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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Ekhi

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Ekhi

    Thank you.
  2. Dolores Esteban
    You did a very good job. I feel sorry for the hammer.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Wicked Witch's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great story. Thank you.
  4. Dolores Esteban

    Apple of My i

    Dolores Esteban commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Apple of My i

    Beautiful story. I liked it a lot.
  5. Dolores Esteban
    Funny story. I had to laugh. Thank you.
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    Ekhi

    Dolores Esteban posted new chapter in Ekhi

    Ekhi The spaceship dropped back into real space in close proximity to the third core planet. Tahri Defense Command declared a red alert, the highest level of emergency warning. The rogue cargo ship didn’t reply to the center’s queries and proceeded towards the second planet at a high speed. Tahri Defense Command ordered shoot-down and set a final countdown for Captain Lasta to speak. A transmission from the cargo ship came in at an unusual frequency. Captain Lasta
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    Ekhi

    Dolores Esteban posted a story in Fiction

    Tahri military sent a battleship to Nantahanak, a Tahri outpost in borderline territory. The mission goal was clear: identify the alien force and terminate all alien activities. Ekhi came out of its idle state and discovered the Tahri spaceship.
  8. Dolores Esteban
    OMG, so many good questions and I'm afraid I can't answer them. I wrote this story many years ago. It was reposted here at some time. It was an early attempt at writing a longer story and I have probably not fleshed it out properly and left out many details and background information. Sorry about this. Many thanks, however, for your interest in my story and your detailed feedback. It will remind me to have a closer look at the plot of any future stories of mine.
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    False Flag

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in False Flag

    Thanks everybody!
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    False Flag

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in False Flag

    I was unhappy at first, but suddenly the scene was in my head. Those were good nouns.
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    Very much enjoyed it. I would like to read more.
  12. Dolores Esteban
    Great!
  13. Dolores Esteban
    Amazing. A true surprise. Thanks.
  14. Dolores Esteban
    Great use of the two words.
  15. Dolores Esteban
    Very touching. I would like to read more.
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    Radiated Love

    Dolores Esteban commented on Brayon's story chapter in Radiated Love

    Great use of the two words and an interesting story.
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    False Flag The platform was located at the edge of the Eridani system. The artificial structure had once served as a hub for interstellar space travels and was still monitored by the Eridani monitoring system. No activities had been observed for decades and the monitoring data showed no activities on the platform in the previous days either. The final signals of the missing ship, however, pointed to the long deserted platform. The spaceship with the Orean ambassador on board never arr
  18. Dolores Esteban
    Congratulations!
  19. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you, Val. I'm glad you like my poems. And many thanks for posting the NaPoWriMo thread. It stopped me from giving up.
  20. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you, aditus. I planned to write a story on ashes, but I'm certain I won't find the time to ever write it. So, feel free to 'borrow' my poem.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Dolores Esteban commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    I saw this only today. I particularly like # 7. I've been to Toronto and I know the laundromats well...
  22. Dolores Esteban
    National Poetry Month 2017 Part III - Formal Poetry Prompt: Acrostic Poem. Start from your name, the name of a city or a month. Word: September Summer’s End Pumpkins Time Evening Mists Bring Early Rime *** Prompt: Number Poem. Base your number poem on a sequence of numbers important to you, a social security number, a zip code, a date written in numerals, a telephone number, lucky number
  23. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you, northie.
  24. Dolores Esteban
    National Poetry Month 2017 Part II - Found Poetry Prompt: Found Poetry. Cento. A cento is a poem made entirely of lines from other poems. The cento differs from found poetry in that every line is taken from another poem, instead of just any borrowed material. Don't use chunks bigger than two lines long. Regular meter is not necessary, and neither is rhyme. You can change the tense of verbs, or the person of pronouns, but don't make any large changes to the lines of poetry you bo
  25. Dolores Esteban
    I like them all. # 18 is a thoughtful read.
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