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I suppose Danny will have to heal somebody to prove he's not 'just' ordinary human! I love the tension and cannot wait next Sunday!

Maybe mother-in-law has such a dangerous weapon in her kitchen?! 🤔

Funny but, no way: Alexander chuckled. “You and your vivid imagination, Lynton. I wouldn’t let others stare at your naked ass, though. As much as shock value has its perks, your nudity is off-limits for anyone else.” And surgeon means it, seriouselly!

I just hope that, till the end of the story, Lyn will be able to see himself through Alexander's eyes! 🤞

He does...until he doesn't...and then it's going to be what @Calvin says!

Chris, you're the worst!!!! 🤣😂🤣 But what a nice farewell you came up with!

For sure he did but, not out of malice, more out of ignorance and habit!

Yes, wake up might be quite dramatic! I'm sure that the guys who will leave the resort are not going to be the same guys who came! 😉

Yes, bunch of guys, choosing plot over sex - outrageous!

Absolutely agree! In some of the previous chapters I was comparing Dumas' characters to @Laura S. Fox's characters. Closest to d'Artagnan is, actually, Lyn. Does introducing Luke as d'Artagnan undeline Brad's literature ignorance or there's some hidden meaning in it?! If Luke is Lyn's "replacement", why is he so much Brad like?!

Sunscreen, swim shirt, avoiding the peak uv hours but still...my forehead is red as traffic light!

No tan for gingers, only skin burn!!! 😭 Remember the moment of reunion when Alexander call Brad out about (not)reading... And all the homeworks and projects Lyn did for him... 🤪

There's no point having a church once they win the war! Maybe some reformed church to worship Cian, with services as performance for the masses!

There's been a subtle role reversal in volleyball scene. Have you noticed that Lyn didn't show his usual jealosy when Brad announced he will play with Luke?! But then, Brad reacts as a child whose toy has been taken from him! Btw, his choice of words is something I have to think about for my analyses... There's many interesting things in this chapter to think about... Luke, colledge Brad 'clone'. What kind of mirror he is going to be for Lyn?! Lyn and Alexander - fantastically synchronized...the way they complement each other make me think - did they play together before?! Than, there's Brad insecurity we see for the first time... It is not a chess match...Why chess - because it is the game of the intelligent and, Alexander and Lyn are the smart ones (unlike Brad). Very competitive too... Greetings from Aegean Sea guys, two more days and going back home.

When it comes to @Robert Hugill, you know there's gonna be naked buts and underweare fetish!

That's how I saw it too. I think it is brave to touch this topic. Authors' mission is not just to entartain readers, it is ok to push borders, shake us or even makes us uncomfortable! After all, this is something that nobody should be comfortable with! Finally, I've read some serious violence and abuse stories here at GA. Comparing to them this story is not exception.

Third reading which means this story is definetely my favorite SA competition story this year. As I've already said - I like good reunion stories and I like second chances too. Maybe because they are so rare in real life. This story looks finished but I would like to read some nice Epilog!

Thanx, not sure we're staying at the same places but, if we cross the roads, I'll send your greetings!

Greetings from the Aegean Sea!

I've got impression that aliens were digging deeper in subconscious to get the picture... But, it would be interesting to know, how would somebody else see us! 😁

Too bad Kieran and Thalion are in some sort of magic induced coma! I can immagine situation where Rory and Garran, covered with blod, mud and sweat are arriving to rescue their lovers...only to find them enjoy some massage and spa treatment, surrounded by food, drink, flowes and music from harph!

Almost done. I have to go back to 'war story' as my 'vacation mode' brain cannot handle two war stories at once!

Great - Rory, the badass king! One villain down - finally! Thalion - a diva...that's surprise (or maybe not )!

I'm shocked!!! Bravo SA!

When a life turns into one big mess... Nevertheless, what doesn't kill you - makes you stronger...and Tim, certanly, ends up stronger at the end of the story. I would like to read more about Tim and his future... Great tale SA!