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That's a good point. I think James could give him a run for his money You're welcome hun. Thank you for reviewing
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That's a good point. I think James could give him a run for his money You're welcome hun. Thank you for reviewing
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Oh, it's going to get much more fucked up, trust me
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Thank you I promise there is more sweetness to come - eventually
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I don't think it's a surprise to anyone that someone can thrust God down your throat then hurt you. Sacha has a lot of healing to do and he needs help. It's not going to come from james, that's for sure.
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Sacha definitely needs to figure out who he is, but he can't do it on his own. There are definitely several things coming up, and very few of them are good.
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You know me too well
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James is a horrible brat, but trust me he pays for it.
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James is Lacey's little brother. She wants to think the best of him, and she really thinks that if he spends some time with Sacha he will see him as he really is - a damaged boy who needs friendship - and his brother. She doesn't want to see how far James will go to hurt Sacha, although deep down she must do.
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Thank you. That's some compliment year olds are. Everyone knows kids can be cruel
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Thank you. That's some compliment year olds are. Everyone knows kids can be cruel
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Something like this tears up families. They leave scars that can sometimes never be healed. In this case it's anyone's guess whether it will be healed or not
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James is 16 and a spoiled little rich kid who blames Sacha for everything that's gone wrong in his life, and in particular for 'taking his father away'. He thinks he hates Sacha and he's a malicious little pig, but he really doesn't appreciate what happened to Sacha and the scars it's left him with. He want to punish and hurt Sacha but he's not evil and when he realizes what he's done he's genuinely sorry. Of course, he hasn't finished doing it yet
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Sacha was feeling relaxed and happy. They’d moved from the music room to the Jacuzzi and then to the pool where Lacey had started to show him the mechanics of swimming. He’d gone under the water, which he likes a lot because it was so quiet and strange, like a whole different world. Then he’d held the wall and kicked his legs for a bit. He liked that, too, but he’d tired quickly, so they hadn’t gone any further. He was excited about doing more tomorrow. Now, they were just sitting in the shallo
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They stayed in the Jacuzzi until they were turning into prunes. By then, it was almost one o clock and past time for lunch. “Go dry off and change. I’ll get Emma to se
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Chapter 5 - Shades of Blue
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Shades of Blue
You must work in a very good care home. The home in Enigma is based on the one my husband was working in at the time. If he was doing a sleepover he'd shower there. I'm glad you're enjoying the story though Silver is over and away my favourite character out of all I've ever written. I am so in love with him, which is why I'm currently working on Book 5 which is unheard of for me -
This is one of my personal favourites. Thank you for letting me know you like it, too. That's what it's all about as far as an author is concerned. If my readers don't like what I write I'm doing something wrong Daniel is one of my favourite characters and I really wish I could meet him or, if I did, have the courage to talk to him
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Oh God, I wish I had a house like that. I was describing a version of my dream home. The other is a little witch's cottage on the edge of a wood next to a river. I think the second is more realistic Lacey is an angel and will be Sacha's guardian angel throughout Shame about the rest of the family You should know me well enough by now that things are never plain sailing
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Thank you for that amazing review. I think the highlight of an author's day is when a reader tells you your writing made them feel something. If it isn't it should be. It's an amazing feeling to think something you've created has touched someone and in a way it doesn't matter if it was in a good way or a bad way. Making people think and feel is awesome and I'm so grateful to you for telling me that. I hope you keep walking that tightrope as there are difficult times coming and, yeah, some of the stuff is really fucked up. Take heart. Most of my stories have HES's - unless one of the main characters die
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You're welcome. I'll try to be better with posting regularly, but don't hold your breath
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You're welcome. I'll try to be better with posting regularly, but don't hold your breath
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Well, she honestly believes it, and they will all try to the best of their ability, but no one can plan for every eventuality, and short of keeping him inside the house forever, no one can entirely protect Sacha, especially when you're not really taking the threat seriously. Lacey's making all the right noises but to some extent they're platitudes because she just doesn't appreciate the true implications of the situation. She's so focussed on Sacha and getting him integrated and up and running again, she's blind to other things that maybe are more important. I don't think i'm giving away anything when I say she has good intentions, but the road to hell is paved with good intentions, or so they say.
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When they’d finished exploring the first floor, including the guest suites, a truly astounding main bathroom with a bath big enough for five people at once, and a huge library, they went downstairs and Lacey led him through more rooms than he could remember. The solar, the lounge, the blue room, the terrace room, the games room the music room, the parlour. A huge dining room that put the other one to shame led into a ballroom that was so big and empty and echoey, Lacey couldn’t coax him over the
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