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  1. Cane23

    Chapter 17

    I agree, I don’t think there are any limits. We’re talking about people willing to watch a live-streamed suicide!
  2. PLUSEQUALS
  3. Cane23

    Chapter 5

    I loved the drama studio scene. Both guys are so vulnerable - so touching, emotional, heartwarming, and chaotic. Chaos is everywhere, and the chapter is funny and messy… but that scene is beautiful. It seems like Matt is starting to come around to his feelings for Simon/Tyler. Does that mean his spells are broken?! I really like Tyler’s maturity and confidence. Even if he’s not under the spells, I appreciate that he doesn’t have outbursts of jealousy and that he shows understanding for Charlie and Tain’s “situation.” Oh, and I do like his kinky side! 😁
  4. Cane23

    Chapter 17

    After so much frustration, finally a chapter that gives us (and the guys) a small drop of hope. They are moving forward…
  5. I like Cooper’s self-confidence; it’s so refreshing to see a boy with attitude who doesn’t fear saying the truth. He might not be aware of his physical presence, but he radiates a confidence that makes him very attractive… Garrett and Brian see it 😉
  6. I suppose it’s because Brian ghosted him for all those years. You can’t communicate with someone who doesn’t want to. And now, can he pretend nothing happened and move on? I don’t think so. It’s up to Brian to clean up and fix what was broken.
  7. Cane23

    Noose

    On this side of the veil, all the energies seem to be more powerful and affect Alpha more than anything beyond his lands. Both the positive effect of being on his soil and the curse are fighting within him, tearing him apart. How are his mates going to help him?!
  8. A textbook example of miscommunication. One is overthinking, while the other isn’t thinking enough - assuming the other should be a mind reader or something. Let’s see how it’s going to resolve…
  9. Cane23

    Chapter 4

    Looking at how bizarre this situation is, one has to wonder about Charlie and Taine's intimate experience - was it sex or masturbation?! 🤪
  10. Cane23

    Chapter 4

  11. Would you like a regular temperature year-round or do you like your seasons? I like all four seasons and enjoy the beauty of each of them. Do you wear sunscreen regularly? What does “regularly” mean? Well, of course during the summer, at the beach… As I’m a ginger with freckles, my skin is sun-sensitive and burns easily. Did you watch any TV or movies yesterday? Not much, I’ve mostly been a GA fan lately. Do you own any old paperbacks or hardcover books still? Of course - a full library! Do you ever read them, or are you a digital kind of person now? Both. What is the last book, on paper, that you read? Arthur and George by Julian Barnes
  12. I just love how you’re breaking the clichés in your stories. There are no pre-specified roles...who’s top and who’s bottom, who’s dominant and who’s submissive. The fighter with more muscles is supposed to be one thing, and the nerdy, lean journalist another… but none of that applies here. It’s just two guys enjoying what they like in sex without any prejudices!
  13. Cane23

    Chapter 16

    The problem with selling your soul is what you become after it’s been amputated. Tim has played well and won against the Blue Archivist, eventually becoming the One. Now the stakes are higher - and so are the players. What I’m really afraid of is that there’s no way out. Winning the game at this level doesn’t mean Tim is free; it means the GM has failed...and Tim takes his place. I so, so hope I’m wrong…
  14. Cane23

    Chapter 16

    “Faustian” is definitely the right word. On the other hand, it seems that Tim has come to the conclusion that the only way to win this game is to play it. You can’t win from the outside - you have to be inside the game… like some sort of not-so-funny and very twisted Jumanji!
  15. Beauty and the Beast - I like it! 😁
  16. What a magnificent liberation! We have witnessed a quiet, almost surgical dismantling of a false self. Layer by layer - the hallway, the garden, the cigarette, the conversation, the laughter, the body. By the time we reach the intimacy, it doesn’t feel sudden or gratuitous...it feels inevitable, almost necessary, like the final step in a process that began the moment the door was locked on him. This chapter shows the courage to stop performing and allow yourself to be seen - fully, messily, physically, truthfully. The real liberation isn’t that Daniel sleeps with Max, it’s that, for the first time, he doesn’t abandon himself in the process of being with someone. Malik and Max are not just two encounters - they are two stages of the same psychological process. With Malik, Daniel is awakened and with Max, Daniel is integrated. What happens with Malik is destabilizing. Malik takes control, leads, dominates - not in a cheap power sense, but in a way that overrides Daniel’s Persona completely. Daniel doesn’t choose himself there...he is taken to himself. With Max, everything shifts - Daniel is no longer being pulled into truth...he is stepping into it. The key difference isn’t just that he’s physically “top” - it’s what that represents psychologically - he initiates, directs...allows himself to want and act on that wanting. This is no longer about surrendering control to discover something hidden - this is about claiming what was discovered. So, it’s not about domination, because domination would still be a structure, a performance, just inverted. What happens instead is mutuality with responsiveness and presence. Even when the encounter becomes rougher, it’s not about power over Max - it’s about power finally flowing through Daniel without suppression. And of course, back to Jung - with Malik, Daniel experiences his Shadow. With Max, Daniel becomes whole enough to include it. Malik opens the locked room. Max walks Daniel inside and lets him realize - the room was never something to be afraid of, it was the only place in him that was actually alive. Finally...Nora. She isn’t erased; she's not replaced either... she is suspended. That locked door says it’s her boundary, but it’s also the end of their shared illusion. For the first time, neither of them is performing the marriage. She has begun her own movement (the threesome suggestion, reading Three Women, testing desire), but she hasn’t crossed into embodied truth the way Daniel now has. Daniel’s liberation doesn’t automatically include Nora, actually - it may make their previous version of love impossible to return to. What held them together was control, mutual performance, shared expectations...and Daniel has just stepped outside all three. Nora is left at the door Daniel didn’t knock on, and the story is now asking whether that door can ever be opened again or whether it was always meant to stay closed.
  17. Cane23

    Chapter 3

    Putting it that way, we can understand Charlie freaking out a bit… Looking at each other is probably like watching yourself in a mirror - except the reflection isn’t you anymore. It’s so weird that even Matt’s explanation of who is who becomes a confusing mess.
  18. I was thinking about how mature and well-thought-out Martin’s approach is to his son moving in with his boyfriend. Then again, I shouldn’t be surprised - Martin is a psychologist, and his behavior, even with all the overwhelming news, has been well balanced and measured. His wife may have made him seem invisible, but obviously leadership is in his genes, combined with the good upbringing his parents gave him.
  19. Cane23

    Chapter 3

    What’s that all about...Tyler’s tea obsession?! And Charlie sat in the corner, pretending to read Marcus Aurelius, trying very hard not to think about Lilith. While he was, of course, secretly texting her behind the book, and sending her pictures of his junk from his saved “BAIT” folder, kept for just such purposes. Some things never change… even if the body has changed! By the way, does it mean Charlie is satisfied with his new (Taine’s old) “equipment”? 😉
  20. Cane23

    Chapter 15

    And now, ladies and gentlemen, meet the true hero of this story: Ben Crowley!
  21. Cane23

    Chapter 2

    How did Matt and the original Charlie (the jerk) even become best friends in the first place? They’re so different - Matt seems like the kind of person Charlie would’ve bullied back then.
  22. Cane23

    Chapter 2

    Hm, is our Charlie boy going to be heartbroken for the first time?! 💔 Is Lilith coming back as “Revenge of the Harpies”?
  23. Cane23

    Chapter 2

    After this chapter, I'm wondering - is he demon...or cupid...or demon-cupid?! 😁 Well… it seems like an everyday routine in Mrs. Hartley’s life these days…
  24. Cane23

    Chapter 14

    There was a threat parents used in the past in my country, desperate to discipline their children: “I’ll commit a crime and go to jail - at least I’ll get some rest there.” Something tells me Justin might feel that way! 😁
  25. Cane23

    Chapter 14

    Justin did what he thought was the only way out. It might have been reckless, but at least he exposed the scale and capabilities of GM. Saving Sam is a small victory. Tim was right, but his strategy doesn’t work either - too defensive and too focused on survival, until someone like Sam decides to end it permanently. This is not a way to win this game; something has to change.
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