John c
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I feel for Brandon but ,I think things might be better if he just told his Dad who he really is. On the other hand why can't they use Billy's house. I mean it's just Billy and his mom.
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Chapter 15 - All At Once
John c commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15 - All At Once
Oh Crap,things are going to get even more complicated for Kris. -
Well it seems that instead of making a temporary problem a permanent solution. Brandon really needs to talk to Chandler,or of course to Billy. Tell him his fear n how he feels. Until that's done he's not going to know where Billy's at.
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I thought Chris was Killians lookout. So how is this person now holding him at Gun Point?
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Well I'm glad to see the boys have put down the Silent Scorn. It seems the reason is once again they re facing an outside force against them. I hope that a pattern of unity doesn't only stay strong when they have to fight against negative forces.
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I like that the story is moving forward, but why such short chapters?
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Oh yeah. Are there going to be any details on that?
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Should be Very Interesting once Seth shows up
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Oh Man, here we go again. Here's to hoping Novak got the text.
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Uh oh. Don't much like that last comment. That 3 counties wasn't far enough. With him being a runner in all. Hopefully the Horse Back Riding goes well.
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It would be cool to see where it goes from here.
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Hopefully dear old Dad sees where the bigotry already almost Killed His Son.
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Somewhere in the chapter did I read that the park, school, n authorities were going to look it the reason the log used for a crossing ended up in the water? Eell if I remember correctly, wasn't Timmy the one jumping on it?
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Somewhere in the chapter did I read that the park, school, n authorities were going to look it the reason the log used for a crossing ended up in the water? Eell if I remember correctly, wasn't Timmy the one jumping on it?
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Pretty Much. His dad made a promise to Joel
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I agree with someone else's comment, that Colt may very well get introuble with the parental s for not keeping Jole drama free. Colts will probably fire back with why is Jole living with them n demand some kinda of explanation.
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Someday Out of the Blue
John c commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Someday Out of the Blue
Great piece kept me coming back for more. Just wish there had been a lil more. Thanks 👍 -
Turn the Lights Out When You Leave
John c commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Turn the Lights Out When You Leave
Oh Man I Saw this Coming. Should always know all the facts before reacting. Conner still hasn't stopped to think what consequences his actions are going to set in motion. Mainly kicking the door off the hinges. Maggie may reconsider letting him live there being that violent. Strike 2 batter up. In Conners defense though. If someone treated me like Ryan did for months,I probably would have moved on sooner than Conner did. Since Ryan broke things off with no time or reason with no explanation. Both Wrong but who more so. -
Man I sure wish we could get back to hearing from Brandon regularly instead of months apart.
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Very True,but I feel a Tornado coming.
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I can see this is going to get emotionally Messy,lol.
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If this was a printed book which I could continue reading,I would have a hard time putting it down.
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Great ,can't wait.
