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Nephylim

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  1. Take a look at my profile. That's exactly what he looks like... at least in my own mind.
  2. To be fair to Asher I don't think he realised how fragile Silver is. Yeah, he's strong and brave but he's still fragile. Asher didn't go through what he did, not in the same way, and he thinks he understands but he doesn't, no one does. He's done s lot for Silver in those few days he's known him but he still doesn't understand him like River does, because he doesn't know him like River does and although in many ways Asher has done more for him than River has recently, when he's sick and confused River is who Silver really wants, who he reaches out to, because River has always been there and River understands.
  3. Yeah, Asher is very different to River in so many ways. He pushes Silver and Silver responds After having been protected and...yeah, held back, for so long I guess the pushing is liberating. I doubt he would have been able to do this if River hadn't nurtured him in the beginning but River never got the message that there is a time to hold close and there is a time to let go.
  4. Riiiight. If I had left a story like that I would have been hung drawn and quartered. I know what you're after hun and I have done the same thing myself BUT I don't think you've gone far enough; not at all. It's too far away from a resolution. I hate to criticize this story because it is just totally awesome and it completely drew me in, but really don't think you should end it here. It needs more; not a lot more but enough to bring it to a conclusion. Okay it can be an enigmatic conclusion but there HAS to be an ending of some kind or all it leaves is irritation and unsatisfaction. Oh and as far as i know Kali is a bad ass bitch ie girlie/
  5. Nephylim

    On the Spot

    |Hmmm I don't think this makes the water less murky at all. So, clearly the photos and papers are important, probably blackmail material. And Ed and Jack are in trouble with Ed's dad for 'losing' them, because someone was supposed to be picking them up from the car. Whether John knew that and stole the car deliberately or not is not clear for now. Mark was in the wrong place at the wrong time and stole the wrong car... or did he. Smells a bit like a set up but who and why? What I really really can't get my head around is why Mark doesn't remember what's been going on. He was clearly lucid enough to talk... to tell them Zack's number even so why can't he remember any of it now... that seems really strange... but then that's me, I pay attention to that kind of thing. See what you've done lady!!! You've sucked me in and made me THINK. Do you have any idea how dangerous that is
  6. Nephylim

    Wake-up Call

    Oh hell, what's ge getting into now. I'm scared for them all. Nice going darling
  7. He's going to bring something down Do you love the new Silver. I do... far too literally
  8. Now you come to mention it, I suppose it's possible. Hmmm... all I can say is that I hadn't intended them to but maybe they have
  9. Ariel leads me along the pavement, back in the direction of the club to a shop that we must have passed but I simply hadn’t noticed. Why would I? It is unassuming on the outside and I am not even sure what kind of shop it is until I step through the door. It’s a hairdresser’s. I have only ever, that I can remember, been to a hairdresser once. When I was with the Master I took care of my own hair. I took a long time over it so that it would look good. It was beautiful; strong and shiny and it
  10. After our shower Asher takes me back to his room and insists on lending me some of his clothes as the only ones I have are the ones Ariel stole for me and the ones I walked in wearing, and they are party clothes. The party seems like a long time ago. The pain has faded, except when I think about it... which is only a few times a day now. When I think about it the pain is as fresh as the day it happened. “Where are you?” Asher says gently, smiling. “What?” “Where are you? You seem as
  11. Thank you darling. I am so glad that you have enjoyed what I have done so far. I'm done done yet, you know... not by a long, long way
  12. Peeking out from behind a tree in the forest. Hmm... prepare for more CPR
  13. I think there is something in that and it is certainly true but it is also true in the more literal way. Of course, River's 'man' in case you haven't yet realised it, is Ben
  14. I think you are right to hope... unless what you are hoping for is a reconciliation with River any time soon. Silver needs to go back to move forward and taht is most certainly where he is going.
  15. I don't know. i think he may just want to be someone different and chose the only other name he identifies with. A new home, a new start, a new life... oh yeah, definitely a new life.
  16. Thank you darling. I'm glad you've stuck with me until now, through all the bad times. I think this is a real turning point and I hope you like the new direction
  17. Huge Hugs. You're beautiful no matter what you look like
  18. Giggle River is doing his best but his whole...'poor me' attitude is going to get him into so much trouble and he will have absolutely no one to blame but himself.
  19. Nephylim

    The Phonecall

    WOW... You blew my mind babe. I'll be back
  20. Please don't what???? Please don't hurt me
  21. Yeah well.... Thanks heaps hun
  22. Julia is awesome. She makes things happen. Unfortunately sometimes even she is not enough
  23. I LOVE Sam. He is just... Sam. He's a big, solid, sensible, caring, man. And his wonderful wife and son pay testament to that. It's just a shame that River doesn't take his advice often enough
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 15

    Thank you darling; you're pretty amazing too. Thank you from me and my boys. We owe you
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