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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Aw, what has poor Amara done to you? Hehe. You're right about one of them.
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Relationships are tricky things. They change over time. As humans, we need relationships - friends, parents, lovers etc but so often make a complete mess of them. Drew and Aria's relationship Aria is very much more invested that Drew who still sees Aria as his charge, albeit one he's very fond of. To some extent, at least, Drew has to keep the relationship professional because he has a job to do and getting too personal could put that at risk. As for Ben and Amara, I'm just writing a very interesting scene about their relationship. It's a lot of fun - well at least to me, but I'm evil
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Hehe. I'm not arguing with any of that. Thank you for being nice to Amara, you're so right.
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Oops. Thanks for pointing it out. I fixed it. No idea where the name Dale came from, probably some tv show or film I was watching at the time that got stuck in my head. It's weird in there.
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    I think my own prejudices might be creeping in I'm a Welsh girl from the valleys just like Drew, and whilst I got to know some pretty wealthy people when I was at university and appreciate not everyone is a dick, I've met my share of stuck up, entitled arseholes too and it seems that once you get above a certain threshold the numbers of the latter increase rapidly Poor Amara. He's got his knickers in a twist, no doubt, but remember, he's seen his brother hurt over and over, and knows he has attachment issues so he's looking out for his little bro (okay only by minutes but still....)
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    They travelled in silence, with Aria staring out the window and Drew trying to find something to say. The journey wasn’t long, to Drew’s great relief, and Aria opened the door before the limo had quite come to a halt. Drew scrambled after him. Drew found himself standing at the bottom of a set of shallow steps leading up to a massive mansion, lit up like a Christmas tree. Glancing around, Drew noted a circular drive, around a central fountain, that disappeared into darkness. There was a sens
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    It's fascinating and makes so much sense. I just didn't know it had a name. That is so going in a book
  8. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Awesome! I didn't know about tall poppy syndrome. It's fascinating. Thank you. It makes a lot of sense. And I am NEVER going to pass it by when someone compares me to Orson Welles. I'm not saying I agree, but I bow down to you, Sir.
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    An interesting thought about the power of suggestion. At no point have I ever said that Amara has taken any drugs. Not even the spliff made it into either his hands or Aria's.
  10. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Heh. I somehow get the feeling you don't like Ben. I dont blame you
  11. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Check out my blog. I couldn't figure how to put it in here.
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Don't know what was the deal with the link. I wasn't able to get the pic in here. Check out my blog
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Interesting thought. Hold on to it
  14. If you have no idea what this is all about, check out the comments on Aria Graice chapter 5
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    Chapter 5

    Yeah but tell me you weren't thinking this (couldn't get it in here so check out my blog)
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    Chapter 5

    Poor Amara. Okay, I guess he is a little dick, but he's under a lot of pressure at the moment. Ben, on the other hand has no excuse
  17. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Again, you're not wrong. I've seen first hand what taking drugs can do. I've only ever tried drugs twice. Once I smoked a spliff and once I tried magic mushrooms. Whilst neither were terrible, neither were they great. Should I have tried? Probably not. Am I either sorry/glad I did? Probably not. However, I will do the best I can to ensure neither of my children even go that far. I also think that a whip can solve all kinds of problems
  18. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    OMG!!! You made me spit coffee!!! I love it.😂
  19. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Ooohhh. You are so not wrong there
  20. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "Troy me and praise problems " I suspect it might be a typo? Or maybe I'm just out of the loop The twins have certainly suffered from people who don't say no, people who actively encourage and people who lie. I'm not an expert on drugs, but I think he may very well have taken something to boost his performance as he hasn't finished performing by any means.
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    The human mind is a strange thing. Longs for freedom but doesn't do well when it gets it. Aria and Amara have been surprisingly well adjusted, but not anymore.
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    With these two I think just about every situation is touchy I think you're right about celebrities. There's no one there to challenge them. People, especially teens, need boudaries. They need to push boundaries and they can't do that if there aren't any. They just keep pushing empty space, getting further and further away from the safety zone with no one they care about to pull them back. Aria and Amara have some real issues bubbling away and Ben isn't making them any easier, that's for sure.
  23. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    By the time the concert came to an end, Drew knew everything there was about his suite-mates and was best friends with them all. He was pretty sure that if any one of them saw him in the street the next day they would walk straight past, either because they didn’t remember him or because they didn’t want to, unless Aria was around. After all, what could he do for them? The same people tagged along as they made their way back to the backstage room. Aria had been jumping around the whole time,
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Thank you. Check out my blog and you can see some pictures
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    The ride has only just begun. Sadly most, if not all of the Graice twins' friends are what Drew thought they would be - spoiled, shallow, brats.
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