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    Stetson Boy

    Nephylim commented on Johnathan Colourfield's story chapter in Stetson Boy

    Wow. that was just... WOW. I was swept away on that motorbike. What a turn around. He was a bad person yet... I loved him. no description except for the red hair and the clothes. I 'saw/' them both and I loved them You sure are maturing in your writing hun. Mam is very proud
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    Chapter 1

    Nephylim commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What can i say. These two are just totally awesome. Poor Chris. But at least he knows his life is never going tobe boring.
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    Chapter 1

    Nephylim commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I would like to see more too. it is such an intersting story. You are one of those people who can give us a novel in 1500 words. it's not as wild as your usual fare and it's poetic in a very different way. It shows your true breadth of skill and I love it. Connie sounds like such a wonderful person. I wonder if Rachel remained Rachel just because of her. The one word at the end makes a hell of a difference and says such a lot. How can you say so much in just one word I would like to see more... but...
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    Hold 32

    Nephylim commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Hold 32

    I really liked that although I didn't quite understand the end. Did the tiger close the door and, if so was he mutated? I figure they are right, though. I would presume I'm not wanted too if faced by a tiger Lovely story
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    Did that tug at the heartstrings or what? I have to say that you didn't lose me at all. I think I understood where you were going and what you were trying to do except that I didn't if you see what I mean. no, probably not What I meant was that the story hooked me and made perfect sense to me so that i guess i knew where you were going because I went there with you. Anyway cool story really nice ending
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    Chapter 1

    Nephylim commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I certainly hope that there will be a full length story from this. I am so in love with Alex, there is something almost childlike about him and I like that quality in a man... anyone. I think their relationship will go from strength to strenght. I also like the way the story started so ordinarily but then became extraordinary. Loved is darling
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    You know, I think that Kismet is my favourite of them all. He's so sweet and intense and well sweet Yeah some quiestion are answered but there are so so much more. I have read too much not to be confused but gradually the confusion is clearing and I am beginning to think that maybe the threads are actually coming together bringing the brothers closer to being reunited. Want more sex from Rix though sexy beast.
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    Really?
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    I have absolutely no idea. Sophy is so self obsessed that she really thinks she's inthe right. Unfortuntely there are WAY too many people like that out there unfortunately
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    Thank you, dear one. I have relayed your comments to Efan and he sends you a hug
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    Thank you sweetheart. I passed on the message and you should see the smile
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    Thank you hun. I was very proud of him. He writes loads of poems and stories but this is the first one I have persuaded him to let me post
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    Well, he's started writing blogs and he is INCREDIBLY imaginative but he's dyslexic so I wouldn't hold your breath for anytime soon
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    A poem by Efan
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    As bright as day As dark as night Death and Life shall always fight But which one will win Which one won’t Even thought they fight with all their might Only one will win Death will always come over Life But Life shall live on even when you die Light shall always break through But Darkness shall always be there You decide which one is feared the most Which one is enjoyed the most You decide that’s all I have to say Thank you for listening
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    The house is packed, I mean totally packed. There are people standing, crowding into every space. They are not the usual crowd either. I recognise the kind from when I danced before. They are rich and powerful, wearing designer clothes and the veneer of civility. And it is only a veneer because underneath they are animals in the way that only the very rich, who know they can buy themselves out of any trouble they get into, can be. They see people as objects and anything they do to them is their
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    Story

    Nephylim commented on Young Sage's story chapter in Story

    I LOVE the ending. That was cool... from my observations
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    Thank you hun. Yeah there are some rather serious twist in more ways than one. I'll post a new chapter tomorrow and it will bring us one step closer to the inevitable.
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    I thought you were talking about me... well not the spoiled and complaining little brat part but I am far more than a tad immature... ask my family
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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY DARLING HAVE THE BEST DAY EVER :wub:
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    Welcome to GA hun. I have extremely fond memories of visiting Newfoundland. It's a fabulous place full of fabulous people. I saw bears and elks and ate buffalo and saw whales and ice bergs in the harbout in June. Anyway enough remeniscing. Welcome and I hope that we see some of your writing soon. It is scary to put them out there for everyone to see and comment on but OMG it feels good that something you created is being shared with so many people. Give me a shout when you post and I will read it and be your first reviewer.
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    Well said. I totally agree.
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    So do I When I first read it I thought you said you had a crush on me. Now I'm broken hearted
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    Chapter 1

    Nephylim commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Oooh I like it. Deliciously dark. I loved loved loved the way it ended. Serves Geldin right. I would love to see this expanded
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    We all have our daemons. Different but just as powerful and we escape in different ways That was so powerful and so sad. A world of contradiction trapped in lines of power and beauty. It made me think. Isn't the the point. Beautiful
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