Nephylim

Oh for heaven sake. That was a really lovely chapter with a way too lovely ending and I just know he's going to screw it up. *sigh*

Well that was undesirably hot and i am falling for Kyle big time but Coop? Since when did he turn into such a twat? Ben? really? He's damn lucky to have a boyfriend like Kyle I just hope he doesn't screw it up

That was so bloody shocking. Awesome

The twist at the end was fantastic. I really thought that it would end up with them being together. WOW. No wonder the asshole is sill on his own. Just goes to show that if something looks too good to be true it usually is. The one I feel the most sorry for is Cody. Don't know why, but I liked him. I hope Jamie will move on to something so much better.

Sounds like an interesting situation. At least you have a mattress and no TV to stop you sleeping. HUGS

Thanks hun. This was such a fun story to write. I'm glad you liked it.

Oh there are always plenty of grim twists in my stories Thanks for the interst and the review

You really are fixated on Silver's past aren't you. Well, you have two chapters to go before that catches up with him (kinda) and no, the silver buckle really wasn't anything to do with slavery. I have one of those Ariel is the sweetest thing EVER. And as for Silver and Asher... well of COURSE Silver doesn't really love him. Silver only has experience of one true love (not even David was REALLY love was he? ) So...

Thanks so much everyone. Check out Death Knight's blog on Blogger.com He hasn't written one yet but watch that space Just for information livejournal now has an over 13 policy

Aha... yeah, you've got it

My son, who is 10 really really wants to blog. I have spent the best part of the afternoon trying to find a place he can blog. I keep finding sites that are either incredibly complicated to use, or seem to be aimed at adults, or cost a load of money. Does anyone have any recommendations about somewhere he can blog happily and easily. He's not stupid when it comes to the internet but his mother is.

Silver really needs Asher. River was suffocating him and he would never have been able to free himself because he loves River and would never have fought hard enough against him. I'm sorry but the relationship between River and Silver had become desctructive and Silver was regressing rather than progressing. He was behaving like a child becuase he was treated like a child and it had to end.

Tony is furious. I don’t know why he is furious but it’s not that hard to guess. Everyone is walking on eggshells and Asher is angry too. I slept most of yesterday and all night. When I woke up this morning Asher was gone but he left me feeling warm. It took a long time to remember what happened yesterday but when I did I got shaky and scared again. I remembered what I did...what I said. Tears sprang to my eyes. Did Asher hate me now? Was that why he’d gone. Things didn’t get better when

Well I know I still am. The poem is about someone I used to know. He was a partner of my brother and he really did carrry me on his shoulders when I was about 7 or 8. I miss Daniel and I am so glad that you like 'his' poem

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. It is very symbolic, but just to me I am So glad you posted a review Thank you

Experiment with things that are outside your comfort zone. Try writing from a different POV. First person, third person, past, present, alternating POV by chapter, changing POV, writing stream of consciousness which is the one that really really gets into the character's head because you 'are' the character, telling things exactly as they happen. Don't think of a story, let it come to you. Live with the characters and Mike said. For the time you are writing 'be' them. Let them speak to you, interact and provide you with dialogue and take your story in different ways. With some of my stories the route the plot has taken has totally shocked me because it is very idfferent to what i had intended. Let yours do the same. Try planning and researching. Try mapping out the whole story, loosely or chapter by chapter Try writing with no idea where the story is going just letting it take you. Write as if they are journal entries or with an outside force dipping in and commenting or as blogs or anything at all that takes your fancy Try anything you can think of that is new and you haven't done before. Most of all have fun.

What are hobbies for? To be relaxation and bring richness to your life. If your work has taken over your life then it is a bad thing and you should ease up and take up a hobby. I your work is an integral part of your life and is what you want and enjoy to do... why fight it and who needs hobbies. You are the most person dear one

I really hope you get rid of the pain soon hun. Hospitals are not nice places to hang round in. Hope next time your nurse is nice to look at and good at their job

I think so too. I loved the way the ghost evened the playing field. I have a feeling that these three are going to do just fine. Thanks for the review

Godsdammit that was f**king awesome. Talk about edge of the seat. I love it and LOVE the ending

Wow. Love it. I wonder if Beautiful survived.

How interesting. Beautiful sounds dangerous. Sweet

That was beautiful. The relationship was precious and as long as the memories, and the bird, go on, so will she At least until the memory making passes on to someone else and she becomes the strong base on which the future is built

I like the way you write it's just short Sandi has a purpose and when she has served it I cast her off like a worn out shoe Unfotuntealy I tend to find that women are bit part players in my stories. I am so trying to write a lesbian one but I keep getting sidetracked.

OMG IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY How many hugs can I fit in here HAPPY BIRTHDAY :wub: