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Hi MarqMur, thanks for stopping by. Sorry it’s been a while to reply to you, but I posted the story right before going away on holiday and I’ve just got back. You are not the first person to say that they were tuned off at the start of the story. To be honest I have been thinking about making a few changes or writing a prologue chapter. The story started off a couple of years back when I was made redundant from my job and I wanted to fill my days with anything else other than daytime TV. I used to write many years ago, but stopped as I found that I had very little time to devote to it. The idea for The Arrangement was that it would be a two to three chapter long story for posting on Nifty, to get my creative juices flowing and then go back to my original story that I had left hanging and never got round to finishing. Sam’s underwear and scent fetish is mine, only magnified 100 fold! I’m nowhere near that bad. The thing is that after writing the three chapters that I had planned out I realised that there was a lot more potential in the characters, both of whom I had grown quite attached to, so I carried on writing whenever time allows. We’ve gone from seeing Dane and Sam manipulating each other for their own gains to them forging a genuine relationship where they care/love each other very much. Through each other they have gained confidence in different ways. Sam is no longer as introverted as he was and Dane is now much more at ease with his fluid sexuality. But... Spoiler alert!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Michelle will be back! Thanks again for taking the time to read my story and post a comment.

Okay, so the Hammers are not having the best of seasons and last year wasn’t much better. But they were the last team to beat Arsenal at Highbury and the first team to beat them at the Emirates. I’ll conveniently forget that the Gunners took six points from us this season! For the record and it wont really appear in the story as it is not that relevant, Dane is a West Ham fanatic. Aaron is Arsenal till he dies and Isaacs is a dyed in the wool Spurs fan. Sammy has no club allegiance, but he would probably go to a game at Upton Park if Dane dragged him along. That said, after seeing the pictures of Jack Wilshire in Speedos on the internet last year he would probably be a lifelong supporter of the player. For Sam it’s not about teams, it’s all about the individuals! I’m glad that you liked Aaron, I’ve got a lot planned for the guy in the up and coming chapters.

Hi Eon, thanks for your review, I really appreciate it. I have on occasion wondered if I use too much localised slang in the character’s dialogue? On the one hand I write what I hear them saying in my head, on the other hand I am also aware that some words do not travel. And I don’t just mean across the pond either. It always amazes me that a country as small as Britain has so many regional accents and turn of phrases. For example, my native accent is considered to be generic (or queen’s) English. But because I live a few miles down the road from London’s east-end, I find that at times a cockney accent will slip in. On top of that, I have spent quite a lot of time over the years in Scotland and while I do not have the accent, I find that I often use phrases that I have picked up in Edinburgh without realising it.

Wow, that’s a whole heap of H’s there! But I’m glad that I’m still creeping you out The butt grabbing game was inspired by a clip I saw on YouTube ages ago and I guess it just festered in the compost of my deranged imagination only to appear in this story as a light-hearted bit of fun. Aaron telling Sam about his lumping everyone into the same category as each other is directly from my life. At school there were a hardcore group of bullies that made my life and that of others hell. Then there were those who hung around with them, I saw them all as the same, but in truth they were nowhere near as bad. In fact after leaving school I became friends with some of them as we drank in the same pub and went to the same clubs.

Thanks Sam, I am glad that you liked it. To be honest I really enjoyed writing this chapter, probably why it took six weeks to finish instead of the usual six months!

Thanks for your kind words about my story. A number of Sammy’s experiences are drawn from my own when I was at school. Even now, years later I still find myself waking up in a cold sweat from a nightmare about school. Over the chapters, Dane has probably changed the most, but I think that both of them have changed for the better through each other’s influence. We’ll see more of that in the next two chapters. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Hey Frostina, thanks for stopping by and a special thanks for your happy dance. I kind of feel like a little jig myself now that I've managed to write a chapter in less than my usual six months I hope you enjoy the new installment

The Arrangement Chapter 10 Well, it’s done. has been posted and seems to be in quarantine. I guess once it has been de-loused it will be there for your perusal. I hope you enjoy it. If you have any comments or questions, don’t be afraid to leave them here. I don’t bite. Well, not as long as I’ve fed recently! Thanks Sam. I hope you enjoy it.

There was silence in the group, I guess they were all trying to process what Dane had just said. Again, there were sudden subtle changes in the way these boys were standing. A couple of them backed away a pace or two, and there were varying looks of confusion on their faces. I could tell when Dane’s smile faltered for a brief second that he realised that he’d gone too far and that his mates were in no way ready to hear what he had just said. I think the only one of his mates to sense that

One more read through and chapter ten will be posted

I thought this list would be harder that it was to compile. So many words, how do I choose the ten nicest to me? Then from the I don’t know where I came up with mine to share with you all. Friendship Trust Love Honour Loyalty Imagination Dreams Wonder Curiosity Safe

Thank you so much. You've been absolutely great with your comments about my story.

Dane wasn’t so much a “slutty two timer”, he was more like someone who was having their cake and eating it. LoL. Now Michelle’s dumped him he’s free to be with Sam. That is of course unless Michelle realises that she’s made a big mistake, forgives Dane and wants him back! Then what will he do? Oops, have I said too much? As for the next chapter, my plan is that as long as I don’t have to take any work home with me this weekend then I will spend it chain smoking in front of my computer screen until I’ve finished the chapter. That or catch up on The Vampire Diaries and Gossip Girl that I have Sky +’ed!

Wow, what an amazing time you must have had! Would you say that from your perspective as a teenager at the time when the war ended, was there a sense of ‘thank God that’s all over’ and ‘this is the dawn of a brave new world’ where anything could happen or was possible? As for my travels, I spent several months back in 1986/7 when I was 18, working on a kibbutz and back packing around Israel and Egypt. I wouldn’t say that travel broadened my mind in itself; however the people I met certainly did. I was a shy, awkward teenager that was a bit sheltered by my parents. I went out to Israel because my best mate had been there for around a year and he kept on at me to do the same. The organisation that placed volunteers on kibbutz’s put me on one that luckily happened to within hitch hiking distance from the one where my friend was, but was far away enough that we couldn’t meet up too often. That gave me the comfort to know that there was someone to look out for me nearby (he’s always been an older brother figure to me, still is), but not near enough so that I didn’t have to make new friends. The group I went out with were 14 individuals who in a very short space of time became very tight with each other. There was a good mix of nationalities among the volunteers, us Brits, Dutch, a lot of Scandinavians, Swiss and even South Africans. Through those people I learned so much about the world. At the time I had been on a number of anti apartheid demos in London and when I was told that not only were some South Africans going to be joining us, but one of them had been allocated a bed in my room I was not happy to say the least. I think the biggest lesson I learned was that you could not judge a person by their country of origin. As over time I got to be very good friends with almost all the South Africans in that group, two of them became very close. I found that I had so much in common with them, we didn’t entirely agree on politics, but we were able to see through that and put it aside and build a friendship. One of my biggest regrets was that a couple of summers later I was invited out to SA by them to spend the summer driving round the coastline. It would have been great, but I couldn’t go. Not while there was a criminal government oppressing its people in power. They understood my point of view and we still remained in touch for a few years after. Unfortunately by the time apartheid ended we had lost contact, so I never got to have that long summer driving round the coast. I have a million stories from that time and about the people I met. Most of whom I have lost contact with over time. Thanks to Facebook I am back in touch with a couple of them. Looking back, that year 1987, was the best of my life. Even the bad stuff that happened I now look back on and laugh. I wish that when I got back home I hadn’t allowed life to suck me into the rat race as much as I did. I wish I had spent more of my summers back packing around the world. As for teenagers today. Until recently I was the manager of a store that employed quite a few people of student age. I’d tell them stories of my travels and out of the many that I befriended only one of them really caught the travelling bug. I’d like to think that I helped him in as much as I ensured that he had enough hours of work to be able to save up to travel to Australia and when he returned, that he had a job to come back to before he went off to university. Another of the lads that worked for me went off for a summer working in Faliraki. But in the main most of them didn’t like the idea of wandering around the world with a backpack.

Hi Carl, Thanks for stopping by. Glad that you’ve enjoyed the story and thanks for your words of support. Was there any secret in particular that you were referring to?