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Cool, is there something in Greg's lineage that they will find?
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And "amazing" it was. To see them simultaneously working. Far removed from each other trying to close the gap left between!
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Matt’s Morning After the Game
J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Matt’s Morning After the Game
Anything is still possible. In the back of my mind I still ponder an idea someone had earlier on. That Kitts dad might be Tom's wayward child 😱 -
Matt’s Morning After the Game
J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Matt’s Morning After the Game
Look from another angle if you will. Kitt is pretty humble and still reeling every single day with having to deal with the basics of survival. Yes he made a quick, harsh decision to try to save his soul. Perhaps he feels so indebted to his few new friends that he doesn't want to ask for to much. As in borrowing a phone to reach into the recent past. He's sensitive, I could see that being so. Still has not gotten past the heartache of, nor the fears induced by the betrayal shown him by his own parents. Even an outwardly "normal" type that has an overload of testosterone might take a hit from it. Minors aren't adults yet. At least he doesn't appear to be a child here, that's another subject entirely. -
It's the extra tid-bits that differentiate a genres stories. So when your effort is to show us how we all differ by showing glimpses into the characters. I don't remember how this ended up... It's three years later, and I jumped in with both feet and this series is still being added to now. 🥃 Good job with the longevity that improves with each chapter! @Justin4Fun
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Matt’s Morning After the Game
J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Matt’s Morning After the Game
& Matts folks knew wtf gave him that "rocket fuel" to play like that the next morning. Didn't even take two guesses to make Matt goofy all over again!😊 -
@Tony S. I was unprepared to find Kitt talking with his parents already. Glad he chose to stand his ground, sorry his folks didn't think about this before throwing him away like they did. No tune tonight, Gov't Mule and their raunchy guitar with Warren's singing don't fit. 😎
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Yea I know @Philippe I missed out on a hot wrestler I nicknamed knothead. He was hardheaded but put his number in my senior year yearbook. Who's the bonehead now... me, and I miss cute as h$ll Scott.
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GO fuzzy @Modified Cub GO!
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I'll agree with the two above &... Been listening a lot to stuff similar to my stolen 800 pristine no noise, no scratches, no pops (ultrasound cleaner) always have been under a fine line (Shibata) needle, never a damaging elliptical. Animated cat grosses me out, but the voice, the lyrics❣️
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WOW! & to think Kitt thought his buddy Matt was straight, there were hints to the opposite a plenty!
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It's in the dreams with the wolf looking down on the pair below with the little ones around. Shifters meet you brother shifters!
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& Drake is a happy one to be "older than Shamus"😅🤣😂. You can tell they're old friends. With a sense of humor that anyone who "knows" him wouldn't argue with!!
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What a tease! I've forgotten, will find out soon again.
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We know he has not ever hidden his true self. Even so that's a good question!
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Steps Forward, Shadows Behind
J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Steps Forward, Shadows Behind
Oh Man... “He didn’t even order anything,” she continued softly. “Just a coffee he barely drank. He left that note with me in case you came back.”Kitt looked down at the number again, the ink slightly smudged. His vision blurred.Matt. Matt had been here. Matt had been looking for him from the very beginning. Those lines after the other parts of this chapter, sure did make my eyes not dry anymore! Did I mention that I love this particular story? @Tony S. For Kitts POS dad: As we always had to do except that one song the Punch Bros. do (I Blew Him Off) switch she to he!! -
And here I go with round two deja-vu! Read this one long ago, possibly before you had to sign in. Thank you for reminding me of this fantastic, downright wholesome fifties style sitcom. @Sherye Story Reader And thanks for you're writing it @Justin4Fun
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The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
J J commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
Tick, tock Both Kitt and his pop are taking steps towards some kind of reconciliation. Tick, tock Think besides keeping shelter this looks like his first attempt to better himself! Tick, tock & I will keep coming back until these two impressive young men are together in Riverbend hopefully! -
& You will start to see why this is one of my faves Sherye!
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Slum lords are from every tax bracket, each form, etc. They share that same need for control and desire to inflict dis- harmony and pain just like all that lust for power! Speaking of lust? How powerful it is in a young man? Yea we all know. These two have the love already, how long or after how many short visits will that factor kick in?
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Welcome @Walter231 Looks like you started out with a really good story. It's pulled me in, made me care about a few of the characters. Frustrated me, angered, also made me sigh with relief and warmth in my heart.
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Seasons effecting them? Having lived in several medium sized cities (CLT, ATL, MCO) . Spent a little time in two huge ones, (BOS, MIA) know full moons do mean more crazies are out. You could read about it in the paper before the advent of 24/7 news. Moon is more close in different seasons so why not? Plausible theory, hopefully no psychotic breaks though!
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It may be Mateo, he is trying. Kitt has been tough enough to survive that first week. Yea, he's had the occasional crutch that his new friends offered. But he is stuck emotionally, If he could be so determined in one aspect. Why not the other? Ya know how much that would help both of them. Just talking normally!
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Fun story. Thanks @irivera If punching your old best friend could make anyone wanted? Can you imagine what high school would be like! Didn't work for me. I already had and vice versa his big brother at the time until he went to college🙂
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I think both @weinerdog and you are spot on. Cooper messed him up five years ago with that short kiss!
