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  1. Thank you! I just had to do it! The idea of a sequel tugged at me and it kept tugging, so I just had to go for it. Glad you enjoyed the first chapter and hope you enjoy more!
  2. He stood at the beginning of the catwalk that led to a silver metal pole in the center of the stage. Above him, the ceiling was a pit of darkness, yet he was immersed in a sea of white lights as numerous as stars in the sky. The room beyond the stage glowed blue and purple with lights that shined down and danced about. The stage itself was transparent, glowing in the same pulsating colors, almost like a lava lamp. Fog came up from the edges swirling around him. He was silhouetted against the
  3. It's been over four years since Miracle was left in small town Colorado for what seemed like the biggest test of his life, and that was life on his own. He found mild comfort in a friend, and he's hit Vegas, with a past, that's not only troubling, but one that makes many curious. Caught between past reflection and an uncertain future ahead, Miracle finds himself still lost in a world that still seems so big, like whats left of his grief for a love so deep.
  4. x Trevor x

    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed the story, though I have to say the goodbye was rather sad, but I like when stories really pull at my emotions. I had to give it a read after you told me about it. Good job, interesting work.
  5. "So...I didn't want Mia to rat me out." Cole stood in Tess' darkened living room, looking around at the candles that lit the room. "Well, you tell her not to jump off the bridge, she'll jump." Tess turned around. "I honestly don't care about Mia...and I don't even know that Felix guy, but being part of this is dangerous." "I'm not scared of dangerous. So...what exactly can you do?" He asked. "Truthfully? We can do many and varied things, we're actually reality warpers, but we're learning s
  6. It's okay and thank you! I am glad that you are still enjoying it!
  7. Tess, Trent, Taylor and Gage sat at the rather long and yet short at the same time fancy table, it was white and made of granite with a mirror in the middle of it. Barack Obama sat at the other end of the table, two armed guards stood behind him and at either side and a few select other people sat at the table, people with the highest of clearance, the type of people who dealt with the messy situations. Gage sat at the other end, sunglasses on and he rested his head on his hand, fingers curled
  8. And then the man from the chopper took aim on the one directed and fired a round and suddenly Tess felt a bullet hit her in the shoulder blade. She jerked her hand away from Barack's head and a scream escaped as she swerved to the side and hit the wall, blood staining it as she lowered down to sit on the floor, crying in pain. "Tess!" Trent ran forward and over to her side, kneeling down and pulled her from the wall so that he could look at her back. "Taylor! You gotta come heal her!" Taylor
  9. Tess leaned around the corner and looked down the hall at Mia. "There she is...I could open my locker again, Taylor could stick his head in and give her a whopper!" She quietly laughed. Trent laughed. "We really need to stop, he's going to hate us forever if we keep on." "He's not even here." Tess rolled her eyes. "You make habits...they die hard." Trent nodded. "She's a habit." Tess laughed. "You guys are still doing it." Taylor walked up and looked around them and saw Mia down the ha
  10. The four coughed as the water washed away and seemed to disappear as they looked up and found themselves in the sand. Tess looked up and spotted a hill of forestry up just above the beach. "It's that way." She coughed and stood up as the four of them got up and ran across the beach and up into the woods They grasped onto trees and branches to help get up the hill until they stumbled onto flat ground and there it was, the white stone plateau just at the top of the grand stone steps where the
  11. Tess walked out of the police station and down the steps, rubbing her head. "After all of that, I shouldn't need you to amplify that power again." She sat on the steps. "Are you okay?" Taylor sat beside her. "I actually kind of need you for something else." "Oh no..." Tess shook her head and lowered it. "What now?" "Spencer suggested we go to the future for clues." Taylor said. "The future?" Trent sat down. "Not to bad of an idea...I mean, if we eventually find answers, it's like a game
  12. Well I am fearing. I kind of thought I could drift through genre's and keep a good following but now I'm not so sure. I mean I knew it would be a different feel in comparison but I'm not so sure if I want to be one of those kind of writers who wrote something that got a good following and then has to stick to writing those certain types of stories. At this point, I'm not in deep enough yet to where I don't have the choice to scrap it, so I'm really thinking about it before I go anymore further in and end up feeling like I have to finish it.
  13. "Real bang up job guys." Tess grinned as she lounged in the new couch with the news paper. "Furniture disappears and different furniture appears, no one knows how." She threw the paper aside and laughed. "They can't prove anything." Trent walked into the living room with a soda and hopped into the sofa beside Tess. "Yeah...well, I could of put more effort into actually walking in a browsing." Taylor sat next to Spencer on the edge of the couch. "Please, like they can ever prove what we did
  14. Taylor walked up the ramp of the cruise ship, a backpack hanging off his shoulders and a duffle bag hanging from one shoulder. He wasn't exactly sure how he was going to do this. Part of him wondered if he stayed close enough to the people ahead of him, maybe he could just slip by and board with them? He looked around and stepped forward as the line moved along, his anxiety rising and he started to second guess himself, he needed to turn around, leave this whole idea alone, but before he knew
  15. Thanks! Will have the next chapter soon. I like to type several chapters ahead lol.
  16. Thank you! And one day, maybe Miracle could be a counselor. Though I would have to see him really mature a lot in order to do that. If I do a sequel, it would definitely time jump to present day, so I don't know if I see him maturing enough in that time but I do see possibly some changes. Thank you for becoming a fan! It means a lot to me and I hope you enjoy the new story, though if any other work doesn't live up to the standards of this piece, I would understand. I've held this story close to my heart for years. Being why I wrote it in past year time frame as 2007 - 2008 is when the idea came to me and began to build it's self.
  17. 2012 It was a darkness, not like the night, but a darkness like a void, like an endless void. Like what one might imagine existed before the universe or what might of been within the seconds just before the big bang were to begin, right when that little dot of light had formed. Yes there was a light, a small white light far off in the distance, like one of those soft white light bulbs, except the light extended out and spun around, like that of a light house, wanting to guide him through the
  18. Three, unlikely to meet, high school teens cross paths through an interconnected dream. They are brought together for a journey that will bring truths from the earths greatest myths and discoveries from beyond, and a destiny to be fulfilled, a destiny that will leave these three and more with mixed feelings. Between putting all the pieces together, dealing with life's drama and the danger of who they are that puts themselves and those they care about at risk, it leaves a questionable fate.
  19. It's heartbreaking, I know. I want to keep going with it. Which is why I am highly leaning towards a possible sequel, though doing so right after the original, I feel would be to soon. If I do one though, it would have a different title as it would be a different stage of his life. So Miracle may be back in the future! And yes, Skylar's story was a bit over the top. I think I had way to much fun with it but the element of more of a challenge and even better, an enemy for Jaemin would have been interesting. What I like most about her part of the story, aside from her romance with Hunter, was the social aspects in which she did her work. A lot of information was gathered from her in the smallest and most passive ways as have been seen in the latter chapters. Though Melanie will always be my favorite, I still regret killing her! As for what Jeremy did, it was an awful thing to do but it was a test of sorts, to see if he could handle having it in his possession. Jeremy really wanted him to have it but clearly he wasn't ready for it. As for my new story, I hope that you do come to like it, yes it is supernatural, though it is in a high school setting. I will tell you this much, it's going to be a bit of a mystery and you may find similar writing elements, though the characters will be different. It's a story that will take some time to judge as it will be slow pace at first but as time goes on, pieces will start to come together.
  20. Miracle laid in bed in the white padded room, looking up at the florescent light, having been changed into a white tee shirt and grey sweat pants but he still had his locket around his neck and he clinged to it with a single hand, staring off into nothingness, remembering what happened. "Miracle!" Erica screamed Miracle closed his eyes and waited, only to feel something hit him. A gasp was drawn in and he landed hard on the ground and looked up and found Jeremy on top of him. He saw the train
  21. I had planned from the very beginning that the prologue was going to be a huge tragedy. I'm the sort of writer that can find beauty in tragic moments as well as happy ones, so long as they are strong enough to pull the emotions. The big clue behind Jaemin's motive was the memories, the fact that despite their troubles, Miracle would not let him go. If Jaemin walked away, Miracle would follow. Jaemin actually tried that and Miracle went off and found him. Of course going back to NY was a give away and he could go anywhere. But there is more at play, for one there was extreme guilt for letting everything get that far when he could of stopped it, the fact that it cost a life. And the idea that all of Miracle's friends had moved on, they were growing, maturing in life, he felt that he was holding Miracle back from doing that because he couldn't do that himself. Is Jaemin justified? Well that is up for anyone's opinion. But I am pretty sure he wasn't thinking about who discovered the body which is careless without a doubt. In the reality of it, Jaemin came to the same conclusion that Craig had after Miracle's suicide attempt, that Jaemin's love, while a little obsessive at best, only fed to Miracle's sickness, and that was what he needed to be free from, among other things. Jaemin couldn't love him enough to set the boundaries because he could never stay angry at him, he could never not forgive him, leaving Miracle to spin in his endless cycle. As for Erica and Jeremy? Hmm...that'll come. Craig, he got caught up at work after a co-worker picked him up. That prologue was posted in 2011...I had to reread it myself for certain details. I didn't do a copy and paste but I tried to recreate the accuracy to my best ability.
  22. Ashley has to be evil. Like I said before, it's hard for me to really work it in my head that Sterling of all people would suddenly "convert" so I had to make her evil. In fact if you go back in time and pay attention to something really minor that Skylar says about..."a sexual kink" that explains it all. And Miracle lives in a suburb but right at the edge of it, kind of where it begins. And no, the dealership didn't give him that car, he made the man order it, lmao. The last time Stefano supposedly died was in 2011 but he came back to life. (And yeah, they are still together, but Nick is making their lives hell.) And no the next chapter is not the ending!
  23. I'm sorry! I get anxious and want to post! As for Miracle, haha, that's him! And it was a nice promise that Jaemin made, but I will say that one needs to look at Miracle's track record with promises. As for Issac, well, keep reading on.
  24. Hey, this isn't the end! There is one more chapter! Though I have to admit, this chapter was a bit of a stab to the heart. Though, I have to say when I wrote it that I believe tragedy can be just as beautiful as happiness, emotion is beautiful, whether it's pain or sadness and if you make that into a piece of creativity, well, I like to think that it's a good thing. Thank you for the compliments. I will keep writing and have a new story in the making right now, in fact!
  25. "So, this is it." Miracle stood in the yard, looking at his silver diamond covered Mercedes Benz SL600. Craig's eyes widened. "Miracle, that is going to get stole right out of our drive way." "Not if I keep it in the garage. Right under my finished bed room." He tried to smile but he couldn't stop thinking about Issac. "Aren't there any leads yet? Daddy...I miss him, I want him back." Craig sighed and wrapped his arms around Miracle. "Everyone is working as hard as they can. We have it al
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