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Yes I am! I'm way back 2/3rds through "Breach" right now. Re-reading all that I had previously to familiarize myself with Carter, Andrew, Brody, Lisa and all the crew. You've painted an extraordinary couple who seem to live the lives of three times the years they have already at the point I'm at. Outstanding Mr. Lydon!
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Disguised by Mr. Poignet as a shifter rom-com this is actually a lot more. Had me searching for Big... a couple times when the author took some time off! Setting is curiously in the now and long in the past. Hints towards the mythical. Two main characters, one knowing his path in life the other absolutely lost. You can see as we realize that dynamic is changing their feelings are also. The ensemble of this cast is folded into the story like preparing a delicate dough! You reeled me in and kept the line tight Jack! Good Entertainment. Great Storytelling.
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Thank You @Laura S. Fox. This story even when I have to wince, is written so well. Fresh with the age old good guy vs bad guy story, yet a lot more. Emotion inducing across the full range of them now, but I don't feel hopelessness! Not even now!
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Alright, WOW! I've had a bad week too and just now logged into the site to read this one. Shocked that not one of you has thought of the angle I'm headed towards! S&M has two sides to it, so a show would also! If the bad guys are onto Hudson what better specimen do they have to be the S side of the show!! Our beloved Otis does have MacGyver tendencies doesn't he? An enraged Hudson is one thing, an enraged Otis is something that would have that big element of surprise added to it!
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He's gotten his power now!
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So... Justin learns more about what's to happen. Sad about learning he'll lose Taryn, he denies it. Then immediately it seems the "bad guys" are back.
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Don't like soren. Know it's written into the character, doesn't matter though.
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I had followed this, and got the "E" today. I've been so busy and reading some fantasy/scifi stuff that I just re-read this and wholeheartedly agree with these guys Going to binge and try to get through to the new chapter tonight. Glad you are doing well enough to add to this!!
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From Justin wanting, almost needing to having Comicality in his life. Switch over to Taryn seeing for the first time the actual threat it is to Justin just to be THE mimic.
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Otis flipped Hudson out!! He was sooo... that he said it! Otis was thinking that earlier on, or maybe it was just lust. Nice break from the dramatic scenes at the club.
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And... a decade later this is still an exciting novel. Haven't commented in a while but the complexities of Justin are bound to come to the attention of everyone soon.
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Glad you enjoyed it @Headstall ! That LP is good in my opinion, even though I'm mostly a hard rock fan. "Redwing" is their most polished I think, they played all over my hometown in the mid 70s when my facial stubble could get me into places I wasn't supposed to be! Now: Encore! Encore!
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Just gotta keep dancin' Like most music. Can only dance to a few bands... ^^^, ZZ, UFO, Fabulous T-Birds and a couple by Zep. Yep I'm an old ....
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@Comicality, your imagination is just exceptional! The depth of info about these characters is... superlatives don't cut it here. Thanks!
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Yea this episode pulls at the heartstrings... first one way and then the other! Wonderful storytelling @Comicality
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How true! It always did in the comic books.
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The dynamics between the kids is coming into view.
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I too can relate to this pain Justin has all to well. as well as a couple posters above. Hope all is better for y'all now. I'm re-reading these as it's Jan `24 now and this is one great novel!
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A lot of scenes in this one. And they will all be elaborated on I'm sure. Otis? A natural marksman? That might come in handy with the big villain out in the open now. And Jackie's butt, how I love almost mature guys in good shape with stamina! Almost as much as TD&H like Hudson.
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Not a sad ending, but I'll miss them nonetheless (Think that's an outlawed word now) Love all around like a fairy tale too! Glad I found the terrific prequals, or I'd be sad! 🍺Cheers to your latest accomplishment!
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Wow! This story has it all. Love. Though thought unrequited. Hard work to no avail. Toil, trouble, family jerks and tragedy. An almost ethereal respite from the tragedy. Admission from both sides of a love long unspoken of. Growth, passion and a moral of the story included that most language arts teachers would agree with (unless prejudiced). They always said it was integral to any story. All the while the author uses seemingly simple words to portray the images and characters of this story so as I read it I felt as if I knew these guys and felt their emotions. That's Entertainment!
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Wow! This is a special story @Headstall. Your writing style brings the entranced reader into it... like we're back in time right there with them! Think a lot recognize this and I might be in the right frame of mind tonight to expound upon it!
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Great story and characters @Headstall !! Bearpaw is close to over and I decided to do some digging into your old west! They finally got into it and it seems like true love for this pair!
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I can see Otis growing up some. At the same time, I'm wondering if Hudson is being domesticated slightly! Or just really falling for Otis! Jackie is the wild card here and now.
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The new rapport between jubal and Lucas is what everyone has said it is... It's beautiful. Reid caring about them the way he does, It will be like family on the east side there! Thanks for this chapter @Headstall I'd ask that you not leave us high and dry and explore these interesting Bearpaw characters even more.
