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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Sabat's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Excellent story. It kept me on the edge of my seat. Very well done.
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    Story: Part 2

    Dolores Esteban commented on Ieshwar's story chapter in Story: Part 2

    A touching story, uplifting and sad at the same time. I thought the slow flow of the story was just right. I enjoyed your story and I'm glad you wrote a happy ending.
  3. Dolores Esteban
    Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, Ieshwar. I'm happy the poem worked for you and you enjoyed the piece.
  4. Dolores Esteban
    Thanks for reading and your encouraging review. I'm glad you liked the poem.
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    Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm happy you liked the poem.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A very good story. I really enjoyed it.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great story. I didn't see through it and was taken by surprise. I really enjoyed it.
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    Hope

    Dolores Esteban commented on Bumblebees and Roses's story chapter in Hope

    I absolutely loved your story. It totally drew me in. Very well written, beautiful imagery. Thank you.
  9. Dolores Esteban
    This was a fun read. I liked it.
  10. Dolores Esteban
    I'm totally into ancient mysteries. I love this kind of stuff! And I have been to Tikal. It almost seems you wrote this story just for me *lol* I enjoyed it very much!
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    It's strange, but I like it. There's something powerful about it.
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    Surprise, surprise! I didn't expect so soon. Now I'm going to start reading.
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    Under the SunXerxes, Great King of Persia:I am the Great King; my kingdom has comeMy kingdom stretches far under the sunIt stretches north, south, far east and westBut I'm not satisfied; I cannot restA counsellor:You'll need an army, men who go to warGive them a reason, a cause to fight forMake the men fight in the name of the LordInspire their hearts and they'll take up the swordA scholar:I know Greek lore and their myths inside outThey worship the devil, I have no doubtGod Zeus himself devised
  14. Dolores Esteban
    Xerxes, Great King of Persia, plans to conquer the Greek lands. A poem.
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    I left work earlier that day because it was my mother's birthday. My mother had already switched on the TV when I arrived at her house. It was afternoon here in Germany. I gazed at the screen in shock. The first tower was burning. More guests arrived and we gathered in front of the TV, my mother's birthday forgotten. The second tower was hit. We watched peopled jumping down, we saw people dying. We saw it all live on TV. We didn't talk, we just kept watching for hours. It was a nightmare, a night of horror. I was certain that World War III had begun.
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    Happy Birthday!
  17. Dolores Esteban
    Looking forward to the fall anthology. I also added a poem last week: The Picture Wheel.
  18. Dolores Esteban
    I wrote LOTR fan fiction many years ago, but usually made up my own characters. It was fun for a while, but I finally got bored and started writing original stories. I don't read and write fan fiction anymore and I would not really feel happy with people writing fan faction based on my work. I would not read these stories.
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    I'd tour around and visit ancient places, Egypt, Sumer, Rome etc.
  20. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you, Stephen. I'm happy you like the poem.
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    The Picture Wheelby Dolores Esteban I. Says the man who has grown old I have seen all under the sun But a wise man I have not become I've only learned that all is vain Unimportant, simple, plain What goes up, must come down What's out of sight again comes around One thing ends while the same thing begins All this is vanity, chasing after wind Every thought will be thought again And every word said by anoth
  22. Dolores Esteban
    The wheel of life. A poem in three parts.
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    Oleander Leander cast him a smile before he left the room. Crius looked after him and fidgeted. His heart was beating fast, he bit his lip and put down the cup of wine that he was holding in his hand. He let out a sigh and rose to his feet and then stepped out on the patio and looked down at the Greek Sea. It was midsummer and the sun was ardent. Crius clenched his hands and realized that his palms were covered with sweat. Leander had almost casually touched his hand when he had served him t
  24. Dolores Esteban
    Sounds great. I have voted on the genre. I'll fill in the character bio when I know which kind of world we'll play in. I'd still like to play a bad guy, but not the main villain, and my character might develop and change over time.
  25. Dolores Esteban
    I once got a reveiw that basically said 'Your writing is bad and this shows you're a spoilt brat.' I didn't see the connection. I don't see it now. Such reviews are as useful as a hole in the head. If you want to be a better person, please, try something else.
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