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I expect something brain-made, not a muscle-made solution from Tyler! 😁
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Unrequited love or repressed feelings? Oh, what a mess...
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This is the first serious temptation for our heroes. Wylan, with his abilities, looks like a forerunner of modern intelligence.
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The moment Alec said “Danny,” I gasped - I felt it in my chest.
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Of course... But, what about feelings...?! Ever is too long for immortality.
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Ok, but Charlie is very much interested in Taine and Taine is interested in both Charlie and Taylor...so, what they do - draw strows, alternate based on odd and even days...
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The second book in the series delivers a fresh wave of adventures and memorable new characters. Outrageously funny, often to the point of pure absurdity, this is the kind of story you simply can’t put down until the very last page. Charlie, Taine, Tyler, Chloe, Matt, Simon, Mrs. Hartley, and the rest of the crew are back, this time facing dark and mischievous forces: witches determined to turn their town into a chaotic tangle of emotions and romantic disasters. Between a dangerously unpredictable espresso machine, a giant meatball, and other delightfully bizarre threats, the stakes are as ridiculous as they are entertaining. While our heroes may manage to survive with their bodies and souls intact, the real question lingers - what will become of their hearts?
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This was a rather bittersweet ending. Are you ever going to resolve this triangle, or will they stay miserable forever? 🤔
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This was very popular sitcom in ex yu...even today!😂 Oh, I like the comedy of errors...and irony in painting ignorance of the nobles...
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First a dangerous espresso machine, then a giant meatball… this is a whole menu of disasters! 😁
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Messina - as in Sicily?! I thought they’d already reached Palestine… so there’s more sailing?
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Bringing Up Himbo, Part Three of Three
Cane23 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bringing Up Himbo, Part Three of Three
Finn is someone Ian needed more than the fellowship. So, he got the consolation prize… and a man! Not bad - not bad at all! 😁 -
Daniel believes he is longing for Malik, but what he’s actually longing for is the unrepeatable state that Malik unlocked. The first experience with Malik wasn’t just sex, dominance or chemistry...it was the collapse of Daniel’s old identity and that can only happen once in that form. You can be reborn…but you cannot be reborn into the same birth again! Even if Malik walked into the room in the final scene - the outcome would not be the same. Because Daniel is no longer the man he was - the shock is gone, the unknown is gone and the “firstness” is gone. And firstness is doing enormous work in that original encounter. So instead of revelation, we’d likely get - comparison, and comparison kills transcendence. It would be “a bad sequel to a genius movie” because the original works partly because it was unexpected, total, irreversible - a sequel tries to reproduce the effect consciously. That shift, from experience to intention almost always degrades it. For Daniel, that would mean...instead of being taken - he would be waiting for something to happen and instead of surrender - anticipation and evaluation. So, even Malik could become insufficient...which is terrifying. For sure, sex would be intense, meaningful...even destabilizing again, but it would not be identity-breaking in the same way - it would be a different experience. Daniel’s tragedy is that he doesn’t want a different experience - he wants that exact one! What Daniel, actually, misunderstands - he thinks Malik is source of the feeling. But the story shows the feeling came from a specific alignment of conditions as vulnerability, surprise, being seen, surrender, timing, psychological readiness...Malik was the catalyst, not the entire equation. Daniel is now chasing Malik through other bodies and... fails. He's imagining Malik which is... partial relief, but if he finds Malik again that would be most likely be new kind of failure! So, he is trapped in an impossible loop - what he wants cannot be recreated, but he doesn’t yet understand that What fulfilled Daniel most in the chapter was not sex, domination or intensity, but unconscious, unperformed closeness with Alec, which is the opposite of what he’s chasing at the end. Therefore, the deeper truth might be - Malik opened the door, but Malik is not the destination!
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Bringing Up Himbo, Part One of Three
Cane23 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bringing Up Himbo, Part One of Three
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Chapter 7 - Whose home is it?
Cane23 commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Whose home is it?
Calm before the storm...Call me Natasha - Natasha Storm! 😁- 20 comments
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Each of them went to confront the witch without a thought-out plan - basically walking in just to get captured. What was the point? Tyler, Taine, and Charlie...an unholy trinity whose greatest enemies are themselves. So much wasted intelligence… okay, and some muscle too! 😁
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Lloyd’s a pleasant surprise. Based on his earlier descriptions, I thought of him as a weak link - someone Ser Val took pity on, good only for domestic jobs. It seems there are many more talents hidden in that boy.
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There was a TV show on Christmas - At Tea with Judi Dench, where her guest was Kenneth Branagh. At one point, he offered a beautiful insight: “When we’re lacking words, there’s always poetry to help.” I’d add a few philosophers to that thought as well… so here’s Nietzsche again, for my friends: “Ultimately, it is the desire, not the desired, that we love.”
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Combined with guilt over Charlie, it looks like Taine wasn’t only running toward Tyler-he was also running away from Charlie. If only that could solve the mess of the shared bedroom and switched bodies! 🤪
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Tactics as old as time - how to defeat your enemy? Dehumanize them. After all, killing rats is not the same as killing men. Rats are pests; they’re disposable, they’re seen as disgusting. Killing humans, even those labeled as infidels, always brings some moral dilemma.
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Is this what you're looking for? https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&opi=89978449&url=https://www.tarheelwriter.com/offline-stories/CarrotsandCeleryPart1.pdf&ved=2ahUKEwj2y-2Ct8CTAxXlHhAIHYMSFI4QFnoECB4QAQ&usg=AOvVaw1-5QYGHECVqm-BPHlPhred
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Radoslav is a Slavic name, but this part of the Balkans was Eastern Orthodox, not among the nations that participated in the Crusades - especially after the barbarian conquest of Constantinople by the Venetians during their journey to the Holy Land in 1204. Nevertheless, some northern Slavic tribes, such as those in Bohemia (modern-day Czechia), might have participated.
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You're not going to make it easy for them, are you? Demons and witches are nothing compared to emotions… and they have eternity to dramatize over it.
