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Nephylim

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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 9

    You could very well be right there. It's a damn shame bodyguards in the UK can't arm themselves.
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 8

    Drew absolutely can't save then, at least not by himself. Fortunately, he has help.
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 7

    Funny you should say that....
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Thank you so much for all the comments. You're absolutey right about Aria. There's so much more to him than anyone sees, I think, but that doesn't mean he isn't vulnerable in ways we haven't even touched on yet.
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    I think everyone I write has at least two sides usually more
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Thank you. I had great fun researching and writing this one
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Thank you You're the first one to suggest a trip to Wales. You know, you could be right there - at some point.
  8. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    Absolutely bat shit crazy. There are a few of those in this story
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Thank you! Oh yes, this story has as many twists as any I've written. I hope you enjoy them all
  10. Nephylim

    Chapter 12

    As soon as she’d gone, Drew fired up the state-of-the-art computer that sat innocently on the desk in the corner. Its sleek silver casing and custom-made, curved monitor belied what a monster it was under the hood. One thing that had surprised Drew most about the boys was how technologically gifted they both were. It angered Drew that such obvious talents in maths and computing were going to waste because the boys had never been given the opportunity to advance them through proper schooling. He
  11. Nephylim

    Chapter 51

    I keep jumping in at odd intervals, but I have been following and this is one of your best stories yet. I'm loving it
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    I just like messing with people
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    Know what? You could be right. Or not.
  14. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    There has definitely been a lot of time and effort put in over a long period of time. The motive is definitely fuelled by malice and driven by control and manipulation. That's only the beginning though
  15. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    Aria hasn't had a panic attack before. Aria has significant attachment issues. The thing that sparked it this time was the belief that his mother was going to replace him with her new baby and won't want anything to do with him anymore. I guess it's almost Stockholm Syndrome in a way, in that no matter how abusive Mommy is, at least she's giving him the attention he craves. Now, he fears that attention will be withdrawn altogether and he doesn't know how to process that information, that fear he's going to be abandoned by the most important person in the world to him, next to his brother. Anyone who wants to be licenced to do close protection has to attend an accredited training school. The training includes first aid training. He's also done a full first aid course and has experience in field medicine. When you're working special ops, you're often way off the radar. There's no one to help you but the other men in your unit. As Drew says, it's not uncommon for soldiers to have panic attacks. He's also received treatment for them himself. As for the motive...well that will become clear in time.
  16. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    I love pulling rugs, you never know what you might find under them, and I like to see towers fall Drew might get kidnapped. Or someone else might. I'll slip you one nugget. If someone does get kidnapped, it won't be Drew who finds them
  17. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    Oh he is. He definitely is. I promise you that the person behind this so bad and will go so far and sink so low that they'd give the pigs stomach ache, so we'll have to look for a new way to get rid of the body.
  18. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    He's certainly going to try.
  19. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    To be honest, it could be anyone at this point. Is no one suspicious of Alicia? What about the butler? Isn't it always the butler? Wouldn't it be deliciously twisted if it WAS Mommy dearest though?
  20. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    Actually, there is evidence that a shot of alcohol is good for shock for many reasons. First is the psychological effect. Second, it stimulates the brain to release chemicals that help counteract the adrenaline rush, and third, when the body is highly stimulated it burns sugar fast, and causes shaking and exhaustion, the sugars in alcohol help. Okay, it's not a lot but it's better than tea or coffee because the caffeine makes it worse rather than better. The letters have been getting gradually worse and it looks like things might come to a head at the party. Maybe
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    You know me...I ALWAYS have twisted stories. More twists to come. This is a long one.
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    I very nearly spat my drink on the keyboard. Twatopotomas is my new favourite word!!!!
  23. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    For one burning hot moment Drew almost ran after her. He managed to reign himself in because if he had gone it wouldn’t have ended well for anyone. The last thing Aria, or anyone needed was their mother taken out in an ambulance and him in a police car. “Aria.” Amara’s cry filled the deafening silence and Drew turned in time to see Amara throwing himself to his knees next to his brother who appeared to be gasping for air, one hand at his throat. “Aria, please. What’s wrong? What’s ha
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 10

    You know, after reading your comment on Angel's Heart, it occurs to me there is rather a theme of nightmare mothers. I LOVE the idea of the new baby turning out to be trans. Sadly, we don't go that far into the future but it would definitely be appropriate karma, and one thing's for sure no matter what the little one decided they'd have massive support from their adoring brothers.
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 10

    You are not wrong. I feel sorry for them too. On the other hand she does spark of an event which has very far reaching consequences. Watch this space
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