austinbiguy

Nobody does heartbreaking like our amazing author.

I love the way our author has developed Devin's character, climaxing in this chapter. Smart boy to use his smart phone. Of course the devil would have WIFI.

The twist ending to this chapter is one of the most beautiful I have ever read. I have a Ph.D. in literature, so I have read a bunch of stories! I was not expecting a flashback to our lovers when they were sixteen, and this insight into Luka's devotion to Devin and Devin's love for Luka. Mister D is still lurking out there, so there is still the possibility of heartbreak, but for now, the glow of love that stands the rest of time shines bright. And our multi-talented author is a master trickster, so the next chapter could see a funeral unfold for one of the lovers. 🤞

I just wanted to added a Wow! to go along with my Heart rating on this chapter. To me, it reads like a mystery/thriller. I wasn't expecting a plot twist on Mister D. Is it possible for Theron to be reunited with Enzo in the tree and Luka with Devin? My mind will wait an eternity in the labyrinth where our esteemed author sometimes holds his fans until the next chapter comes out.

This story depicts a young man's fantasy of having sex with his brother's hot friend at that special one-time event. I remember several of them. But none had the apparently happy ending of this episode. Well done, Troy.

Another unforgettably beautiful love story. Thank you for the gift of Devin and Luka as well as Mezenga and Enzo.

I love Alec's character. His affection for his Danny is evident as is his lust/love for Nora. He is the perfect friend for Daniel.

I loved the way this chapter flowed from one man in Daniel's life to another. Nora locks a door and Daniel is released.

Ah I love that you see something beyond the end of their story. So do I. I like Evan by the way. I'll keep my passion in check in the future (/s). May I please be excused from the woodshed? I've had sufficient.

If you say so. Don't forget what we learned in The Boy from Nothing. Lots of mantras in this story. Don't know why you would think I forgot one of them, or how locks relate to Blake and Jackson. Blake is the road and Jackson is home. My comment was meant to be lighthearted. @CasualWanderer82 should know that I am one of his biggest fans, and I won't apologize for loving one of his characters. Maybe I'm a man who came from nothing, but I feel empathy for Blake.

Team Dylan. How many of us get into a deep relationship with their teenage crush? Hard to pass that by.

rodeo clown not radio clown in my post above

I am still working on forgiving you for leaving Buckley with the radio clown at the end of Down in the Holler instead of his angel boy. I was happy to get a notice that you'd added a chapter to this interesting story. You do like the name Nora don't you. We shall see if she escapes her Doll's House and Daniel can free himself to be himself. As always, interesting material. Glad to see you back in action.

Wow! This chapter is so hot! I don't want that to be the end of Malik and Daniel. Nora--be careful what you ask for! There is another man in the bed, and his name is Daniel.

I loved the twist on the stereotypical cuckold story. The one where the bull bangs the wife in front of the hubby who could not please her. I am surprised and delighted that I even read this story. After the ending of Down in the Holler with the boy leaving his bull, I promised myself I would no longer check for CW;s new chapters, so, ironically, I read a bunch of cuckold stories. Most ending with the wife addicted to cock and humiliating the too faithful hubby. So I did not do a good job of breaking my @CasualWanderer82 addiction. I peaked. I can't wait for my next installment. My name is Alex, and I am a CW addict.