Cane23

Great love story between Johnny, Native American, technician in theatre and Jason, conductor and musician. They fight some obstacles, strange intrude of their privacy, homophobia and custody over child but, they win all the battles becoming stronger and more in love. In a meantime, they become patrons and guardians of “lost” boys, some abandoned by their family, some fighting in cruel artistic world… Actually, Johnny and Jason form their own “village” where they can freely share their love and passion with others. For the good erotica lovers this is a perfect story. You will find some of the hottest sex scenes ever written here at GA in it. There is something for everyone – couples, threesoms, double penetration, endowed males, orgies…

Amazing story dealing with some serious issues in a way that is pure joy to read unlike some difficult and dark stories. Rick, a local plumber, fighting his childhood trauma, sexuality and outing… A brave guy standing opposite the selfish father, corrupt local authorities, greedy investors, fighting for the love of his life, for the future of his town and its citizens. If Rick is insecure and hidden behind self-built inside walls at the beginning of the story, at the end we see a real, self-confident hero. Maybe it is not for the review section but, I would like to ask @Parker Owens question about Rick’s raping. It is not mentioned in the story that he said about this to anyone – authorities, lousy father at the end, friends…not even to his boyfriend. There is nothing he should be ashamed for and, in my opinion, it would be healthy to let this out of his mind and share it with somebody. Especially because it is trauma that marked his life and had a huge impact on his psyche. Anyway, this story is big adventure and I recommend it with great delight.

I loved this story very much. Attraction of the opposites might be description of the plot. There are some serious topics like rape, family abuse...but, there are also some very funny and entertaining moments. Some controversial moments have been commented by readers. In my opinion, complete rape issue is not handled well by author. There should be more thoughtful approach to the topic, dealing with psychological trauma, lover support and help. On the other hand, there is one scene that I liked very much although it is not majority opinion as I could see in comments. The family diner with grandparents scene, when Trent shows up is fantastic. It reminds me on famous last dance scene from “Dirty dancing”, when Jonny (Patrick Swayze) shows up and say to Babies parents – “Nobody puts Baby in the corner”! Trent is a real hero in shiny armors in that moment.

This story is a little masterpiece. I’ve already known that @Headstall is genius in writing dialogues and (mis)communication topics but idea to put something that might be a multi-chapter story in one conversation is fantastic. Locked in room by friends, two separated lovers try to make a conversation and resolve issues that separated them. Starting with borders which seems to be unbreakable, story evolves so that you, as a reader, are going through the same feelings (anger, disappointment, doubts, questionings and revelation at the end) as protagonists. I love series, but bringing complete potential series in one chapter dialogue is work of art.

As promised... 😁

At least bring those "average" people back, they are such endless inspiration to tease you in a pause between chapters! 😜🤣

I'll make it up to you... 🥇🥇🥇

But you are the first on pg 8! Congrat!

I was just writing something similar! Ah, group is great! 🤣

Well, in my humble opinion, that would be the case if @Mrsgnomiewas a movie director. Since she is writer, the moment she submits the story on the net, characters don't belong only to her anymore, they belong to readers as well. So, if you don't want interpretations, you write to yourself only. Sorry! 🤓

Keep going, one will be yours these days! 😁

OK, OK...bring the average people and twink-ish Kyan back! 🤪

Yes they do, but I have to agree with @kboison this one! This is not story about "average" people, write another one with such characters. 😜

Is this a moment I should mentioned I have imagined Nash Kushman as a younger (and less Thor ripped) Chris Hemsworth without provoking nuclear catastrophe?! 🤔🤣

You see now why I had to interfere with Alex Pettyfer! 😁

I have imagined Kyan as Alex Pettyfer...maybe not innocent enough for you @Mrsgnomie?! 🤣

Kyan is twink?! 😱🤣

I cannot even imagine situation that this "biological" parents want to see their grandchildren. I can think of something like: "Kyan, lets meet in a hotel lobby, but don't bring the kids please, you know that noise disturb our sensitive nerves"...or some similar BS! 🥴

This...golf thing, made me think of something... I can imagine situation where Kyan is becoming famous and successful in "something" and then, his selfish, bastard parents show up directly from hell, suddenly wanting to be around their celebrity son, reminding him that they are his parents! 🤮

Kyan a golf player...maybe another hidden talent...?!?

@Mrsgnomieshines again: 😁 “You two are about as subtle as two dogs knotted.” “I think the poor guy could use a vacation from this vacation”

...and now, let me read the chapter properly, nice people, pls don't leave the party before I came beck!!! 🙂