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A sudden, shrill whistle snapped him out of his doze. Even before he had blinked twice, the whistle had become a bright buzz in his left ear, while his right ear was practically deaf. He was disoriented by the dim shadows around him, and he winced hard when he received two swift bumps in the ribs. Then his brain was awake. The shed. Max's warm breath brushed his cheek, probably whispering something to him, but he still heard nothing more than the buzzing. Instead, he recognized his sur
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The only world Chris knows is that of the hot dirty steel mill with its relentless pace and violent overseers. He is persuaded to escape, which unsurprisingly ends in disaster - and suddenly his world is a lonely farm, where he is met with contempt and distrust. The price he has to pay for running away is high... and what does he gain?
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I honestly admit I'm a pessimist, but I'm having this thought since a couple of chapters now. Everything is going too well. There is some minor (or major) disaster bound to happen soon. Exactly my thoughts.
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Saturday, March 1, 2025 (III)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Saturday, March 1, 2025 (III)
Very true. He even has this "suspect at a rape case" on his hand and although he was innocent, the media has a tendency to dig old stuff up and rip him apart. Bertie fake-Durham and his "experiment kit" might have some answers, but for now seems difficult to get a hold of them. Well, only Mrs. Stevenson and Vee heard Kellen use the "boypussy" so there's that... minor spoiler alert: not in this part of the series. ❤️😢 -
“That's disgusting.” Josy stared at the whiteboard in Vee and Harry's office, the coffee mug in her hand trembling. “I just hope we don't regret our second breakfast right away,” Harry muttered, emptying his own coffee. Kellen had fetched a big breakfast for the whole team, coffee variations included. He wiped chocolate crumbs from his muffin from his mouth and when he noticed my gaze, he gave me a tiny grim smile. I felt more out of place than ever, but I was in this all the
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For sure he would play with pretty words to convince everyone. Whether he would get physical towards others to make a point- maybe. Depends on how clearly he understood Remy's loyalty to Harlaney House in total. "Most of the truth" is a big word, because the only one knowing the full truth is Remy himself, but he's not telling even us. (He will, though, slowly...) But you are right, Remy is still not "strong" enough to get away from his big brother, so Marc will have to intervene sooner or later. Read this still half asleep at first and had to giggle like a maniac
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Remy's calm life has turned into a storm and he won't come out of it unscathed...
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With an uneasy feeling in his stomach, Remy reached the others standing outside the door to the party room. "What happened?" A rather pale Flavius gestured inside, and Remy raised his brows in surprise. All six girls lay naked and more or less intertwined on the couches, none stirring. "Before you ask or freak out, they're alive," Anduin remarked dryly. "You should watch them!" Not much was missing and Remy would have snapped at Flavius. "I know," came the embarrassed reply.
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Always out with your questions
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It wasn't a particularly good neighborhood, but good neighborhoods were rare in an industrial town like Westshire. At least he knew the streets here, though admittedly more by daylight, and he passed the bar, which was to be the meeting place, regularly. He parked in front of a hardware store that had long since closed for the night, of course, but whose owner he knew quite well by now. He could almost feel the bank bills he had stuffed well-distributed into all the pockets of his clothes a
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The Moral Right or Wrong Weighs Heavy
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in The Moral Right or Wrong Weighs Heavy
Setting the chapter already posted in "Another Time" as prologue it would be 6 chapters with the possibility to prolong... -
The Moral Right or Wrong Weighs Heavy
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in The Moral Right or Wrong Weighs Heavy
Now that you mention it, I actually have to see whether it gets mentioned or not. (The story is fully written since a while; but I can actually simply add a sentence or two.) Chris Steel himself has a tiny spin-off-story but I'm still debating whether to post it or not because it's anything but nice... The idea to this society I got after a discussion with a friend about the flimsy reasonings for slavery. Because: just look at how much shit in this world gets justified with religion. So yeah, I based all this on their religion. And yes, I wanted the world to be very close to ours in all the other prospects. -
Dante was sitting in the kitchen, holding onto a teacup. Mistress Alice had told him to sit there, and he had stuck to that all day, except for two trips to the bathroom. The tea was long cold by now, and although Dante's stomach had seen except breakfast merely a cup of tea sometime hours ago, he could not bring himself to drink the tea or take anything to eat. He had killed. A human. Not out of evil intent - the Great Mother save him! - but still... Mikey came in and Dante
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Absolutely. Here's to hope! We hear more about it later on, but: the society as such is not that rigid as you say, it's more certain movements within the religion, like the one Marc grew up in. A bond of bloody hands, muhahahaha *cough* sorry. Even here: more on it later Don't worry about that. Remy and his feelings are unstable and somewhat unreliable, at least when it comes to Anduin. It will get worse before it gets better... Could help in a lot of cases, no...
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Unfortunately, Anduin will stay with us till the end. Well, 98%. Somewhat. I didn't do the proper math.
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The kitchen looked like a battlefield. If the many food containers hadn't spoken for themselves, the red sauce which somehow seemed to have splattered all over the room probably would have really worried Remy. "It's just the hot bell pepper sauce," Cain sighed, emerging from behind the kitchen island, a rag in his hand. "Don't ask me how it happened. I don't know and I don't plan to ask the girls about it." "And why not? The kitchen is usually your sanctuary..." Remy took a big step ac
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For Dante's health it's definitely safer to go after his mistress, wandering alone through empty fields, than stay with Matthew who has a workshop full of tools to defend himself. This will be discussed later on No, it won't Quite right. Carolyn already trusted him with the knowledge of the gun and must be pleased to see it paying off. He's making himself valuable and having a value is always good. We hear more about him, but whatever will happen to him, it will be ugly.
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It is said when the Great Mother first mated with a human man, she prophesied that all of her children would have at least one flaw. Dante, the Warrior of Light, is in fact the only one of whom some say has no blemish at all, is truly a figure of light - for how else would he have received his title? However, in most of the stories focusing on him, and in which he protects people or his siblings, flaws are apparent, though perhaps not at first glance. A recurring theme in these same storie
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What can I say apart mea culpa? I would like to promise you some new content soon, but the next while is quite a busy one (my mom coming for a visit! ) and I'm not going to find much time. But. After the current chapter for a different story I'm writing on, it's the next on the list!
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Saturday, March 1, 2025 (II)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Saturday, March 1, 2025 (II)
Of course it's more fun that's why it's considered bad by the boring types We don't chose who or what we like, but we have to follow rules - including moral ones - to be able to function as society. And you just need to read the news, about all those adults coming forth after decades of suffering after they got abused as kids (keyword church, but just as an aside). It's not just destroying the innocence or sexuality, it destroys the whole future, the normalcy of life. Keep your fingers crossed for that! -
On the way to the QFPD, I wanted to know what I'd missed yesterday, but Kellen didn't have a real answer because he'd taken care of me and had only spoken briefly to Vee once. Inside the building itself, Officer Neal greeted us with a serious nod. “Cursebreaker, Special Inspector. You dug up quite something yesterday, the whole place is whispering.” I grimaced grimly. “As long as it stays whispers...” Kellen returned, almost warningly, and Neal smiled darkly. “If the wh
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I don't think otherwise she would be a successfull author and somewhat independent from her family's business and income. Well, in the children's home where Dante grew up he had to take care of the younger ones, it shows. And although he might struggle with the whole Frank-situation and his corresponding feelings, he does worry and care about him. Tom's motives are for now his own, but for sure he realized that staying on Dante's bad side won't accomplish anything and make only both their lifes harder. Being honest is a good start.
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"Would you have the courtesy to tell me why you've been walking around like a sleepwalker and hiding here in the bathroom for over an hour now?" Dante lowered his head instead of answering. "Henry looked like he was about to burst into tears, and Pa probably wouldn't be pleased if there was another work accident right away," Mistress Alice continued. She stepped up beside him, looked out into the darkness, and then put a hand on his arm. "Dante..." He sighed. The truth you don't w
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Saturday, March 1, 2025 (I)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Saturday, March 1, 2025 (I)
Aftermath of the stinger and its "antidote". Maybe foreshadowing. Maybe old trauma. As long as Kellen doesn't tell, we won't know, and Dust for sure won't ask. Valid opinion. We'll see more to confirm this and other stuff to show he's actually a good guy -
Saturday, March 1, 2025 (I)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Saturday, March 1, 2025 (I)
Would be more than awkward, if Kellen left, since this is his hotel room 😅 In general a complicated question. But slowly, slowly we will get some puzzle pieces on that. Might be Kellen simply mistook him in his mostly-asleep state for someone else. Or the nightmare actually included Dust, but that we won't know till Kellen tells us. We will get a possible answer next or second next chapter Well actually, back than, it was just a couple of days of working together. Their magic harmonized, yes, they had great sex, yes, but nothing more. For Kellen it surely meant not much, for Dust it was the best sex of his life and he's sabotaging himself by still thinking back on it.
