Mark M

Oh i absolutly didn't know at all, totaly flabberghasted that you said this that Caroline is aware that Granger is into men. it like i havent been reading the story since mark thought to do it. Double Post much? hehehe

ohhhhh ok now i understand.

why not seven??? that would work. then it would be a 4-3 split, and as 8 are present at the council it would work though i think it could be hard to challenge the monarchy of the deamon realm. Interesting Intersting!!! I like it!!

Alright so the top twelve started out as such: (In no particular order) 1. Tim Urban (Eliminated) 2. Siobhan Magnus (Eliminated) 3. Crystal Bowersox (Eliminated) 4. Lee DeWyze =>THE NEW AMERICAN IDOL!!!! 5. Andrew Garcia (Elminated) 6. Casey James (Elminated) 7.Saved Michael Lynch (Eleminated) 8. Arron Kelly(Eliminated) 9. Katie Stevens (Eliminated) 10. Lacey Brown (Eliminated) 11. Didi Benami (Eliminated) 12. Paige Miles (Eliminated) *I'll update the list as the show goes on* I'll start her off saying i've watched since season 7 and i just tuned into it and loved it because i love music, it keeps me sane in my crazy hecktic life. Anyway i Think Paige Is totaly gone that was brutal!!! Tim is hot and Arron is Cute but Shiobhan has the Pipes that will get her far. My top 5: Arron Kelly, Shiobhan Magnus, Crystal Bowersix, Micheal Lynch, Tim Urban (yes cuz he'd hot...for vocals...probably Lee deWyze) Won't lie I'm cheering for Shobian Arron and Crystal now (as of april 21st 2010)

SEPTEMBER BABY!!! Only thing is i'm born on the 23rd which i see this different all the way around. Some Include Virgo having the 23rd and others the Libra. Either one i'm fine with :P

i love it!!! i had an issue with the sentance in the second paragragh "To threaten to Enter the mind" really confused me till Cia helped me remember that pavel threatened to enter micha's mind!!!! Ummmm can anyone Draw me a model of the Hiarchy of both the imperial family and the underworld "Family" either way i'm wondering how else to understand the bunch of words that were thrown at me there. But i did get the jist of it so don't anyone go to hard work or anything for that!!! Anyway Tiger i love it!!! How is it if one ascends in the underworld that they become evil? i don't get that at all...

Well Ricky i do not think it's the best chapter but an interesting one that's for sure. Stuffing people everywhere is definatly uncomfortable. I do wonder when bath time roles around. Lennox i liked!! why get ride of him! Bah! Get ride of the dish or something JUST KIDDING, But i'm not very into Grangers and Cavendish's Relationship. Grangers and Philip Kelly? i would be more supportive of and i totaly forgot about IGGY!!! Travers was raped at his inition of the brotherhood.....fankly the brotherhood exists(ficticiously) scares me. Myself being subject to the scrutiney of many men would be very uncomfortable. But Granger pulled it off.....i really do want travers and granger to meet up again and then for granger to turn travers down and be rude to him just cuz i've lost all touch for travers now....love breaks barriers....even barriers you would hope it never to break, IE: Caroline finding out Granger likes men. (In which we need a 3 some in that mix.....hahahha!!) Anyway enough blabber on my part. What's next for Supper in a few days??? (P.S what happened to Jervis Noticing the Delectible food? Pompus ass probably has had better!!)

hmmmmm the death of jeff did effect me greatly as i had a person in my life (not anyone to me but girlfriend of my best friend) who turned to drugs only as an option out of her bad....life to put it nicly. Her mom was divorces, raped, beated and everything as a child, then she and her mom took in my best friend because he was havin his family problems himself anyway. So because her mom got divorced her father was in the same town still(population maybe 2,000-4,000). So she had little friends as people were on his side rather then her mothers. Then she tried to control my friend by saying u can't talk to her can't do this and all that shit. Read his personal text messages (Which is another issue i can elaborate on if i'm asked) and always was drama. She tried ODing on drugs 3 or 4 times.....all times ending up in the hospital. So i realated Jeff too somewhat of my own personal experience, which made me hate him as a person to turn to drugs, but given all things said. I'm not Honestly Surprised. I also Disagree with the probable time line. I believe the first attempt my Friends Girlfriend took about 14 months into the relation ship. And then it was about 4 more months untill they finaly were done just in last august. So Jeff ending up dead after 9 months i think is plausible. Adam don't discredit yourself either! you were emotionaly Tramatized by the story which is definatly a high Paid Complement, Sadly Mark has only affected smiles of appreciation from me on most points, i've never really been completly emotionaly compromised on a spin he choose to take, People like "another person", Who u'll meet in Man in motion, and he's fun believe you me. I Never honestly Hated him but he was annoying. Sadly only one author has brought the Emotions out of me and that is to this day Vlista Sadly i wish i could talk to him and get him writing (Sorry Mark A) On a positive note Mark does have a quality that keeps Drawing me back, Be damned if i know what it is but i love it, as of right now in this point of my life he is my first choice for reading a story/chapter. BTW i also hate the effing censorship on the site but what must be done for minor's! -Mark M P.S- Now that i'm done this i hope this is relavent to what i just read, Some of you have used big words to confuffle me a bit :S

I talk like a wilcox. You are very insulting. i must say maybe a wilcox dick should be ordered for you. But what i ment as buggery thing is that granger isn't caught but some of his crew mates are and thus granger is forced to act u dummy As for a hit on me....well that'd be ok just as long as it isn't a ninja....Kinda just watched ninja assassin Well with hood i can understand the no longer intimidation by the king or lord hood....sadly i just miss it the intense "Treading on needles" kinds enlightens me. Plus this all powerful figures have to enjoy showing there power once and a while so making granger feel intimidating once and a while might be in the kings best interest at least. I'd rather have people walking on pins in needles in my court then relaxed in some situations, Pins and needles can be more....releasing at times as an information flood may come out of a person because of a mental break down, that way people lose there heads Now! I was just Critizing Cavendish's name cuz it had dish in it which i find a wierd name, but yet i don't. I like him either way, names kinda funny.

CANADA!! PFFT!! I'll tell you about canada =D I loved it

no1 remember aaron....wierd.....wonder what happened to him then??? Maybe he's still out there 0.0

Ok lets see if i got this correct.....Garret woke up in a Black Space so to speak only to have.....the Angsomthing blood lord announce his relinquishment of his post to Garret.......and then Lady D had a conversation with....someone or something who was sent back to wake something up, but then she must also report her failure?. and there is this balance that must be made. the God-king is returning and some how we teleported to various memories........and now garret has the old Blood lords abilities and memories......... to say the least i'm very confused. Hopefully in the coming chapters all will be revealed.

i loved it. the fight the cossing of soooo many lines. i want chapter 8 right nowww.... so sad. anyway i love where this is heading.

Alright time for me to get involved in this conversation. 1) I'll be Bel'loc's and cale's Adopted son's Sheven Cuz imagin what kind of child...maybe not adopted but biological... 2) I feel like a sandwich now 3) Bel'loc and Cale's Snuggle pretty much killed me in the "cute" Department! 4) We need Drama. I love this story in general has a unique feeling to it. But Cia did you ever mean for this to be avatar like exept.....well.....gay. Course now all u need is some type of a bird. or some such to ride on. I do not like this song/ poem it means some dangers are ahead, if only one of the danger was sex with me for a night, i think they could please me greatly and then i'd give them the key. i also think the sacrafice is probably going to be bel'locs and cales relationship....the lords are going to forbitthem from being with one another. Like it only makes sense they would and then in the end Cale and Bel'loc get together and figgure out the loop hole in some spectacular iluminated light Now to wait for another week. I am feeling a little blue as i type this....fml getting sick. hehehe

I absolutly think It's Great he's talking again and with the soap in the diswasher i was thinking there'd be a bubbly mess. which would be so much freaking fun!!!! BUBBLE ROOOM!!! Anyway i also think that the fact he accused patrick of thinking he'd hot i'm wondering if they all know patricks gay.....cuz all they did was look at him and get mops. like WDF. Any the fact He cooks?!?! like the wife sure as hell can't and HE can! I think they found there new cook! Anyway Next Chapter any time linxe!!

Get to work reading the CAP series maybe then u won't post 50 paragraphes....or end up with double posts.... Cavendish is the lamest name around. Thought i'd let everyone know this, who wants to be named a dish? Anway the brotherhood.....well gross's me out a little althought i'm not into threesomes with three men so well.........lucky it works so well for girls......and Orgy's well what about STD'S or HIV? or the various other sexually transmitted things. Like Granger f**ked countless people. Question who is the other "Royal" Granger f**ked? must have been a long time ago. And i think we need to meet up with........his first captain just to see what he's up to. And i'm also very dissapointed the way Lord Hood's role Has changed, he felt so intimidating. Now the king himself doesn't feel intimidating at all....might want to work on that mark I did wonder about travers but it doesn't surprise me.... i really want to see what granger says when he knows. and that he manditorily has to f**k travers because it's rude to say no!!! lol i really wouldnt mind fast forwarding till then. Or the fact Jervis might take a Shower on Deck!?!? That'd be hilarious!!! No1 would look that's for sure....least maybe everyone but granger. Maybe there will be a one night thing going on? Anyway i think we should have a wrinkler sex scene in Grangers POV. It would be interesting. Or Granger should walk in on him hahahaha If only..! Ummm So granger has this AWESOME looking boat thanks to the port (Madria?) and jervis is coming on board. How splended. Hopefully granger does't have to kill anyone for Buggery. Anyway i'll try and be more active or ricky will catch up on my posts

Happy birthday!!! I think we deserve to see some party pictures after today! U need to remember it all!! haha

Are you asking for smokes? Chew? or Drugs? cuz surly you don't sound like you wish for another chapter!! I also see were your coming from Enric...Statistically mumbojumbo is BLAH. But i do think that a gay member of the royal family might be in order.....that or.....a royal family member could be implicated when only they stumbled apon a scene like that. but ouch if granger could be ostrisized. That sounds painfull. In every way. Anyway.....BWS for the next week. i already have a cough. *COugh Cough*

I find it funny how Bloodlines wins and Neil was in Man in motion.....Frankly! i love it all Good win Sir! Eh?

i suppose i should finaly make a post in the form to let everyone know i'm still a fan and didn't just quit reading. Cuz i'd never do that. I just Quit Reading the form as it got very lengthy and boring. (No offence to posterS) I really am enjoying the story with it's up's and downs and disasters. It's wierd seeing Granger have to fight for his reputation like he is because he never had to before, people could just shut him down it's so cool. Caroline is cool too. I wana see a three some though. That could be interesting! The ships i love. but what i don't understand is that there's all this gold....leaf? on the ship and it's been in battle Surly Granger would want to repair it....or more or less hide it at time's for Cammo.....Like i'm surprised the east indian merch didn't question grangers ship or the tidyness of it as he is the only captain so far as we've heard that washes his crew. That is something REALLY Signifigant i think. Especially if he runs into a smart captain. (Why do we not have a well-known enemy captain that Granger keeps runing into? IE: Pirates of the Carribean-----Five-ten ship fights between the same captains.) So far we have the Floreal. (No name of captain...) like i duno captains must be remembered for the ship not the name of himself. That's just sad.

Well Sadly this inbetween school and work is just not enough and the next chapter has not been posted in foreVER! like COMON! i have to harass everyone today!

Love it!!! JUst as much as i love you. Exept for the face you have stories on the go but now it's like a dead stand still for the next chapter. Oh well i love it all!!

glad to see arron and steve are back on track!! Now i'm really thinking that this story could confirm another Hayes Relitive for Matt!! Rather then just Robbie as his dad. Arron could Clevland it up! get with some girl....and make...i duno Matts mom his daughter!?!?! Then technically She's be a hays! OMG that'd be SO COOOL!! I love how it's jim bashing in every story!!! haha I wouldn't mind seeing who he's brought to bed!! Or i'd like to see what isador thinks on all this..........but this is alas not a story for her to be involved! Unless she steals the diary and reads it all in one night and then knows...the dirty secrets to be revealed muahahaha. Seriously he's such a slow reader. I read the chapter in 15-20 mins.. One "Sit down read" could be upwards to........1-10hours if he loves it alot! Which i know he does!! So mark. i think your...20,000word or such chapters need to turn into 300,000,000 words per chapter!! hahahahah *Greatness is to be awarded*

Hmmm i think i'll revive this as some of us are feeling the effects of the rotation of stories...

ok didn't take age into consideration! Makes sense then!