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  1. bookjunky18

    Chapter 30

    Great chapter. Milan is really coming into his own, since he no longer has to worry about being ill. I like his burgeoning confidence, and how that influence his personality and interaction with others. Maryanne is an awesome person, and I'm glad Milan has someone besides Rory to rely on. As for Milan and Rory's relationship, I like how it's developing. Rory really treats Milan as an equal, and somebody who will be a great support for him. Through Milan and his family, the wolves are going to make efforts towards disregarding their prejudice about humans, and being more welcoming towards them in Portento. I'm looking forward to the town meeting and seeing what becomes of rick and Cade Ogawa.
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    Chapter 27

    Thank you for another awesome chapter. And about the missed update, we all know life happens, so we appreciate the time you take to write such a great story. Also, before that, you had hit us with two updates back-to-back, so that made up for it. Although, I do look forward to reading a chapter each weekend. This chapter started out with a bang. Ilaria was on a mission to find her precious son, and she was willing to whop some ass. Even if those asses were some big strapping men. I liked how even though she threatened them with death and being skinned, they seemed to admire her courage and love for her son. She made a good impression on them. Milan's family will make the shifters have a better relationship with humans, because they're such a good example of humanity. Also, I liked how she called them mutt, and they were more amused than offended. I would think the greatest insult to a wolfshifter, is being compared to a dog. As for Milan's dad, his prognosis of recovering doesn't look too bright. I hope this elusive Iris will be able to help. Milan and his family would be devastated if they were to lose Kiyo. It seems like Milan is now able to decipher someones true feelings rather than what they're actually saying. Case in point, when he was talking to Ilaria. I hope he finds out what's troubling her about Milan and his mating with Rory. Also, I can see the change in Milan already. There's strength behind his voice, and his baring is more confident. I can see his potential to be a great alpha mate and a support for Rory. Rory is gonna be a great alpha. He was able to make his dad feel useful and needed after losing his alpha status. Besides that, he now knows the strength his father has, and his love for him, that allowed him to keep on living after losing his soul-bonded mate. Also, him not killing Rick, and instead saving him so the swamp wolves can be apart of the decision on his sentence was a great idea. That will be a sign for them, that they're considered a part of the Portento pack. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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    Chapter 25

    Wow!! Two chapters almost back-to-back. Thank you. I was disappointed Saturday night when I came from work, and didn't see a chapter update; I always check first thing when I come home and get settled. Getting two chapters totally made up for that. Anyway, both chapters had me sitting on the edge of my seat, metaphorically of course. Principal Rick really deceived everyone, he would make a great actor. I was totally shocked by his different personality in these last chapters, compare to how he was introduced. It's like the opposite of Snape, and how shocking it was to see a different perspective on all his actions, that we thought were out to harm Harry Potter. It was all the opposite of what we thought. Who knew Principal Rick would have such grandiose thoughts, and be so evil and greedy for power. He killed so many people, including Rory's mom and aunt. I'm happy it turnt out that they weren't killed by humans. Hopefully, this knowledge will make it easier for Milan and Nisin, and also for just regular human and wolf interactions. I was so worried about Nisin and Milan. I'm happy Nisin found Jack, because he's gonna need all the support when his dad gets punished. From Rory's insinuation, his punishment will most likely be death. As for Milan, he showed that despite his fragility, he's a brave young man, who's willing to protect those he love with all his power. He was a trooper, having a knife stuck in him for so long. I'm happy everyone ended up being ok, except for the three unnamed Portento pack-mates who it seemed, died. Aslo, I hope Kiyo makes it out of surgery ok, it seems like his wound was grave. Rory is the Alpha now, and I'm happy he didn't have to fight his dad. I kind of feel sorry for him though, because it was sort of forced on him before he felt ready. Also, I'm pretty sure he probably wanted to forge a greater bond with Milan and spend more time with him before taking on the responsibilities of an Alpha. He was already being trained, so I'm not worried about him being a good Alpha to his pack. He's already well respected and accepted, and as demonstrated that he has what it takes to succeed his dad. I'm excited for the next chapters. It seems like Rory his going to do the ceremony that will cure Milan of his illness. I'm happy for that, but things might get a little chaotic when his Family find him missing from the hospital, after everything that happened. I do understand why Rory sneaked him out and didn't inform them. I can't wait to see how Milan is, when he becomes a healthy young man, unencumbered by illness. Thank you again for two chapters. I can't wait for the next ones
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    Superhero Surprise

    Very fun first chapter. I like it. Barrett sounds like a cute kid, while Gideon is more of a grumpy preteen or teenager. They seem to have a good relationship as brothers, which I like.😍
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    Chapter 21

    Arrggghh. I hate cliffhangers. I'm not mad about it though. It gives me something exciting to look forward to. I'm really happy that Ilaria and Ayu as accepted Rory as an important person to Milan. It would've been even better if Kiyo was apart of that acceptance, but I hope with time it will happen. Topher and Matt telling Rory the events at the settlement was funny, because of his reaction of Matt being challenged by Johan. Their meeting will be very interesting. I can't wait. I'm glad what Topher and Matt learned from Johan and Elle gives Rory hope about human and wolf mating. He'll have the support of the contents of the book and a whole community who seems to have no problem with a human/wolf mating to back him up and, who actually see it as a good prophetic occurrence for the soon-to-be Apha to have a human as a mate. The whole event at the end of this chapter was so sudden and out of the blue; it took me by surprise. Things must have escalated pretty badly for them to decide to fight in wolf form on campus while school is in session. Milan showed how brave he is when he decided make sure Rory was okay, even though two huge wolves were fighting right in front of him. I think he had an inkling that the white wolf is important to him somehow. I wonder if the black wolf will turn out to be the one that Rory and company chased onto school grounds, and who disappeared into thin air. Also, he might be the one who is missing from the settlement or Rory's pack. Anyway, I can't wait to see Milan's reaction after Rory's transformation from the white wolf. Another great chapter that gives me something to look forward to.👏😍
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    Chapter 20

    Things are getting spicy. Topher and Matt smelt young human blood in the wild wolves settlement. I wonder who it belongs to, and what it means in connection to Rory and Milan. I'm happy the meeting with the wild wolves seem to have been not in vain, and they seem excited about the fact that Rory might have a human mate. I already like Johan and Elle, and hope Rory meets with them, and eventually Milan too. Also, seems like Rory was right about the wild wolves having answers about this Morgan Lore. I can't wait to learn more about it in the upcoming chapters. As for the Takeda family's acceptance of Rory being Milan's boyfriend, I think it's an eventuality. I think everyone kind of accept it, except for Kiyo. I think Kiyo's resistance comes from the fact that he might suspect Rory is a wolf, and with what's going on in his lab, he definitely wouldn't want a wolf being his son's boyfriend. I'm also happy that when Milan ask Rory about his strength, and the fact that he's hiding a secret, Rory didn't deny it, and Milan accepted that he wasn't ready to tell him. It shows that Milan trusts Rory a lot. I can't wait to read the next chapter.😍💘
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    Chapter 17

    Things are spicing up. There seems to be a juxtaposition developing in terms of Milan and Rory's relationship and Milan's family vs the wolves. While Rory and Milan are getting closer, Rory is finding more things to be suspicious about when it comes to Kiyo and his work with Portento. I'm happy that Rory didn't sense deception from Kiyo, but the kid locked up in the lab and the blood donor conversation that Rory overheard, are worrying; Can't wait for the next chapter.👍❤️👏
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    Chapter 18

    I read this chapter the second the notification for it popped up on my screen. It took me this long to write a review, because I didn't even know where to start. This chapter was well worth the wait, but the anticipation nearly undo me. Practically everyday, I checked for an update, and was very disappointed when there wasn't one. I liked how you had Midori bring his father's body to the trial for treason, because that endeared him even more to the people than he already does. It'll go a long way towards gaining him support from those who might've doubted Feir's loyalty to the empire. Also, it sets a good foundation for when Yoshi announces him as his Prince Consort. The reunion between Midori and Yoshi was well done. The kite scene witnessed by Queen Almira was so adorable, and I'm happy she saw it. I think hearing Yoshi's laughter and seeing them together like that, dissipate the last of her doubt about whether Midori can be trusted, and his love for Yoshi. Another adorable scene, was when Yoshi left them alone, and the conversation that occured between the two, and how Yoshi hovered around after fetching the water. It was so cute. Also, I'm happy they solved the problem of Midori having to go to Feir to help rebuild the state and be Lord. It's sad though that they have to delay being together. Furthermore, choosing Lady Telia as concubine was well thought out. I'm happy she was chosen, because she's not a threat to Midori and Yoshi politically or romantically. Anyway, I'm greatly anticipating the next and final chapter. I'll be a bittersweet moment for all who've followed this story from the beginning, I'm sure. P.S. I don't know how to feel about Yoshi sparing Prince Saki's life. What if later he tries to finish what his father and their supporters couldn't accomplish.
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    Chapter 17

    Literally every day I've been checking my notification for this new chapter, and it was well worth the anticipation. I am so happy everything turned out so well for everyone; Lol, except for Namik and his rebel army. I'm happy Lady Tinya saw the light and decided to give her full support to Yoshi. It was such a rush reading the scene leading up to the battle, when Yoshi rode in front of his allies and their army to galvanise them into battle. It reminded me of the battle scene in The Chronicles of Narnia , and I kind of input the score played from that battle while reading the aforementioned scene. I was so nervous when Midori challenged his dad in a fight to the death, but he was able to beat him. I kind of wished he was speared, so he could face the consequences for his traitorous act, as well as face Almira and Princess Naria.The reunion between Yoshi and the queen was very beautiful. I can't wait for Yoshi and Midori to reunite, as well as for Midori and Almira to meet. P.S. Yoshi is pretty smart for stalling his reunion with Midori to have him lead his father's body back to the capital. I think that will kind of solidify with everyone that Midori's totally loyal to the royal family, and especially to Yoshi. Thank you so much for another great chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next.
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    Chapter 16

    OMG!!. It was such an awesome chapter. I read it with the feeling of standing on the edge of a precipice. I was filled with such adrenaline and anticipation reading each sentence, that I felt breathless. This chapter is like the approaching climax in a movie. Both the scenes with Yoshi defending Midori's honor and willing to lose a large chunk of his army due to those who're against Midori as the consort-to-be and where Empress Almira initiates the protection of the palace into the protection dome was so great. Btw, that scene reminded me of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 2, where the professors cast the spell that created the dome around Hogwarts during the attack of Voldemort and the death-eaters. Anyway, I am so looking forward to the next chapter, and am greatly anticipating the reunion of Yoshi with his mom, Midori with Yoshi and all three meeting up. PLEASE don't have us wait too long for the next chapter.
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    Chapter 15

    Awesome chapter!!! Well worth the wait. I'm happy Yoshi and Midori reunited, if only for a short time. They got to talk things out, know where each other stands in terms of the fight for the empire, and also reaffirm their commitment to each other. I'm not all that happy about Midori's plan to be captured by his father; I'm with Yoshi in that sense. I look forward to the next chapter with a both a sense of nervousness and hope.
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    Chapter 14

    I really loved this chapter. The scene where Almira revealed herself to be a wolf in sheep's clothing gave me such a rush. Now Tailen knows, all this time he thought he had everything under control, and was one step away from having his son claim the throne, was him being played like a fiddle. It was so satisfying to see him get knocked down off his high horse. I have to say, I do feel a bit sorry for his son, because he seem to be a good guy stuck with a power hungry dad. Also, this chapter revealed to me exactly where Yoshi got his intelligence, brain for strategy and ability to emit a powerful force from. When it comes to Midori, I hope it's revealed soon to Yoshi why Midori is staying away. Those council members and others who want to turn Yoshi from Midori might start planting doubts in his head that could cause problems for their relationship. I hope they're reunited soon. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter, but at the same time I feel a bit sad knowing that each chapter means one step closer to the end.
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    Chapter 3

    I'm liking this story a lot. I look forward to each update with anticipation. It seems that Andre and Koji are very much opposites in respect to their position in their family. Andre is the head of his family with a irresponsible younger brother to look out for and protect, while Koji is the younger brother with an overprotective older brother who heads his family's business. I can see a connection before they even meet, with Andre being obsessed with that painting, which I'm sure was created by Koji. Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting story. I can already tell it's gonna be so good that I'll be sitting on pins and needles waiting for new chapters. In terms of POV, I want Lisco. He sounds really cool and I'd like a glimpse of his inner thoughts and how he sees Miah. I can't wait to read more.
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    Chapter 8

    Great chapter. I was grinning from ear to ear while reading this. Dan and Jae's interaction was kyeopta!!!!. i liked seeing Jae's mischievous personality which seems totally opposite from Dan. I like how he becomes less uptight and more open and playful around Jae. Also, the make-out scenes were so sweet. Anyway this chapter was daebak and I'm already dying for the next chapter. I hope the wait won't be long, jebal. Thanks for the great story.
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    Chapter 3

    Great chapter. From this, I now totally get why SM Entertainment was so tenacious when it came to JYJ. From what I know about Korean entertainment, agencies have a huge control over their artists both in terms of their careers and personal life. When they sign contracts, they're essentially signing away their rights. It's like the artists don't even get to negotiate the terms of their contract, they have to take it are leave it. I can get that agencies are territorial about their artists because they invest so much time, money and effort into cultivating them into successful entertainers and musicians, but having them work their butts off with barely any benefit is too much to ask of any human being. Right now from what I understand, even though JYJ has settled their dispute with SM thier still black listed from appearing on broadcasts. Even though they suffered so much, the good thing is that their hoobaes no longer have to deal with slave contracts and unfair distribution of wages. Anyway, back to the story. I thing Dan might have feelings for Jae and that is why he's so determined to help them. I really want to see Jae and that traturios
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    Chapter 2

    I think I'm going to really enjoy this story. because it has a lot of topics that interests me. I'm a huge fan of kpop and korean entertainment as a whole, so learning the relationship between artists and their agencies is interesting. I know from watching kpop bands that they don't get much break and work year round to the point where they rarely see their family or have a life outside of their job. Also, they don't have much rights in terms of what their agencies can demand of them. This whole scenario between Black Shade and their agency reminds me a lot of TVXQ and their situation with SM Entertainment. You're probably aware of their situation, so I won't go into details. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
  18. Great story so far. Reading this brings backs memories of high school. The whole series was in my high school library and I used to be in the library devouring them every break i get. I think I'm gonna love your spin on the series. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope the wait won't be too long. Btw, I wonder how Joshans' father will react if he get a green dragon.
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    Chapter Nine

    I really liked this chapter; it was adorbs I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter with Jordan's niece staying w/ him and how that will change the dynamics. Btw Jordan and Brian were really cute together and it was hilarious how he tried to intimidate Shawn. P.S. I hope I don't have wait as long for the next chapter.
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    Story

    Awesome story. I really like heart-warming stories like this, that are about unconditional love, hope and the strength to go on in the face of despair. I really liked Doug and Wes relationship and how he was there for Wes despite his attempt to drive him away. It was such a wonderful story that I was disappointed to see it was only one chapter long.
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    Summer Again

    Great chapter. I really believe that Jeremy and Alex are soul-mates because they endured so much to be together. Also, I really like Jeremy's parents and I think they're the kid of loving and understanding parents that every kid would want to have. The way you conduct the kind of taboo situation between Jeremy and Alex was genius. If you weren't such a good writer it could've been icky. I really liked that their relationship from the start was not about physical attraction but just pure love. The kind where if one or the other was "ugly" the love would stay the same; Their love was pure and innocent. I think if it was more about sexual attraction than love then I would feel differently about the minor and adult dynamic that happpend in this chapter. Anyway, I'm sorry to see such a beautiful story come to an end, and I hope there will be a sequel.
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    Chapter 20

    Aish. I'm sorry to see this story come to an end, but I'm hopeful that there will be more to look forward to in this wonderful series. I really liked Isiah and Ashran, so I hope you might write a story about them. I can't wait to read Benny's story even though it might cause me to shed a tear or two.
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    Winter

    What a beautiful chapter. I really love Jeremy and Alex relationship. I've been dying to see what happens next after reading the first chapter, and now I'm gonna have to wait for the next one. Crap!! I'm gonna be impatiently waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for creating such a beautiful story.
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    Chapter 17

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    Story

    I love paranormal romance and therefore really enjoyed this story. It was so good that I wish it was longer and I liked the relationship between Tucker and Stelian. I find it fascinating how you come up with these fantastical story lines which I think require a lot imagination.
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