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  1. J J
    @jcdii You just have to come in a couple years later. I'm going through about 4 a week and just now up to this point. Fantastic story!
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    At Deke and Willie's age seeing that big fella knock a guy off his feet and through the door was something awesome for them. While engrossed with that Sarah came up with reins for Deacon. She was at the right place at the wrong time and Deacon made it known she didn't impress him! Ha!
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    Think Colbys buds see Deke is a threat to their trio or their survival. He was right about stating he felt unwelcome. They have got to work this out , especially after that soft landing.
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    The comments here are always a great read. Since I've been busy almost a month now. I'm not getting to the stories as quick as I did. My peers are spot on with their insights. So much so that they're above that really!
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    Wow. There's lots to take in in this episode. And I'm glad Hudson did at least get a message to Otis. Sure Otis will be able to sleep better now.
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    C'mon Now! Ya know we like hot men in uniforms? (so we can peel them off) And you have painted the image of Reid for all of us as just that... and with a level-head to boot!
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    Yes, they're talking about each other prior to and during their intimacy just makes me feel like I can remember the couple of really good mates I had. Fine tuning huh, the chapter flowed smoothly and just full of information each were gathering from the other!
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    Breaking Point

    J J commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Breaking Point

    Love this story! Hudson will think of something before Jackie comes out of his stupor! Only if he's got enough spunk left after Otis and his novice needs!
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    That's a lot to swallow, hahaha. Seriously, Colby has to lay it on the line now. Fascinating how the others were able to fight the coyotes. All in what's easily imaginable as life in the west several generations ago with the touch of the supernatural. If vampires are real and they would definitely be supernatural. And Colby is as fascinated with Dekes beauty as Deacon is with his?
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    Well, Deke made it inside the circle. He's getting closer to getting some also! Funny! He finds that spot at his collarbone arousing while we recognize that he almost got bit.
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    Children Of Sunset 9

    J J commented on Comicality's story chapter in Children Of Sunset 9

    So Deke went out of his comfort zone. Going to learn something soon I imagine.
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    Children Of Sunset 8

    J J commented on Comicality's story chapter in Children Of Sunset 8

    Deacon is struggling with it. Guess we'll find out if he follows through in the next episode. And since there's a bunch left I think he does!
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    Welcome Home Dennis

    J J commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Welcome Home Dennis

    The new ending is tame and I do like it. The last chapter that I thought was the conclusion was a shocker and it was thrilling! Well written either way, first ending was my fave @Lee Wilson!!
  14. J J
    There's a song I heard a lot a long time ago. It had a refrain in it that fits here. " What a Long, Strange Trip it's Been." It is a very cheerful song. This story has been a strange and wonderful dream of what should have been. 'snif! 'snif!
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    Children Of Sunset 5

    J J commented on Comicality's story chapter in Children Of Sunset 5

    I believe I mentioned the author's imaginative writing the other day in a prior episode? Could have mentioned creative and another long superlative. That would be detail that's on par with JRR Tolkien. The first book in the set it took me a month to get past the second chapter. Then it was 6 weeks to finish the first, second, third and fourth book! Yeah that detail. That gives the reader enough information to feel like they could actually be there. BRAVO!!
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    Hi @centexhairysub well I'm not sure hate is integral to any religion except one that I know of. Think it's the egos of ones who like to twist things to their own means.
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    Chapter 11

    J J commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 11

    How the heck do I get rid of that? Darn emoti whatever been trying for 5 minutes to delete it. I've deleted the whole post before deleting that thing. Aarrrggghh!
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    Chapter 11

    J J commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Informative. Guess all the chapters can't be as intense. This one was needed to get us to the next stage of the story. And yeah I think it was mentioned in there to Chris and Josh that they had a new daddy now!😍
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    Fell? Lucas had to make it happen like pulling teeth from a bulldog. This was a love story after all, this chapter had a lot of that emotion wrapped up in it! Encore! Encore! @Headstall
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    Children Of Sunset 1

    J J commented on Comicality's story chapter in Children Of Sunset 1

    Read the original GFD at a site I found before this one back in 2020. This does look interesting also! I really like the imaginative way you tell your stories Comicality. I'll check out more after I finish this one!
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    Chapter 10

    J J commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 10

    This was intense. And I had missed the previous chapter also. Been pretty busy lately. I know what I wish for, but it's a lot of fun finding out what's going to happen by reading it. Good suspense always means the movie watcher or the book reader might squirm a little bit!
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    Know I'm not the only one to notice the contact involved with Jubal fussin' over Lucas. Lucas noted it out loud, but did not state he knew exactly why Jubal was doing so. Even slight intimacy like this between those aware that the other cares about them can lead to more...
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    The vindications through karma to two homophobes in this episode were nice. So was the wrestling time, and taking care of that innocent kid.
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    Breaking the Chain

    J J commented on TeamStilinski's story chapter in Breaking the Chain

    Geeze, sex as warfare! Simon's getting more wild for sure.
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    C. All of the above!
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