after months of lurking and leaving no feedback whatsoever (shame me >.>) i drop by to say: god, this guy surely knows how to write!
^^
plus he's one of the most fertile writers whose works i had the pleasure to read :] he not only writes good stories, he writes them fast! i dunno how he manages to do that, we can only be glad that he does :]
about the new chapters: yay for the budding relationship with jeremy :] michael deserves someone to love and love him back for all the effort he's making to remain "michael". and that's kinda a first for him, first love in far wider aspect than it usually is for "normal" teenagers. there weren't many ppl to love in young sinclair's life before, were there?
well, i say "love" even if the protagonist himself isn't sure it is it, but oh well i can beieve he'll reach the same conclusion, can't i? :>
(especially since it was obvious he longs for someone to love)
i totally adored the scene in which brandon went to michael's room and bed to comfort him and make him feel less lonely ^^= it shows that the bond is sth more than a simple master-slave chain and a fuel pomp for michael.
i could mention more, but to sum it up: great chapters, enjoy your reading :]
and the weekend ^^