Nephylim
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The kind of headmaster I used to have. He'd come out to the house if we were 'mitching' and he used corporal punishment until he retired. He didn't use a cane but a 'dap' a running shoe, across the backside. Thankfully I never experienced it but plenty of my friends did. Ypu're absolutely right, he was glad it sopped Ash coming to school anymore. It solved a problem he didn't know how to deal with
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I know those boys and the fact is, they didn't beat Ash because he was gay, they beat Ash because he was mouthy. He hit back. If he'd kept his mouth shut and his head down he'd have been fine. That's the way of it here. If you have a smart mouth you get a kicking. It's a ways of life - fighting is the norm. Okay, they went too far, but people often do. I'm pretty sure they didn't really mean to hurt Ash as much as they did, just to 'teach him a lesson' for getting the better of them and giving them 'lip'.
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I can't thank you enough. HUGE hugs to you and limitless thanks
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A Story to Touch the Heart
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in A Story to Touch the Heart
Thank you. I hope I didn't make you TOO soggy. This is one of my favourite stories. Although... I keep saying that recently -
That's one of the most wonderful reviews ever. To think my darlings have made a friend warms me so much. And for you to say you have grown with them is a dream for every writer.Both these stories are released as ebooks and are listed on Amazon, Smashwords and Goodreads. It would mean an awful lot if you would review them. (I'm not sure if you can leave a review on Amazon without buying the book so Goodreads and smashwords would be just totally awesome.)
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Thank you. I enjoyed writing this story so much and I am totally, hopelessly in love with Silver.
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Chapter 18 - Trying to Make it Better
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Trying to Make it Better
Let#s wait and see, shall we -
Chapter 17 - Hard Choices and Wrong Decisions
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Hard Choices and Wrong Decisions
Someone or something. True, it can't go on. Something has to give. -
Don't forget to eat. This is a bit much on an empty stomach. River is still in an impossible position. He's caught between the devil and the deep. Although Ben would be perfectly okay with Sam, all River sees is a boy who has just lost his parents, and he's obviously overlaying his own feelings about that. Also, Sam has been berrating him for treating Silver like a child and he's trying to correct that. All in all not a good situation for anyone to be in.
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River really is in a terrible situation. Certainly from his point of view, he has to choose between his brother and his lover. I was afraid people would lose sympathy with him, and I'm glad you understand.
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Chapter 13 - The Conference
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - The Conference
Wow, great praise indeed. I work in this area and I know how the state can destroy lives. I deliberately set out to show that and it seems I succeeded -
Enigma II is very different and involved purely mental rather than physical torment. We also get to hear SIlver's voice and meet one of my favourite characters of all time - Ariel. Gods Silver and Ariel together are dangerous
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http://globalfreedomcenter.org/GFC/humantraffickingstories http://www.justiceforyouth.org/global-human-trafficking-statistics/ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sexual_slavery. I lost a lot of the research I did and the specifics of what happened to Silver are fiction.
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Chapter 6 - Making Progress
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Making Progress
What can I say about that. WOW. Thank you. I'm the one who's honoured that people read and enjoy my work and even more so that they take time out of their busy lives to comment on them. Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story -
Chapter 6 - Making Progress
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Making Progress
What can I say about that. WOW. Thank you. I'm the one who's honoured that people read and enjoy my work and even more so that they take time out of their busy lives to comment on them. Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story -
Thank you so much. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story. You always make me smile
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Thank you. I haven't written female characters for ages so I thought it was about time to have a couple of strong women around
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Thank you One day, I will extend this one, I'm sure, but I have so many projects on the go now.
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They're panic stricken. No one knows what to do and no one has courage to do it. They're crippled by their lack of experience of the world. You'd think they'd have more of an idea wouldn't you given they live close to the earth. Meh. They're like a load of kids. I wonder what will happen now Caleb isn't there. He was evil but he was their father.
