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Seems amazing, and it is true. The interest from one you're infatuated with can do wonders with your evenings. But if you realize you've been given that power by another.... it's a responsibility as well. If you've got a soul!
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Things have gotten back on track. The guys may have switched places slightly due to circumstances. I like it when the pace quickens and we get back into it like this!
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More info about the corner of the world they're in could always be helpful too. Barghast hasn't come out fully as a character yet. His possessive take on Crowe and simple domination of foes is fun so far!
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Excellent fight those two had. Thoughts vs what was said I'm sure until the pain inflicted made it all come out. & the wisdom of those kids when it happens... they keep occupied. Wow, they do recognize they're loved!
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The ideas of what the future holds for this Obsidian Order? Whatever they were are now shattered. Lysander, mostly without knowledge of it is now the most powerful being. While most are thinking of him being malevolent, he's got no idea. Neither do I at this point. Is it too early to ask for an encore!!!
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And the name of the guy they need has already cropped up. Yani. Peter deduced the cameras needed connectivity to work and that seems to be their only way out of the fancy tomb.
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Shhh, Don't tell @Inkognito but I heard Some Guy Tell another that this story will be a barn burner!
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Seems like everything is primed for a journey. Can't wait to see what these two will get into and hopefully conquer the bad stuff that comes their way.
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The man is definitely a dramatic one. Not in a nellie way, but powerfully!
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Nooo, he's only an imaginary politician. Not a real one!
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This is such an interesting story, hints to the medieval, unique spiritual tones. Good vs bad obviously a tenant to this as well. Then look again, love your brother is shown in spades or twin o’rre! It might be more!
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My first thoughts? Andrew pulled off a good show in this chapter. Knowing his Plan A might not work Plan B was already baked into his exit. Poor pitiful Silas has gotten really frustrated with the inferior person he was exposed by! Got to back and read how many of y'all had the same conclusion. This was a good ride, like a new roller coaster on opening day!
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Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
J J commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
If it weren't for his good looks as described here.. I wouldn't give him the time of day!! But Jack knows big bad wants him. You and I could feel it too. It's not like normal folks are totally devoid of esp so we can not feel that kind of thing. Positive or negative we can tell!- 25 comments
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Crap, all of those hits to his head will hurt for a week. @Inkognito has the cliffhangers down pat!
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The deadly serious Andrew collided with pa-pere later on. First parts have been covered well here. Last few paragraphs were pure "Aaww"
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That was pretty intense, with water being the most powerful force on the planet. Usually takes eons, but like this? Minutes. Wonder where Papi is? Think we'll find out after the next scene change!
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Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
J J commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
Dang chihuahuas aren't even real rodents- 25 comments
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Dang, step-dad-mercs will get him though.
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Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
J J commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
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Yes, I like this action packed story already. They might be mercs but it was the heartwarming part of the journal that changed their minds. Well that and their internal Vincent radars got tweaked.
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Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
J J commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Echoes of the Ender
Good tale so far. Definitely did not get the flashlight to see where the 50 footer just fell in the woods behind me! Got five tiers of land here, only one has come down on this one, at neighbors. Know the ones close to me are healthy. But I do use a Gandolf sized staff to check the ground before I step there 🤠. Think even these quasi human guys are careful where they step now! -
Chapter 1: Shadows and secrets!
J J commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Shadows and secrets!
Not just the rich guys. The pious also. Coming up on five years and my absolutely evil xunc and xbro? 90% of everything I've owned since the 1960s is gone, Living out of boxes since 2020 after I did all the work. Told realtors to get lost got 100k more for Mom's house than they said I would... sold it myself. Gone the first day of showing. My furniture gone blankets, towels curtains gone 10k stereo gone, kitchen stuff including a great fridge gone, I re bought three or four pieces but not as nice stainless. Japanes knives$1k+ gone. Evil is out there, really bad folks. We'd never be good enough for them, f 'em. -
Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
J J commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Jack In the Box, Jack Out of the Box
I think Jack's demeanor will be changing a lot very soon like in the morning. Can also imagine an extremely grouchy alpha for a couple of days until the stud and the field mouse corner him!- 25 comments
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I'll say it again. T. Lydon has lots of imagination stored in his noggin. Thanks for sharing some of it with us!
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Knarley scene. Hope none of the team caught the bug. Maybe Dymtro gets cleaned up and we'll soon.
