Cadude
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I read another story Williams's love and liked it did a search and this story intrigued me. I've now reading the comments from 2017 when the story posted. So far it looks like our students may get together and everyone wants a Man.
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You got to love Nan- man this is really a two sided coin.
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Great story really enjoyed reading it and finding new wonderful friends.
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Man that Mother is psychotic evel woman. I'm hoping she likes prison life 🤬
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Dear Will has a ❤️ the size of Texas.
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A lot of good stuff in this chapter. I liked a reference to finding out about what is happening with the F.B.I. And I love the ending.
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Oh do I love reading about sister Karma. By mom
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I enjoyed the chapter and story, I think I'm a more blood thirsty and would have liked a little more in the two thugs and the fact they admitted to trashing the house making or putting this in a hate crime category, hence the need for F.B.I.
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I really want some one to pay for this for the rest of there lives.
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After 33 years in Social Services I have seen some bad stuff and even in the position I was in which was not child services, I was subpoenaed to testify on behalf of a child in similar circumstances. I remember case turned out in the favor of teenager and I'm glad I could help.
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Worked at social services for 33 years we had a lot of very dedicated Social Workers and Foster Parents. Though, sometime I think it's like bikers seems to only take one to spoil the reputation of the good folks.
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Sounds like a great program, or at least the beginnings of one.
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I have no idea why I love a coming of age story, though I surely do. Really enjoying this, and yes not going to Louisiana any time soon.
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I really like the road trip as the vehicle for the boys and their journey. Well written and pun intended.
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Chapter 1 - This Can’t Be Real
Cadude commented on Bndmetl's story chapter in Chapter 1 - This Can’t Be Real
A story well begun and laid out, looking forward to where we go from here. -
Great story, and yes an HEA ending as life does continue. I liked Jeff's voice used for the story though seeing the - chapters through both Toby & Ron's eyes as they matured and came into their own would have been nice as well.
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Enjoyed the prologue And first chapter. Enjoyed meeting Toby and of course want to get to know him as the story progresses. On a less encouraging note between 20 to 30 % Of homeless teens on the streets here in California come from homes just like Toby's totally disproportionate to the population.
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Well, I'm caught up. Well done meeting new people getting their stories through the conversations. All good stuff.
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Good charecter history. Though I'm not sure what he has againt green dragons or their riders? But obviously he does. Dgar is brown but his wyermate is green.
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‘So, you think there might be more problems ahead?’ ‘I hope I’m wrong, but yes. I reckon there will be.’ Could this be the foreshadowing of events? Well written and much enjoyed!
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Well as the author, you have a fantastic imagination! what a great way to put together some suspense and cary it on to the next chapters. I read the comments a ove and agree F'drun needs a lesson. Think it would be great if D'gar winds up saving his ass and he learns a lesson, like a life debt. Though, that has already been written since I'm behind in my reading. 😣
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That was sooo good!!! Very well written.
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One of the best descriptions of fighting Thread ive ever read.
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I really enjoyed this chapter though I want some more sexy bits :-). Glad the net and had a good first experience with more to come. Don't really like the wing second, thought just because he is an ass I dont want to see and happen to the dragon. Though, I'm not writing the story. Thank you for two very enjoyable chapters.
