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You're starting to sound paranoid
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Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It really picks up pace toward the end. I hope you keep up without getting too breathless
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Ah, but maybe that's the point. Maybe the Professor doesn't WANT him to remember. Maybe it's really important that he doesn't
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Annie has a job to do and it's effectively a war. Simon definitely has a point. There's a lot more at stake than one man, even if he is an important one. On the other hand, Adam is Annie's best friend and she loves him dearly. I don't think Annie can help herself
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They definitely have a mental connection as well as a physical friendship. That's Annie's job. Her part in The Game is to form a psychic connection between key players. She's not the only one, of course, but she's the strongest on 'our side' As to how much, if any of Adam's mind is left to 'transmit' is another question.
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Civilisations have risen and fallen on a turn of The Game. One man's life isn't going to make much difference. Adam's the end player though. He's the only one who can end the game and no one knows how he does it, so they can't afford to kill him in case they inadvertently lose. However, even though he can't die, doesn't mean he has to be looked after.
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Sadly, I think you're right. James probably wouldn't have stopped it, although I'd like to think he would have. James is a spoiled brat and a product of a certain upper class mentality - that he's better than everyone else so their rules don't apply and he can do anything he wants to anyone he wants. It will get beaten out of him eventually.
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The interesting thing is that I think Sacha would find it a lot easier to forgive James than a 'normal' person would. At the moment James has done nothing more than Sacha expects everyone to do. He hasn't yet got the message he's good for anything else. Yes, something drastic is needed before they have a chance of any kind of good relationship - but drastic is what I do well
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If only it were that simple
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Frank is a good, if driven and somewhat blind, man. He won't punish James too harshly, but that doesn't mean that someone else won't. James will not just get his eyes opened but will get them pried and pinned open
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Frank is a good, if driven and somewhat blind, man. He won't punish James too harshly, but that doesn't mean that someone else won't. James will not just get his eyes opened but will get them pried and pinned open
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James gets his eyes opened, no doubt about that
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Nik is exactly what Sacha needs. As for James - it won't be Nik who shows him what Sacha's going through, and what he went through, but he gets the message for sure Thank you for your continued support. I love your reviews.
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Oh, James will get his eyes opened. Don't doubt that. It might not be in a good way but he definitely gets the message. As for Nik - he's and angel but even angels don't always have easy rides.
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Nik is a force to be reckoned with. Between him and Lacey, Sacha is in safe hands... for a while
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Nik is a force to be reckoned with. Between him and Lacey, Sacha is in safe hands... for a while
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I know. I'm so sorry. I've been moving house and things have been totally crazy. It was all quite quick and we were on holiday the week before so it was home from holiday, pack then move the next day. I will really, really try to be more consistant and reliable.
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Sacha lay, staring at the ceiling. It was the same ceiling he’d been staring at for over a week, and it was no more interesting than it ever had been. The benefit of looking at the ceiling was that he was able to let his mind go completely blank. He liked it when his mind was blank and he was managing it more and more with every passing day. In the week since James returned things had gone downhill sharply for Sacha. At first, it hadn’t been too bad but once James got in his stride, he found
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Thank you! It was a story that came to me at a funeral and demanded I write it. I had to sit down straight after and write it. I'm glad it pushed buttons for you
