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Chapter 13: Long Time Coming
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 13: Long Time Coming
Haha that is what I aim for! I love the way you sum it up though, it's pretty funny, we'll see what happens next! -
Emry sighed as he laid back on the couch flipping through television channels, appearing bored out of his mind. "There is never anything on...and to top that all off, mom is in rehab, Lana is furious with me, so bad she went to rehab with her and dad is at wor..." Then he heard a knock on the door. "Work." "I'm coming!" Emry tossed the remote aside and got off the couch and walked to the door and opened it only for his eyes to widened by the sight of the person on the other side. It was no o
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Chapter 12: Little Brother
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 12: Little Brother
As always! Glad you are enjoying it. -
Chapter 12: Little Brother
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 12: Little Brother
You do have to wonder why, I mean it would have been more ideal if it had been with him and a great epic lover, though I don't think he is quite ready for that. Spoiler in that there is a big consequence to come. -
Jesse opened the door and he smiled. "Hey, thanks for coming to my place." He stepped aside. "It's not much, the typical of what you get from the projects, really." He chuckled. Liam walked inside and he looked around. "Hey..I heard most of these places were at least decent, compared to where a lot of people live." "Oh yeah...they have to stay to code, very strict about that." Jesse closed the door. "So my room is just down the hall, I'm heating up some chicken wings and I'll bring some soda
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Chapter 11: Cold As Ice
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 11: Cold As Ice
Asia is incredibly fun to write, kind of the polar opposite of Siera who I least enjoy writing out of all of them, unless Asia is bullying her, then it's fun lol. And Emry's mother, yep she is a mean bitch, Emry and Lana would have terrible lives if their father wasn't there to put a lid on things, most of the time, he probably should kick her to the curb but then there is a custody battle, so they just battle her. And Dom being gone, yeah it could turn out to be a good thing. Sad that Merit and Emry kind of deny each other. Emry fears he won't be able to handle a committed relationship and Merit just created a real mess. We'll see what happens! -
Emry yanked his jeans on as he heard a fist start pounding on the door. He looked down and buttoned his pants and then ran for the door, twisted the lock, sucking in a deep breath in a quiet gasp as he pulled the door open and his eyes widened. "Why the fuck is your door locked?! What the fuck are you doing?! Don't you know how to open a fucking door?! These heels were made for hearing!" Jessica screamed in a ranting rage. "Mom!" Emry burst out and suddenly felt light headed, leaning his sho
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Chapter 10: On My Knees
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 10: On My Knees
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah it was a pretty cool image that I pictured in my head. Oh and he had a few options on how to get home, it's just one of those things where you really just kind of assume one of those options that seems to make sense, it's really very insignificant. Yes Siera and Merit is a sad story, he wants to make himself unhappy, more so than what he would be alone, and she is just kind of desperate lmao! If Lana catches them, well you will just have to wait and see, but a flimsy trailer door isn't going to keep an angry woman out lol. -
The English teacher walked back to his desk and he sat down with the stacked sheet of papers, tapping the bottom of them against his desk to straighten them out. "Thank you for filling out these questionnaires. I am going to explain to you why I needed these and what is going to happen." Tyler grinned and he looked over at Emry. "Probably to send it to the government so they know everything about us..." He whispered. "That is so Junior High..." Emry looked at Tyler and slightly narrowed his
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Liam walked out of one of the aisle's in the library and he spotted Emry sitting at one of the tables flipping through a book. His eyebrows lifted and he made his way over and grabbed the chair across from him and he sat down. "Hey..." Emry looked up. "Skipping gym?" A small grin appeared. "I'm in study hall...I get to be here." Liam slightly smiled. "I guess...I just wanted to make up for our ruined lunch." "You could of waited until lunch, it's only next period." Emry continued to flip t
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Chapter 8: Packing Heat
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 8: Packing Heat
You don't beat up and torture someone and not get punished. Kane got his karma. And Asia isn't done with him. -
Tyler, a sophomore, with shaggy blonde hair mostly covered by a black beanie cap and a silver piercing towards the side of his bottom lip sat in the chair in Principal Morris' office with his hands tucked into his black hoodie. A young teen, but a tough one. His tongue shifted around, tossing the gum in his mouth before he bit down on it. Principal Morris took a step to the side to go around her desk, but then she paused in hesitation as she gave Tyler a look, her eyes then shifted over to the
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Chapter 7: Rush Of The Moment
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 7: Rush Of The Moment
Whore..slut, despite the differences, it's the term that came to mind for him, especially at a younger age and in a town in Texas. Slut line, I'd pretty much think the same thing, of course in his mind he mostly thinks of it as exploration and for people to keep telling him that is what he is doing, well they shouldn't because he's very impressionable right now. Even Dom encouraging what he termed "exploring" wasn't the right thing to do and by Emry calling himself such a name, it kind of means that he is thinking about his actions and yet being persuade from those thoughts. I do agree though, Dom is a good guy and I don't think his advice was bad, at least not all of it. Guess his apple fell far away from the tree lol. -
The shower water ran hot, the mirror fogged and steam filled the room. Thankfully they hadn't woken Emry's parents, and if they had, they didn't know about it. Emry sighed, running the soapy rag down Dominik's back and then he pulled it away and brought it under the water to rinse it off, his head lowering. Despite the sound of the shower, he was close enough to hear that sigh, it was one of those louder ones and it was enough to make him turn around and he looked at Emry, his eyebrows lifting
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Chapter 6: Cocky Confident
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 6: Cocky Confident
Lmao the haters gonna hate! That's the way it has to be. Though to be honest, I doubt Kane would of done it if their dad weren't there. Parental peer pressure, what I like to call it. -
Asia walked around towards the back of her car and looked towards the row of cars across the way as Athen's silver 2005 Saturn Relay pulled into a parking space. She waited until Lana climbed out of the passenger seat and waved her over. "Hey, girl! Come over here for a second!" That was just when Jesse walked by and he grinned at Miki. "Apple head, you ready for the day?" Miki looked over at Jesse. "I know you didn't just call me Apple head." "Then you really are an Apple head, if you thi
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Chapter 5: I'll Worship You
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 5: I'll Worship You
It will be well worth the wait! There are more enjoyable moments to come. -
Liam looked up from his homework on his desk when he heard a knock on his window and he turned around to see a figure outside, though he couldn't tell exactly who it was. His face shifted into a look of confusion and he got up and quickly headed over and opened the window. "Hey..." Emry smiled. "You climbed up here?" Liam asked. "Kind of risky...physical exertion..total seizure trigger, but I took extra medication...and it proves that I can...well, in a minute. Can I come in? I went throug
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Thanks, happy that you are still enjoying and I hope you enjoy what is to come because it's fun!
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Kane sat his lunch tray down and took his usual seat beside Talia and sent an up-nod Liam's way across the table from him. "Now lunch period can really begin." He paused and noticed that Merit was sitting off at a table by himself. "What's up with that?" Siera frowned. "Just...something happened and he's giving me some space." She looked up. "Don't give him a hard time, okay?" Liam looked over at Siera with an odd look and then his eyes shifted towards Merit. "Don't worry...Kane knows if h
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Emry sighed and looked up at the house as Merit pulled up along side the street, the place flooded with parked cars everywhere. "I..really don't understand why we're doing this." He looked over at Merit. "I mean, Kane's birthday? You already saw what he did at lunch and I was just sitting at the table. I might get lunged out the window." "No, you won't...I won't let that happen." He looked over at Emry. "And the point of this...is to make a point, that I'm going to hang out with anyone that I
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Animal? I'm not quite sure why you are referencing an animal or maybe it just flew over my head, it's a gun and I also did my research as I looked up pictures on several firearm websites to find out the gun type and which one I wanted her to have, I always research everything before I write it. As for Emry, he came very close to having an episode, he had to be helped off the floor, he came close but it was a chance of luck that it didn't happen being that I didn't want to over write his condition by having it happen every time he does something. Given that and aside from that, things are heating up between Merit and Emry, as well as the drama, since I do love writing drama! Thanks for the feedback.
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Thanks! There is more to come, though I am sure you know that!
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Merit walked over to their lunch table, seeing Talia and Siera there. "Hey, I need a favor, because I trust you two, obviously, can you watch him while I grab some food and a couple of soda's? I'll try to hurry before the...bad ass men get here." Emry looked at Merit and quickly shook his head. "They will come..especially when they find out what we did." "Sure, we'll watch him..." Talia said. Merit smiled and grasped his shoulders. "I will be back before they get here..and you are complete
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Chapter 1: Write It In The Sky
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 1: Write It In The Sky
Lmao well thank you! I love writing the drama, it's fun and it's the best and you are right, haven't met all the characters yet, there will be more in the coming chapters, so hopefully you will stay tuned!
