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  1. Perhaps you could include a statement at the end of each chapter submission that reads something like: The mission of Gay Authors is to provide you quality stories. To insure this is successful, we strongly encourage interaction between reader and author. Feedback is important for the success of our mission. Comments are a motivating factor, and they are greatly appreciated by this author. I've been doing this for a long time, and if readers don't want to interact, they won't for many reasons. However, if they are reminded each time they read something they enjoy, perhaps it will mo
  2. I don't think readers really understand how important it is for writers to hear from them. Most writers, like myself, never receive a penny for what we do. We spend long hours writing, proofreading and editing so that we can present the best possible story for our readers. Other writers spend hours interacting with proofreaders or beta readers. We take great pride in what we do. There is nothing more discouraging than posting a work we've labored over for weeks, and then sit back and wait for responses that never come. One of the greatest rewards, and most often the only one, is corresponding
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    Chapter 1

    Hey, Weinerdog! At least I lived to be 100 and died within days of Tony. Can't get much better than that. LOL. Keep writing good stories, AG!
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    Dancing on a Star

    @Talo Segura Thank you for pointing out my typos that came so thick and fast. Two in Chapter 29, two in chapter 32, and one in chapter 33. The horror! I've corrected them so my story isn't a complete mess. I've never claimed to be a professional writer, and the stories are offered for free. If the errors distracted you, you could have gone onto a more perfectly written story. I put over a year and countless hours into this story, so please give me the liberty to make a few errors. Besides, most readers inform me in an email or message, and I gladly make the corrections as they occur. You don
  5. Dancing on a Star is now completed.  

     

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    Chapter 33

    “How does everything feel?” asked Dr. Vorhees as he examined my arm and leg. I replied, “Pretty good, Doc.” He smiled and patted me on my leg cast. “Are you having any trouble getting around?” he asked. I told him that I was able to walk better, and I used the cast only to keep my balance. For the past couple of weeks, I was getting around better. I hadn’t experienced any pain in my arm or leg. “I’m going to take X-rays,” he stated. “If I like what I see, we’ll take off the casts. How does that sound to you?” I responded, “Great!” I smiled and added, “I’ll be able to play bask
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    Chapter 32

    I still can’t believe that Mom and I talked earlier. We even talked about me having a boyfriend, and she seemed to be okay with it. I guess she did need time to adjust to me being gay. I hope she doesn’t go in the opposite direction and try to find me a boyfriend. Now, that would be funny. I went into the family room and worked on my homework. I figured it might be a couple of hours until Jimmy showed up at the door. With basketball practice, and Tracy helping the team with their dance moves, I would probably not get to see them as often. Lyle asked if he could stop by after school, but I
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    Chapter 31

    When I headed out to the car with Dad, Tracy came running across the street. “Can I get a ride, Mr. Woolery?” Dad nodded his head, and Tracy jumped into the backseat. As we pulled off, we saw Jimmy heading our way. He playfully stuck out his thumb for a ride. Dad slowed down and acted like he was going to stop, but at the last minute he sped away. Tracy and I roared with laughter. Dad suddenly stopped, backed up and waited for Jimmy. “That was mean, Jerry,” he admonished my father. He had been calling my father by his first name since we were little. I also called his father Dave. They sai
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    Chapter 30

    When we got home, Tracy, Jeff and Murray headed across the street. Tracy said he had something he wanted to show them. By the way they had flirted with Murray all afternoon, I had an idea of what he wanted to show Murry. In a few minutes, he would probably be dancing naked in front of them. I sat in the chair by the window and stared up into Tracy’s room. He looked down at me and then shut the blinds. Suddenly, I felt alone. I had spent a week in the hospital often with no visitors, but I didn’t feel as lonely as I did now. It seemed like all my friends had abandoned me. I was mad at
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    Chapter 29

    Emily walked me to my first period class. She helped me to a seat and then she sat down beside me. “If you need anything, Jack, just ask.” She smiled, opened her bookbag and took out her literature book. I leaned down to get my book. When I did, another student lightly bumped into my head. I looked up, expecting it to be someone who would threaten me for wanting to suck his dick. Instead, Murray was grinning down at me. He slipped into the seat behind me and started talking to Emily. When the bell rang, Mrs. Dawson stood at the front of the room and took attendance. She smiled when sh
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    Chapter 28

    When we arrived home, Jeff hurried to help me out of the car, but I batted his hands away. Darren helped me up the stairs as Jeff and Jimmy stood watching. I took my seat by the window. Stephanie grabbed Darren’s hand and said, “Come with me. I need to get some things from my room and put in the car.” She smiled at Jeff, Jimmy and me and warned, “Be good, Boys.” Jeff and Jimmy pulled up chairs and sat beside me. I looked out the window and refused to talk to them. I was still mad because of what I had seen in the car. Jeff asked sheepishly, “Are you mad, Jack?” He glanced quickly a
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    Chapter 5

    AG is right. This is his story. He has no inside information on where I am going In Dancing. You're doing a great job, AG!
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    Chapter 27

    @NimirRaj I write about teens and I try to get inside their heads It can be a muddled, baffling and confusing place to go. 🙃
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    Chapter 4

    @chris191070 I know you're a sucker for sad chapters.
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    Chapter 3

    Haha. You've got people hating Sebastian. Of course @Wesley8890 loves the bad boys.
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    Chapter 27

    I awakened Saturday morning when my mother came into the room and sat down on the side of the bed. She announced, “Your father left earlier for a meeting, and he won’t be home until after midnight.” She looked at her watch and added, “I’m going shopping with Karen. I’m taking her to the mall for new shoes, and then we’re going to see a movie.” She reached out and patted my hand. “Is there anything you need?” I replied, “No, Mom.” “But you’re starting school again Monday,” she said. She looked at my bare feet and asked, “Do you need new shoes?” I was surprised how cheerful her mood
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    Chapter 2

    Hahaha, AG. You're a real rascal! I'm loving this story! You're surprising me with your writing skills and story telling. As you mentioned above, we've been friends since I started writing. You've motivated me, and I hope to be able to return the favor. You're doing an excellent job, and I will admit much better than I did when I first began. I enjoyed your description of NYC. You made me feel like I was there. You are also mastering the art of leave them wanting more as you did with dropping Sebastian in at the end of the story. I'm a big fan of cliff hangers even though readers sometimes get
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    Chapter 1

    AG, I love the start of this story! I'm also flattered that you have taken a few of the characters from Dancing on a Star and created a completely different story line. It's very imaginative, and I enjoyed reading the first chapter. I can't wait to see what direction you take TJ and CJ. Don't get hung up with some of the criticism about editing. You have skills, and the rest will come. Some of my first stories contained numerous errors, but readers helped me. You're smart and a fast learner. You'll do well. Hugs, Ron
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    Chapter 26

    “Are you ready?” my father asked as he helped me out of the car. I stood and briefly lost my balance. “Careful, Jack,” he warned as he held my arm. “I’ll be okay,” I insisted as I placed the crutches under my arm and hobbled into the medical center. We got on the elevator and went to the third floor to Dr. Vorhees office. After a twenty-minute wait, the nurse came out and informed us that he would see us. He smiled when he entered the examination room. “Hello, Jack,” he said cheerfully. “How’s the arm and leg?” He walked over and began to examine me. “I’m doing pretty good,” I inf
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    Chapter 25

    I slept like a baby all night. Dad came into the family room before he went to work to check on me. I opened my eyes when he entered. “How are you, Son?” he asked as he approached the bed. I sat up and told him how well I slept. When he asked if I was in any pain, I lifted my arm, moved it slightly and replied, “Not much.” He handed me a glass of water and some pills and told me to take them. Just then my mother entered and asked me if I wanted her to make me anything for breakfast. I was hungry because I hadn’t eaten much at dinner, but I told her that I just wanted a bowl of cerea
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    Chapter 24

    @NimirRaj This was actually done intentionally to prove a point that neither Jack or Jeff are really ready for a committed relationship. They say one thing, then do another. It just shows how immature they are on the matter and their emotions are all over the place.
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    Chapter 24

    Can my life get more complicated? I’m not sure what is going on anymore, as if I understood it before today. I’m arguing with my mother. Jeff likes me and wants us to be a couple. Tracy wants both of us to be friends with benefits. And now Jimmy. I’m not sure what is going on inside his head. We’ve always been best friends, and except for that time we messed around when we were about twelve, we’ve never shown any interest in each other. Even when I was beginning to realize I am gay, I never thought of Jimmy as boyfriend material. If I did, I would have told him that I thought I am gay just
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    Chapter 23

    Jimmy rushed out of the house when my mother entered. I think he was afraid that she would question him about staying with me while she was gone. Jimmy doesn’t hide his feelings very easily, and he probably thought he might ‘confess’ what he had done to me. She entered the family room and approached. “Did you take your afternoon medication?” she asked. I sat up and told her that I had forgotten. I know my face flushed thinking why I had forgotten. She gave me a puzzled look and left the room. She came back with a glass of water and a handful of pills. “Did you and Jimmy have a nice vi
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    Chapter 22

    “I can’t believe I’m finally going home!” My father smiled at me as he attempted to help me put on a pair of loose sweatpants. They appeared to be about two sizes larger than what I normally wear. “We can do this better if you’d stand,” he insisted as he helped me off the bed. He reached down and tugged the pants to my waist. “Now let’s see if we can get this shirt on without as much trouble.” I lifted my arms, and he helped me put it on. After a little struggle, it managed to slip over the cast. “There,” he said as he stepped back and looked at me. “Not too bad.” He kicked a pair
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    Chapter 21

    I see. I didn't mean to imply that he didn't know what happened. Like any one seeing someone in a cast, they would be curious what had been broken and the extent of their injury.
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