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Dolores Esteban

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  1. I would like to roleplay, but I'm not familiar with Space Pirates and I won't be around in September for ten days. So, well, I'm not sure I can participate. The adjective system doesn't appeal to me much, the point system neither, but I could live with the latter. I'd also prefer a historical setting. I could imagine I want to play a villain, not a bomb-throwing manic, but a character nice on the outside yet with bad intentions. His hidden malicious intent was caused by some traumatic experience in the past. Here lies his weakness. To make the play more interesting, the mods could give the players individual subgoals or subtasks that the others do not know of.
  2. Sorry for being late. Happy Birthday!
  3. Sorry for being late. Happy Birthday!
  4. Good idea. I'm planning to write a Genesis-like project during this year's NaNoWriMo. As you know, the word count is 50,000 words. I'm hoping to not make the story sound dull, but I might get stuck at 25,000 or so, who knows. A few thousand begats might make me a winner. Lol. Copy and paste...
  5. Zombie, I would like to read your story. My attempt: Artaban was a great king. He descended from a long line of great men. First was Sakan, he lived 82 years and fathered five sons: Emenel, Eded, Sinel, Hepham and Melen. Emenel lived 76 years and fathered three sons: Jaded, Esmal and Gamel. Jaded lived 91 years and fathered six sons: Kush, Hamael, Abel, Sagan, Tibel and Hamael. Kush lived 67 years and fathered four sons: Lomel, Rezer, Emeth and Simbel. Lomel lived 86 years and fathered five sons: Shim, Gomuth, Leth, Isher and Gethel. Shim lived 74 years and fathered three sons: Kebeth, Belin and Shesh. Kebeth founded the great city 564 years ago. He lived 77 years and fathered seven sons...
  6. All chapters are posted. Thanks for reading.
  7. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 26

    Thanks, Daddydavek. I'm glad you liked the story.
  8. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 26

    Thanks again, Stephen. I'm happy you enjoyed the story.
  9. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 26

    Thanks again, Daithi. I'm happy you enjoyed the story.
  10. The doors of the black compact car in front of the apartment house opened and two men climbed out of it. They were dressed entirely in black and they wore sunglasses despite the rainy morning. One of the men looked at his watch and then gave the other a nod. They approached the apartment house slowly and then entered it. One of the men pressed a button. The door of the elevator opened and the men stepped in. They reached into the pockets of their coats and pulled out their guns. The elevator sto
  11. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 25

    Geraldine is brainwashed like her father is. Centuries of secrecy and seclusion. They have a world to lose. I don't think they have a free will. They are slaves to their own fanatic and crazy belief. The truly dangerous automatic programme is running in their heads. But now let's see if Jason and his friends can stop the distribution of the viruses. Many thanks for reading and reviewing.
  12. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 25

    Thanks, Daithi. I'm really happy you liked the story, all the twists and turns, and I hope you'll enjoy the final chapter as well. Many thanks for reading and reviewing.
  13. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 24

    Yes, it seems they're a bit nervous. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. We're close to the end.
  14. Alexandre Lefèvre looked at the screen of his computer. It showed the automatic programme. He felt content. The time had finally come. In just a few hours, the world would come to an end, as the prophecy had announced a thousand years ago. A thousand years had gone by, nothing more than the blink of an eye from a higher and more divine perspective. So many men had passed on the secret. They all had firmly stuck to their belief, none of them had ever had doubts, and they all had firmly believed
  15. "Another intrusion at seven o’clock our time. The intrusion was instantly blocked," Geraldine reported to her father at ten past seven. "Our computer experts are trying to locate them. They have left a trace." Alexandre Lefèvre nodded absently. He did not respond. Geraldine shifted in her chair. "Operation Abbadon is under way. Jason Bolding can’t stop it. Time is getting short," she said. "They have probably copied the files, but what can they do? They have just learned of a secret operatio
  16. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 23

    Thanks, Daithi. Glad you liked the chapter.
  17. "Shit," Alec exclaimed and pressed a key. He turned to Jason with widened eyes. "Intrusion detected," he said. "Shit. But no harm done. They have not yet tracked me down. They have just noticed that someone opened the folder." "How do you know?" Jason asked, leaning forward and looking at the many windows on the screens. "Got a message from a programme that is surveying the server activities," Alec said without going into details. He turned back to the screens and studied the windows, and
  18. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 22

    Who will win? We will know soon. I plan to post the final chapters until the end of the week. Thanks again for reading.
  19. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 22

    I feel sorry for Antoine Lambert, too. But we have not yet reached the end. Thanks again for reading.
  20. Antoine Lambert opened another file. He knew he was taking an enormous risk. Sweat covered his forehead and his hands were trembling. Alexandre Lefèvre would immediately take steps, if he found out about his activities. Alexandre Lefèvre was not an idiot, but only an idiot would have written down the secret code in a document and saved that document to the company’s server. Lambert was aware of it and yet he could not stop his search. Only few people had access to the protected section and e
  21. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 21

    We'll know very soon. Thanks again for reading.
  22. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 21

    Thank you very much, Daithi. Glad you liked the chapter.
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