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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Food Impostors

    Dolores Esteban commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Food Impostors

    Quite a 'disgusting' Halloween tale. Well done.
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    I only recently read about Samhain and the other holidays. It was quite fascinating. I enjoyed your story a lot.
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    Thank you. I'm glad you liked the story. Many thanks also for the review. ☺️
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    I once had a neighbor who had a gun and shot at a customs officer.
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    Thank you. ☺️
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    Thank you. I'm happy you liked the story. ☺️
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    The ship dropped back into real space at the edge of the solar system and moved on at a reduced speed. The sensors gathered data about the planets and their orbits and they checked the star system for transmissions coming from Earth, the Moon, the habitats on Mars and from satellites in space. The computer produced a map of the star system and compared it to the maps saved to the archives in space. It also searched the databases for registry entries about the solar system and the planet Earth.
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    Well, like Eric said, things never turn out the way you expect. I'll post the final chapter today. Many thanks for reading and your feedback. I found your comments constructive.
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    The men and the Aryaka finally regained consciousness. None of them was seriously hurt. They ignored their blood-smeared faces and hands and Shesha said his overstretched arm didn’t need treatment. The Aryaka sat down at the console and checked the messages on the screens. Nahusha pressed his hand against his ear and attempted to open a line to his Aryaka supporters. He finally gave up on his communication attempts. He turned to the men, took the tablet from Eric and typed an explanation. Eric
  10. Dolores Esteban

    The Tale

    Dolores Esteban commented on northie's story chapter in The Tale

    Great story, northie. I absolutely loved it.
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    Thanks everybody. Glad you liked the short piece. ☺️
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    Thank you. We'll know very soon if the Izanami get away with it.
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    Yes, the monks are definitely biased. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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    The Izanami ship was on full alert. All crew from the relevant compartments gathered in the cargo holds. The main computer had started the emergency procedure for a ship parked on the ground. The people flooded out of the ship and into the spaceport hall. Two containers, not yet secured in the cargo hold, were let down the ramp. They hovered down, landed on the ground and were taken away by the hovering way to the main door and out into the front hall. Nobody took notice of the crests. The crew
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    I didn't forget about their implants. Three more chapters. We're inevitable coming to the end of the story. I hope I didn't forget about other things. I'll post chapter 13 today and will reread the final chapters tomorrow. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
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    The Aryaka and the humans gathered early the following morning in front of the Pyramid of the Elder. Varyuka spoke one more time to his people and then the group left Dharana. They went to the cab stop outside of the city where several air cars waited for them. The cars reached Patha at noon. A dark blue sky stretched over the city. Patha was the biggest town on Kunjara and the major trade center of the planet. The suburbs stretched far and wide and were dominated by flat houses with two or th
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    Thank you. Glad you liked the chapter.
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    The men left the cube the following morning. The air was cool and the place was empty and quiet. The Aryaka were still sleeping in their pyramids after the long celebration night. The men walked around and finally sat down on the step of a pyramid at the edge of the rainforest. A sapphire-blue snake uncoiled in the grass, reared up briefly, and then disappeared into the forest. The sun was shining and the air was filled with the intense scent of tropical flowers and blossoms. A huge bird cross
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    Thank you.
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    The Aryaka gathered in the meeting place when the sun was low. The place was crowded with people, males, females and children. Individuals placed trays, bowls, plates and cups on tables of various heights. None of them spoke or paid much attention to the others. A few Aryaka glanced at the men but most ignored them completely. The Aryaka sat down on the steps of four medium-sized pyramids that surrounded the place. They were waiting for the Elder who had not yet arrived. Shesha led the humans to
  21. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
  22. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the story so far.
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    The George Mackenzie Poltergeist I met Brandon in the parking area. He was carrying five bags in each hand and his face was deep red. “Can I help you?” I asked, reaching out my hand. “Oh, thank you,” Brandon said, handing me four bags and taking a breath. “There are more bags in the car.” “A lot of stuff. What’s going on?” I asked as we climbed the stairs to Brandon’s apartment on the fifth floor. “Halloween,” Brandon said. “Are you having a party tonight?” We st
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    A moving walkway took them into the spaceport hall. A crew, maybe twenty individuals, possibly the crew of the giant ship, went to a door. They were tall beings with prolonged heads and olive skin, all dressed in navy blue space suits. One after the other went through a double door system. Each individual placed a hand on the wall before the entrance door to the cabin closed behind them. Shesha had explained the procedure to them. All space-faring crew had finger implants with their personal d
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    Thank you.
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