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I haven't heard anything implicit of Will knowing of El coyote and Xue! Nevertheless, glad that she was there with the kids and again fascinated by Jacob's acute awareness.
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Yep. And he does seem capable.
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Interesting, Sawyer's father seems to have been swayed by the courage & the declaration of love by Theo. It might have taken all night from his physical description. Also Theo standing up to the wife could have helped. The man called him son, the morning after that uncomfortable conversation. Father Sawyer is a good guy also.
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C`mon Aaron, got to want to get back to Nathaniel enough to beat Antonio.
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Yep, the spaghetti westerns he and Sergio? made are a true form of timeless art! Now, Elias needs to stop getting hauled off. Theo has to get Jean and others to go and get him back.
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I'm with all of those that like Brody's version of almost crass common sense. It is common sense but leans his unique way. & El Coyote? Sophisicated elegance met brutal testosterone with this guy.
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Wow, the turmoil that Will's going through is tough to even read about. But we already know what's going on he doesn't know quite as much. Seems Ned threw him for a loop like a good roller coaster!
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Cool chapter, the psy-ops worked well. I hope they can get more ammo for the Hotchkiss, they might need it later on.
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They'll frazzle his nerves, he will be distracted by Jack. Sounds good. Theo does have the mind of a tactician!
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I have to admit that we weren't taught histories of other allies almost at all. This was in the early 70s when real teachers were in employed here. We were taught medieval history and I still don't recognize the reasoning of if..... except we seemed to follow some of those same mistakes by the idjets in DC. Another good chapter, you're a machine Mr. Lydon
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Perfect When You Touch Me
J J commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Perfect When You Touch Me
Really liked how Vince got Theo so frustrated! Gotta be a crazy future coming since Jack saw them as a married throuple in his cards. -
Man, Theo did a hell of a job. Got the bad guys to go after those accountants, used that cannon of a rifle to save his guy. `Atta Boy!
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Hope it is the new, young Sheriff!
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We can only hope for Andrew, one of our favorite characters!!
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Seems so aka... the fau-like sob said permanent damage, smith said he didn't care. Like world class comic villains, except moreso like who I eluded to above. From unc or what I call Bable Hill he was actually linked to that place back before h I v targeted us.
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I've read and loved other stories by @Mrsgnomie. They are all written as of the author was truly there and an unspoken part in them. This love story is a complex time line of friends over the years. Insecurity, long held lust almost to a state of worship and heartbreak. Brothers with a true responsability felt towards each other. It did tear me up a couple times. Be warned, have some time to spare. These gifts from this author are hard to put down. You'll want to enjoy the others too!
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Righteous anger and deeds. The unknowns that will transpire when Will meets his doppelganger of a son. The touching scene of Peter & West. Plus the poignant, heart wrenching moments of Will's "conversation" with the crayon art slipped into the top-secret documents. Lisa? Both his kids and polar opposite dad shifting his dangerous method of operation as of late. Saving his soul possibly. Exciting chapter.
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Nooo, not drags! Haven't been to a Sunday afternoon Tea Party in 40 yrs. Talked to one Southern Belle for a half hour... was startled with knowledge. Found a musky kid in a harness, yep summer in the south, and left. If she/he/it had what I wanted I'd have to have been straight. Was that a Queen song? Ohhhh Laa... Think so, it was Sunday afternoon also.🤠 https://vimeo.com/319421512?fl=pl&fe=sh Atlanta Backstreet Rocked Orlando Eagle..lost my Italian when he worked there Charlotte's Tags & Brass Rail Rolled in the summer!
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Dang boss, I was trying to be PC.......... F it. It was more than my BP that.....
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That's Iglesias? @Seraph28 Damn, he's one fine Spaniard but that must have been years ago. Love the characters Banderes plays. But that one made my BP go up !!
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WOOF! What a supreme mess. El Coyote brings in loads of characters whenever he shows! He also stands a better chance of retrieving Andrew than anyone else.
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Grew up there, but I'm in VA near the BRP in the boondocks across from a lake. Mansions on the water 1k sq ft of brick in the woods you cannot see is mine on the other side. Cheers to another very good chapter... and yeah you are the author I mentioned above!
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Well from just N of NC? It's snowing on my mtn again tonight. Nothing like what Terrence & Phillip get up there. Truly believe that fake news is everywhere now. Propaganda & lies have been a weapon of discourse for centuries. Also think the Don likes to tweak the ones that are ripping us off. That 51 bit was all hot air, never feasible for even one minute on so many different levels of life. Makes for a great story here though. My current favorite author knows how to weave a great tale! I was hoping it could be used to spring Andrew who is probably jonesing for that insidious chemical now!
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The boy isn't pulling any punches. He laid it down. "You're a terrible influence, Deputy Harding. A corrupting influence. And you own my hat, my shirt, and now my watch." "Someone has to keep you on your toes, Marshal," Theo retorted, leaning into the contact. “And what I’m after, I’ll win that too.” With Emeril's voice... "BAM"
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What a time to get dumped. And he's so messed up he forgot about his Marine corps toy drive fantasy. Never sign on the dotted line unless you've got years under your belt and there's no doubt you're married already or planning it!
