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    Yes, this first example, I really felt this needed to be written as a classic case of what he typically went through as far as his typical experiences, obviously that changes a bit in New York as things get a little more complicated. But this is typically the mind set he comes with and what he had in Australia. Maybe even some of the habits and thoughts even stuck with him.
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    Prologue

    x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Prologue

    Lol the prologue, I've been told it was a grabber many times. I guess it's not a bad thing.
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    Miracle stumbled into the interrogation room as a cop guided him in there. "God, were the cuffs necessary?" He looked around, seeing an investigator who waved the cop to unlock him. Once Miracle's hands were free, he rubbed at his wrists and looked at the man, still not a bit more dressed than before. He was going to wait and see how long it took before they offered him anything. "Go." Investigator Hudson waited until the cop left the room and shut the door. "My names Dex Hudson, we can be for
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    Miracle walked down the hall only for Dr. Reed to stop him at the door just before he went out into the waiting room. He turned and looked at her questioningly. "What is it? I mean, I gave you the sample, that's it, right?" Dr. Reed shook her head. "We may need more samples, it's routine that we get multiple just in case, we like to try and guarantee the highest percentage possible." Miracle slowly nodded. "Well...how many, and when do I have to do that?" "Uh, if you could come back maybe
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    "Rayne, we're going to have to open the window for some good lighting so we can film it." Mysti looked at her sister. "So, you're just...like going to have to get over it." Rayne flipped through channels on the television and then looked over at Mysti. "Do your consultation in your room. Honestly, I don't know why you didn't do it at his house, it's better than this dump." "Because, we don't want to sit on the bed. Rayne, please?" Mysti crossed her arms. Rayne rolled her eyes and took in a
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    Thanks! I've been missing the reviews! Glad to hear from you and thank you for enjoying the read and being the loyal fan that you are, inspiring me to write a sequel, I never would of thought of the idea other wise! So thank you very much!
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    Miracle walked into the locker room, watching several of the guys walking out, what was left of the team anyway. He looked around and noticed steam from the shower room, and the silence that followed the last shower being turned off, once the room had emptied of everyone else. He walked around and then grabbed the frame of the opening to the shower room filled with stalls just as Kevin was coming out, towel around his waist. "Gah!" Kevin jumped back, nearly running into Miracle. He grinned a
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    "Damn it." Nikolai laid his gun and the file in the passenger seat and dug out his cell phone and hit up Miracle's name. Miracle laid on the bed, watching television while Cheston was in the shower. He grabbed his phone and then answered. "Hello?" He spoke quietly. "Did you get it done?" "Yes, but I don't know what to do with Quinn. I got him in the trunk and I'm driving around with his car. I parked mine about a mile away from the office. Thing is, as soon as I leave and let him go, he's go
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    Cheston walked in, welcomed to the sounds of Miracle quietly crying. He headed around the corner of the foyer and the entrance to the living room, it was dark, the only light that shined was from the fire place, and he saw Miracle, sitting on the floor like a child that had gotten hurt. He frowned and dropped his brief case and headed over there and lowered down in front of Miracle. "It's because of me, isn't it? I heard that you...uh...had Nikolai come over and tried to shoot the window out."
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    "So, this is where you will work, the front Secretary usually takes the phone calls, does all the basic business, sends the clients in order and typical stuff like that." Cheston explained. "Wouldn't it make more sense to promote her and put me out there?" Miracle grinned. "I'd kind of love to get the chance to consult them myself while they wait." "Well, you would get the opportunity to to be present on consultations and discussions, this is more like an Assistant than a Secretary." "And
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    Miracle walks out of the bathroom in a warm white robe and sighs. "Feels good to be clean of that man." Cheston sat on the edge of the bed and looked up at Miracle when they heard that grand door bell chime through out the house and both of them looked at the bed room door. "Good thing you didn't install my door bell of doom." Miracle walked over to a rolling cart and grabbed a chocolate covered strawberry. "I'll go see who it is." Cheston stood up, still clothed from the day as he headed
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    Cheston stood in the ring, a pair of shorts on, sweat covering his shirtless upper body as he stood before the man holding the board, his hands covered in boxing gloves. He punched the board a couple of times and then spun around and kicked it. Andy grinned as he walked into the gym and caught sight of Cheston and laughed as he walked over to the ring. "People usually do that when they're angry. And...if you aren't already...I kind of have a reason for you to be." Cheston punched the board a
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    "I'm really glad to be home." Miracle walked down the hall and stopped at Cheston's bed room. "I'm glad for you to be home." Cheston smiled and opened the door to his room, to reveal he had lit candles all around so there was a soft glow within, it was a little something, but not to much. Miracle walked inside and looked around and smiled. "Okay, this is new." Miracle turned around as Cheston walked in and closed the door. "I wanted it to be a little special." He smiled. "You're still up f
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    Hey, the drama has to keep up! And I hope Miracle is your favorite character! I enjoy writing him, he's like what I consider a home character to me. I just start writing him and I feel at home lmao. Thanks for the feedback!
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    A female investigator walked into Miracle's room upon permission granted and walked around his bed, she took a seat in the chair by the bed and looked at Miracle. "Are you awake? Can you wake up?" She spoke in a soft voice but loud enough in hopes of jogging him awake. "I'm restlessly awake." Miracle rolled his head to the other side to look at the woman. "Fighting the pain meds can be a problem, sometimes I don't want to fight them. Who are you?" "I'm Investigator Nora Jerdain, you can just
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    Cheston sat in one of the chairs in the waiting room, his hands clasped as he looked down, tears flooding down his face as he cried. "He wanted to be together...fully and completely and..I kept telling him no, I kept denying him." He looked up. "Now we might never get that chance, now he might never know how much I cared...I was just trying to make sure that...I just wanted to take things slow...for him." Erica sat beside Cheston and rested her chin on his shoulder and rubbed his back. "He kno
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    Miracle stood in the park, looking at the script over his phone. "Charlie? The boyfriends name is Charlie? Okay, what era are we playing in? And I knew a cop named Charlie." "So you want to change his name?" Conner asked. "Like, yeah." Miracle's eyebrows lifted. "Okay, like what?" Conner asked. "I'm looking." Miracle scrolled his phone. Conner started to pace. "Would you just pick a name?!" "Hold on! It has to sound right." Miracle frowned. "Name him or he's going to be Bill!" Conn
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    "How come I can't look?" Sterling asked as he was rolled from one room to another on a massage table by two of Lacey's girl frields that blind folded him. "Because...it's a surprise." Lacey grinned down at Sterling and his new hair, shaven at the sides and the back and crop cut short on the top and dyed blonde, definitely very different. "Now you're getting a tattoo. Give you a hint...I'm going to make you the man of the sequel." Lacey grinned. "Tattoo? Wait! What kind of tattoo?!" One of
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    Miracle heard a knock on Cheston's door and opened it to find Andy standing there. "By the way, I'm moving out, here's the address and phone number? On a pink heart shaped sticky note from valentines?! Miracle, what are you thinking?! Or are you thinking at all?!" Andy starts ranting, clearly upset. Cheston hears the commotion and walks to the door. "What's going on?" "What's going on?" Andy looked at Cheston and pushed past Miracle as he stepped in. "Andy stop! I'm an adult! It's my cho
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    Thank you! There is more to come! Lots more!
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    "Sorry you had to see my crappy place." Miracle rolled his eyes. "Probably a dump compared to where you live." "We all have to start somewhere." Cheston grinned. "So...what was this story you had to tell me about?" "Oh...that." Miracle nodded. "Okay...so well, this guy saw me...at a place." "At a place?" Miracle nodded. "Yes, a place. Anyway, it wasn't my idea but I got pushed into trying to be a school counselor. So I went and there was the guy, he was the Principal. So...I gave him my
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    The door to Wayne's office was open as Miracle walked in and then he slammed it shut behind him. "Boy, you must have gotten a real fucking laugh out of me." Wayne looked up from some paper work and his eyebrows lifted. "Hmm?" Miracle walked over to the desk and leaned forward, placing his hands along the edge of the desk. "You knew I needed credential's to work here, to do the job that you hired me to do." Miracle grinned sarcastically. "I wonder, was it hard to contain your laughter the who
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    Hahaha if you only knew...
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    Miracle sat down in the office and stared at the Principal, feeling as if he were a student again. "You can call me, Wayne or Mr. Garret, which ever you prefer." The man said. "Right." Miracle managed a smile. "Uh...so, my work history isn't very much. I was...well, a greeter...at a car dealership. Um...that job ended because I was kidnapped..." He looked around. "And then I was an at home crisis hotline person...and I got fired for chatting with the people when they were in a better mood."
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    Yeah, the opening was something very visual for me, I really saw it in my head and tried to put it out there, I guess that's a hit or miss. Thank you! Yeah, Andy started to like him quite quickly, even though you just meet him just as the last story ends, there is like one scene, so everything else is assumed to have happened, that he's lived with Miracle this whole time, kind of watched out for him, taken care of him, but at the same time didn't stand in his way etc.
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