Mark Arbour
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There were times over the past few months where I wanted to be productive, but I didn't feel overly creative, or at least creative enough to write new chapters. So to occupy my time, and with amazing help of @impunity, I've been working to re-edit and in some cases, re-write Man In Motion. The edits were significant enough to take the word count from 147,000 to 185,000. If you do take the time to re-read it, let me know what you think. Since I'm not publishing this as a new book (I'm editing), it may be difficult to tell which chapters have been revamped. Here's the key: If a chapter has a name, it's new. For example, Chapter 1 was originally Chapter 1 (duh), but now it's titled "Super Bowl". I hope you enjoy the changes!
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March 11, 2004 Los Angeles, CA Will I tooled down the freeway in Zach’s new SUV, relieved that there was minimal traffic. My quick stop at the car dealer ended up taking an hour, which annoyed the fuck out of me, but I expected no less from those cretins. The automotive industry was so fucking strange. On the one hand, cars were cool, and getting a new one was hella fun. On the other hand, dealing with car dealers and their bullshit damn near ruined the whole experience
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Does Wyoming count? They have a bunch of land there.
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That's a recipe for a long, happy, stable relationship. 🤣
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Sorry to hear that
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I get where you’re coming from, but I partied longer than you. 😃
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I think that's the most hilarious comment you've ever posted.
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I can just here all the expletives from the maid as he/she walks up to that room to clean.
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Thanks. Zach probably felt kind of the same way when he first started hooking up with Will.
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It was in Rome, Italy. (Or maybe it was Del Mar. 😀)
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I'm not buying that. Zach could have simply pushed past Will on his way out. There really is no excuse for this one, IMHO. At least not one that we're aware of. Thanks for catching that. I must have been thinking about San Diego.
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Spot on.
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That's like a challenge. 😈
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With you, it's all about sex. 😀
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Did you never go to a fraternity party?
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He's not really giving Jake attitude, he's saving that for his father, because he's probably convinced Brad is behind this whole thing.
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I'm sorry, but that fate is taken. I promised Sharon that's how JJ would die someday.
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And Black's Beach is right there too. 😀
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I think that the unspoken reason is that after Mike gave him all that info, Will felt compelled to go ahead and make good on the grant, especially since he said he would.
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He's not a fan.
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I'm going to light up a joint and ponder your post. 😀
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Peter Thiel is a douche, but he is a good businessman. I was able to join Facebook in 2004/5 because I had an edu email address. Facebook goes public in 2012.
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Will isn't going to deed the house to Johnny until he's 18. Not sure when he'll collect from Patrick.
