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Friday, February 28, 2025 (III)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, February 28, 2025 (III)
Like in the sense it was only a strong curse locking away Kellen's magic? Interesting thought, but would be a bit too easy Sooner or later we will get the guy and see what there is to him. At least one part of him is happy about the developments -
Kellen took two steps into the tunnel and swung the light around. “I don't see a switch.” I joined him in the narrow tunnel and instinctively ducked my head. At 1.82m, I'm certainly no giant, but the passageway was less than two meters high. I looked around magically, but didn't see anything either. “What have they done to the walls?” Vee wanted to know and stroked the smooth earth. “Either magically reworked or directly cut with magic,” Kellen replied, a little distracted as
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I've read an article about this not so long ago, about non-heterosexuality popping up concentrated in families. They are currently trying to find the reasons why. Apart that: great chapter. Can't wait for that amazing meal with Venetia and friends! And no, I didn't suspect anything from Vince. Quite surprised to be honest.
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@drsawzall, @centexhairysub This brotherhood is a religious thing. Every free-born man gets invited when reaching age 15. The vows and the tattoo are obligatory, the piercing is for the truly devoted. And Matt comes from a very pious family. But this tradition is dying (understandably) and skipping to the future: the next government will forbid this brotherhood, the upcoming elections will come up in present-time.
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Correct. Slave-born boys get either circumcised few days after birth or in a sort of ritual shortly before they get their first cage (around 11, mostly).
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"Are you nuts?" Tom stared at Matt, who looked up at him with wide eyes. "No, of course not." Matt lay there completely relaxed propped against the wall, hands clasped behind his head, while Tom squatted on his knees beside him. His ma always said he couldn't sit still for two minutes, but now he didn't move, just looked down at his friend. "You want to put a piercing in your dick!" "It goes with it." "No, it doesn't. My uncle doesn't have one, my grandpa doesn't have one, I
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Friday, February 28, 2025 (II)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, February 28, 2025 (II)
I haven't thought about this possibility before, but honestly... Well let's say there are better ways for Kellen to take care of Dust. And his grown-up-boy-bits -
An accident involving a truck at a major junction caused traffic chaos in the city and cost me a lot of time and nerves. While I took off my jacket, I told Vee about it, who grimaced sympathetically. I had barely finished when an officer brought Kellen to us. After a nod in Vee's direction, he said to me: “My ears are still ringing.” “At least they're still attached.” I still refused to feel sorry for him. Let him spend a day listening to what I was being told when it came to the co
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"What are you doing here?" Dante hissed, startled, and withdrew his hand from his pants. "What are you doing here?" he asked back, staring at Frank, who stood in the bathroom doorway with a towel around his hips, dripping wet. "I live here," he said dignified. "But not at this hour!" Dante's body screamed for relief, for Mistress Alice had known no other subject than underwear the entire way back, and he had a lot of animated images in his mind- he couldn't go down to the kitchen
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Friday, February 28, 2025 (I)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, February 28, 2025 (I)
Kellen has his moments and he will get a nice answer from Violet next chapter. You'll have to be a bit more patient I honestly haven't decided yet whether they are just a sort of connecting point between story I and II or if there comes more. Like, becoming friends with some of the crew? 🤔 No no, the name Danny is sacred Next chapter, new answers -
Kellen was on time, but the bag he placed on my desk looked more like a food order for a whole family. He unpacked two large to-go coffee mugs, an XXL chocolate muffin and a box with a cinnamon roll, before stacking four large sandwiches on the side. “You never know,” he explained in response to my skeptical look. “Thank you,” I said simply as he pushed my coffee and the cinnamon roll towards me. Smiling, he nodded and took a bite of his muffin, only then did he sit down and immedi
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The question is always, what they could do about it. Therese/Carolyn can neither get rid of Claire/Brittney, nor Anduin/Tom/Flynn. Yupp. Long term concern, but yes, keep that in mind.
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Wouldn't surprise me if Anduin said something along the lines of "you need to be able to laugh about yourself". (Glad I don't need to meet your grandmother.) Absolutely. Maybe a bit. But Dante is the proud bastard around. Killing his best friend "broke" something in Marc, apart from the fact that he never was THAT proud. Right observation Will take a while till we get there, but it will sure not be and go as you might expect. But on Dante's part will happen quite bit more, even on his perception of family... That was exactly the point. A similar happening (to highlight something) will come soon, but after that all the girl-nights for Remy will happen off-screen.
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"You look like shit." Remy sighed. "Thanks, Cain, good morning to you too." Rubbing his eyes, he stepped fully into the kitchen. Cain grinned wryly, but then paused, one hand on the fridge door. "Did I see that right yesterday, you went talking with Marc?" Nodding, Remy leaned against the kitchen island and watched Cain's grin disappear. "Tough stuff." "The shadows of the past?" He nodded again, and Cain sighed. "People always claim you can leave the past behind, li
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Thursday, February 27, 2025 (IV)
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Thursday, February 27, 2025 (IV)
You will have to be patient for that answer, I'm afraid. We will hear a bit more family-stuff next chapter. And, hey, Dust might now know it (or rather him) but we do have a lawyer in the backpocket... I get what you're trying to say, but the magic's effect is (at least in my head) just chaotic and random. Oh, that's a nice theory 👍 Maybe I should hire you as beta reader 😅 seems like I'm not smart enough to write crime stories 🫣 We will get there, promise! Already tomorrow if I'm to be honest, however many chapters that might be... -
After lunch, I cleared the table with Fred while Uncle Carl cleaned the stove, then retreated back to my corner bench while my uncles retired for their post-lunch nap. I googled the name Durham and found the filmmaker, along with social media profiles and a few references and mentions in credits. But I also found articles about a Robert Durham who had been found guilty of six counts of rape and an interview with his wife. There was a couple's photo attached to the article and I recognized
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The Appearance of Normality
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in The Appearance of Normality
Just shows how much they trust him. An educated, intelligent, well-behaved upper-class slave ❤️ *cough* Seems weird, huh? I mean, there are other men running around who have better knowledge for this task, like, what about Blaise? Surely Henry for example could do with a father figure next to a new big brother... -
The Appearance of Normality
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in The Appearance of Normality
If it was that easy to answer, I probably wouldn't need 80 chapters to tell his story... 😅 -
The Appearance of Normality
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in The Appearance of Normality
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"But Ma, I'm not a little kid anymore!" Frank's querulous voice belied his statement. "As long as you behave worse than Jack, you can tell me whatever you want," Miss Carolyn returned gruffly. Dante didn't want to hear the discussion. Frank was a mystery to him. What was he? Was there really a child stuck in the body of a grown man? Had this child- perhaps even indeed by an unconscious impulse on Dante's part- become a teenager? He didn't know. When he thought of Frank whispering lewd
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@Danners We will hear more about Marc's past and the port gangs and all this during his conversations with Remy. As was somewhat mentioned, Marc was raised to we a killer for the gang, just like his father (or Keith and his father).
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The whirlpool wasn't bubbling, but the water was hot and Marc had leaned back, relaxed. To his right, Miles massaged his left shoulder, moaning softly in pain; to his left, Keith sighed deeply. "Yo, Mo’c, di’ yoo b’ing aany alcool?" Tucker's question, asked in the area's deepest dialect, made Michael chuckle. "Be a change if he didn't." "Sure did." Marc grinned. Ever since this small exclusive group had made the deal with the janitor at the indoor pool a few years ago, he'd made s
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Sounds lovely ❤️ but very far away 😅 . Nowadays unbelievable but my mom saw the first time exotic fruit like bananas when she met her future parents-in-law who lived in a big city... Although I'm not a big fan of ice cream, I'm the one making it at home, to meet the different tastes of the family plus all the allergies etc. PS: now I want lamb with garlic-potatoes... *hungry*
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I can agree on that. Well I promise at least some interference from his side, though more on Anduin... Honesty is not exactly Remy's strongest skill... True that. But he has a safe home and friends (apart some disruptions) and he is already out of his past life for over two years. It might not be much, considering what's weighing on him, but it's a good base for a new start. And who knows how his comradeship with Remy might evolve over this talking. Nothing good, that for sure. He's a cute, sweet, gentle man, quiet, with a shy smile. But instead of dealing with his own trauma, he's just pushing it away, locking it up somewhere. He holds on to his duties and his trauma response aka washing sheets.
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Sounds like childhood and youth of my mom. Did you have animals? When I was a kid, there were only rabbits left (as future food, of course, not for cuddling) and I loved going out with my grandma to pick up some nice fresh herbs. The old horse stable and pig pen were empty and abandoned already and we kids build a playing house in there. (Now my uncle rebuild it into party room with kitchenette abd bathroom.)
