the phone ringing?” “I don’t know. Maybe if you answer it, you’ll find out.” “Hello? … Why’s it still ringing?” “Not your cell, the house phone.” “Shit... Hello?” The caller whispered, “You gotta
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Prompt #265 Write a story that begins with a phone call at three in the morning. Trevor insisted the house phone be on his side of the bed. There was one problem with that; Trevor was nearly impossible to wake up. One night, the phone rings at three AM. Julius has a hard time waking Trevor, but finally succeeds. Trevor finally answers the phone on the ninth ring. The phone call starts something they never could have expected.
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Definitely, Jerry Eubanks is shown as playing flute for the band.
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Frosted Hearts: The End Part Two
Lee Wilson commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The End Part Two
You made your deadline. It’s still Saturday night until you wake up on Sunday. Great “end” to the story. You know we’ll all be waiting for part 2. But take your time. I know I still have Gabriel to attack. -
Radio in my car, music I downloaded on my phone lots of other times. Lately I’ve been listening to the songs I created on suno.com a lot. If you’re curious: https://suno.com/@lee_666_wilson FYI, I provided the lyrics, and told it what style i wanted.
