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    Chapter 3

    J J commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Looks like something I can read about the next week or so. Need answers to questions raised in the two POVs already.
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    @Philippe that's a pretty good hypothesis. See you've one of those sneaky writers brain also!
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    Kitt will have to get it together or he will get fired. And get well quick too. Storyline mentioned help was coming from a third person soon. Hope it's soon enough.
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    Chapter 9

    J J commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Daayuum That sheriff sucks... probably. Hank riled up can be a monster😉and will Miller leave them alone after realizing he could get $ out of it?
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    D*mn the kid, as a bottom is an insatiable stud waiting to top! The back and forth banter between the couple is funny, love it. Did Rowan decide just to be decent with his mother? Or is he satis-f#cked-happy because of Elias and it's just spilling over! Whichever, it sure helped Camille at their bi weekly dinner.
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    Chapter 1

    J J commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks for this cheerful short-story!
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    This chapter is just sounding too realistic when added to all the priors. Makes my heart ache for both, `cause I've some similar memories.
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    "Kiln"

    J J commented on Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro's story chapter in "Kiln"

    Rowan blew up and emotionally let it all out here. He did know he crossed a line after shoving her. Camille shared what she knew to her old friend Elias. Made it easy on him 'cause she's got those eyes in the back of her head like mothers do. Except we all know it's from reflections off the fridge, and or a deducing sharp mind. She lets go of her mom wish for the boy. Then she reintroduces minimal responsability to him. Another great chapter!
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    Steve's supposed to be man. Knows what his shrimp-dick is for, but never knew what to do with his balls. Does not, nor never has known his own son. Waste. & the Mrs is beginning to see that clearly. Mrs Wellington might start to understand Matt more after that short statement he made. Not going to even try to figure who will find Kitt except for the two that already are looking out for him. Maybe Harbor counts as 3!
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    Delicious Hunger

    J J commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Delicious Hunger

    And they're getting close to mating. When they do will Jack be the big wolf, or the expected big Vince wolf?
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    Chapter 8

    J J commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Chapter 8

    The sheriff and Hank don't see eye to eye? Go figure. Has Hank lived through something similar? That would further explain his keen assessment of Jesse besides just knowing about skittish farm animals. Lots of questions, possible action soon definitely more chapters. I'm good.
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    @Jack Poignet No need bud. But if you do? Please keep this original version available. Don't need a Steven Wilson 40 yr remix. I had all the good Tull albums from 69 to 78 before xunc stole my 800 rock lps.The first release is true!
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    Seemed at one time @VBlew that Kitt thought he was protecting Matt somehow from his father. I too am waiting for him to reach out to Matt.
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    True Steve, and the author lays the story out slowly for us. So as it marinates the new chapters become more effective at reeling me in. Thanks @Tony S.
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    & here I am in disbelief, First read this when it was coming out. Didn't seem to comment & I loved this story. Pretty sure I messaged you then Jack. At 50 I wasn't too bad, at 63 almost think I'm losing it.😉
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    Man this chapter has it all. The vitriol towards the witches. Ray trying and somewhat successfully coming to terms with reality. Of course Timmy helps that by being so darned happy & joyful. That in turn gives Ray some utter wisdom to share in the great hall. Then for the grand finale here. Ray's love for Timmy shown with hugs and words brings up his first shift back to human since birth. Happy, Happy, Joy, Joy
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    After a cold night, it's lookin' up for Kitt!
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    The Fracture

    J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Fracture

    But "man" uses the words of the book written by men to do evil to those that disagree. They call it love but those of us on this side of the fence know it isn't. Next town is 1.5 hrs away. Don't think he can walk it, so the lake it is.
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    The Seasons Turn

    J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Seasons Turn

    Argh! It's excruciating the lengths these two go to, to not talk about things. You know what I mean. Love. Think that both have let that proclamation slip out recently. Good Story. Thinking back, I probably would dodged it at that age also.
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    Yep, Kitts Dad is a prick in the first degree. Ya think years of dancing around their "problem" could be broken by hormones in high gear? Juniors, think mine went into a frenzy two years before that. Even if both are late with their beards, might be time to fess up.
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    Into Sophomore Year

    J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Into Sophomore Year

    "Lark's Tongue in Aspic" has been playing here. The last couple of chapters? The anxious feelings, the love... not shared yet. It has fit into the music not the lyrics but the notes.🤟
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    Cracks in the Cold

    J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Cracks in the Cold

    They're getting near to discussing this like adults. Each has felt the pain of what they had slipping away. Good writing @Tony S.
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    Prologue

    J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Prologue

    There's the setup, Sounds interesting, I'll try the following few!
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    Chapter 7

    J J commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Chapter 7

    & we will find out soon what his back story is. Redlining, grounding... Hank does enjoy bringing Jesse back into operational specifications.
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    "Shadowplay"

    J J commented on Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro's story chapter in "Shadowplay"

    Camille's an intelligent, persevering lady. She's unfolded everything with knowledge and a few glances. Yea hickies are easy, but she's put way more than that together. That boy is hongry like the old hongry Jack commercials! 🤠
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