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Out of His Mind - 4. Sean

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Chapter 4

Sean

 

After a successful shopping trip and lunch, Phil and Tait returned home. Phil said he was going to do a little at-home office work, and Tait decided to rest for a couple of hours; he had to digest what Philip told him over their burgers and onion rings.

Sean was out of jail, and in the house – their house! It was all Tait could think about. Phil had explained that Sean made bail with the help of his crack legal team, and would be out until the time the assault case came to court. He’d said that Sean had certain bail conditions to follow.

It angered Tait that his ex was living there in the house that his money had purchased. Yes, he’d obviously been naïve, thinking that Sean and he would have no difficulties, but they hadn’t, not in the beginning. Yes, Sean had always been moody. He could be cruel in what he sometimes said, and the names he called Tait. Sean also never had qualms about belittling Tait in front of strangers, or even their friends. Tait justified the behavior to himself, saying that Sean was a sensitive artist and he just got carried away. Witnesses to Sean’s temper and cruel streak had a more difficult time accepting it.

He and Sean had always made up though, and Sean always said he was sorry. The make-up sex had been mind-blowing.

‘I was so stupid then, blind to what Sean actually was. Too in love with him, and later too beaten, to stop him.’

Should he have been told Sean was out of jail? Okay yes, he’d been in the hospital, but someone, Phil at least, should have told him. Tait shook his head. ‘Stop it. Phil couldn’t tell you while you were so fucked up. Dr. Appel would have freaked out, and well, so would I. Knowing he was out would have been the last straw for me at the time. I felt I was safe because I thought he was behind bars.’

Tait rolled onto his back and put his hands behind his head. ‘All this, what if, and if only, doesn’t do you any good, Tait. Phil does his best for you – and that’s all you need to remember. Sean is a manipulator, a user; he knew you had money and celebrity, and you let yourself be blinded by him. And you paid for it.’

As he lay in bed, in the darkened bedroom, Tait let his mind wander to the night he’d first met Sean O’Grady.

<<>*<>>

 

As Philip had become more successful, and moved to the Burbank Hills he often had parties in his beautiful home. He and Tait had stayed in touch and had become friends. So, Philip always invited Tait to his parties, and Tait went if he was available and in the right end of the country.

On this night, Tait showed up late, as always, preferring to arrive after parties were underway. Not that he wanted to make some grand entrance, but because he could sneak in more or less unnoticed. After hanging up his coat, the bar was where he stopped first.

The handsome bartender approached and smiled at Tait. “Good evening, sir.”

‘Very cute,’ Tait thought, as he admired the classic Californian guy – blonde, muscular and blue-eyed – he returned the smile, and eyed the name-tag on the ‘tender’s chest.

“Glen … good evening.”

The young bartender blushed and said quietly, “Sorry …. Can I ask or well … you’re that model right? Tait Adamsen?”

“Yes, that’s me.”

Nodding, the bartender said, “Wow, I heard you might be here. It’s nice to meet you. So, what can I get you?”

“Nice to meet you too. Is Mr. Lawrence stocking Jameson’s tonight, Glen?”

“Yes sir, he is. Can I get you one?”

“Please.”

Glen placed a glass on the bar. “Ice?”

Tait nodded, and when Glen poured a single, he said, “Top it up please Glen.”

“Yes sir.”

“Thank you.” Tait reached into the front pocket of his jeans, and pulled out some bills. He took a $50.00 out and put it into the tip jar. After one more smile at the handsome bartender, and a quick thought about picking him up at the end of the night, Tait turned and wandered off to find his host.

He found Phil talking with Jenna Lowery, who was a well-known cover artist. Her latest work was for a range of romance novels written for the LGBT community. He smiled as he approached the pair.

Philip opened his arms. “Tait! Finally. Will you ever arrive on time?”

“Unlikely, Phil.” Tait laughed and hugged Phil and then turned and smiled at Jenna. “How are you?”

The petit blond grinned at Tait and said, “I’m well, thank you. You’re looking fine as always, Tait.”

“Thank you. So are you. How is your son? He plays for the Kings, doesn’t he?” Tait asked.

“Brad is well too. Thanks for asking.” Jenna smiled. “He is still with the Kings and ...”

Applause from outside interrupted the conversation and Tait glanced at Philip, eyebrows raised.

“That’s my latest acquisition reading some of his poetry.”

“And does he have a name?” Tait asked.

“Sean O’Grady.”

“Is he Irish? Oh, he’s the guy you signed while on your trip to Ireland.”

“Yes, he is,” Phil answered.

Tait walked to the open patio door, and leaned against the frame. O’Grady was a handsome man, maybe just a little taller than himself.

“Introduce me, Philip?” Tait asked his friend.

“Tait, I don’t think he’s your type.”

Tait smiled. “What is my type, Phil?”

“Not drunks who reportedly assault people, T. Come on. Not this guy, okay? He’s bad news.” Phil had moved to Tait’s side and held onto his friend’s bicep.

“I’m a big boy, Phil.” Tait stared into Philip’s eyes. “But okay, you don’t have to. I can say hello all by myself.” He sipped his drink, gently shrugged out of Phil’s grip, and then moved onto the patio toward the small crowd by the pool.

Philip cursing inwardly, caught up with Tait. “Fine. But don’t say I didn’t warn you.”

The crowd had started to disperse. They seemed happy with what they’d just heard. Sean O’Grady turned to greet Philip. “Your friends seemed to enjoy my impromptu reading.”

“That’s terrific, Sean. A little free reading is a good idea.”

Noticing Philip was not alone, O’Grady turned his attention to Tait. “I don’t think we’ve met, but I certainly think we ought to. I’m Sean O’Grady.” He put out his hand.

Tait smiled at O’Grady and quickly took in the bright blue eyes, fair skin and strawberry blonde hair as he reached out to shake the man’s hand. “Tait Adamsen. It’s nice to meet you.”

O’Grady held onto Tait’s hand a little bit longer than necessary and he gazed intently into Tait’s eyes. “I’ve seen you somewhere … on television I think.”

“You may have, I’ve got commercial out at the moment.”

“Ah, that’s likely it then.”

Tait found he liked O’Grady’s Irish lilt. ‘Sexy, but I’m not falling for it, at least not immediately,’ he thought.

Philip suddenly felt like a third wheel and simply walked back inside. His departure was not noticed by either Tait or O’Grady.

Sean grinned at Tait, then bent and rolled up the legs of his trousers. “Come on.” And he lowered himself on the side of the pool and put his feet in. “Feels wonderful, Tait. Come, and join me!”

Tait grinned, removed his shoes, rolled up his black Leonardo Amiello dress pants and sat beside Sean and enjoyed the cool water. “You’re right; this feels good.”

The party went on around them as they sat with their feet in the pool for an hour or so, drinking and talking. The pair leaned against each other, oblivious to all around them – they were in their own world. It was obvious to anyone who saw them.

Anyone included Phil, who watched the pair together. He was disappointed again, in himself mainly, and he was jealous of O’Grady if he was being honest.

As the party wound down, Tait and Sean stood drying off at the side of the pool. O’Grady was the drunker of the two. Phil observed from the patio door, and felt his heart sink ever farther as he watched Tait obviously enjoying the company of Sean O’Grady.

‘You need to find yourself someone, Phil. Either that or tell Tait how you feel. You can’t expect him to read your mind.’ Phil chastised himself. ‘He isn’t interested in you. Not like that anyway. You’re not rich or famous enough.’

 

Back at the side of the pool Tait unfurled his trouser legs and pulled on his shoes. Sean did the same but he over balanced a little. Tait grabbed Sean by the shoulders; they giggled together like little boys.

“Tait, I like you. Let me take you to lunch tomorrow,” Sean slurred.

“Well ….” Tait held onto Sean’s shoulder, propping him up a little bit.

“Come on. I don’t bite. It’s just lunch.”

Tait considered Sean’s request. ‘Well, it is just lunch.’

“Okay Sean, lunch would be lovely.”

Sean smiled at the younger man, thinking, ‘My God, he’s so damn hot. I’m sure he knows the who’s who in Los Angeles as well. He could be useful – and fun.’

“Wonderful, Tait. Can I pick you up tomorrow?”

“I’d like that.” Tait shared his address and phone number with Sean.

After Sean and the other guests left, Tait remained, as he often did, to have a last drink and chat with Phil.

They sat together poolside. Phil swirled the contents of his glass, and watched as the whiskey coated the sides. He glanced at Tait, and he sighed.

“What is it, Phil?” Tait heard the sigh and was concerned his friend didn’t really seem like his old self this evening.

“Hmm? Nothing, T. Just glad another of these is over.”

Tait chuckled. “Why have them? You don’t sound like you enjoy it.”

“Oh, it’s expected by my boss, is the real reason I guess. It’s good for new artists to get to know people. So when we have a couple of new people sign with us – I have a party.”

“Like Sean O’Grady, you mean?”

Philip groaned. “Yeah, like him.” He sipped his drink. Then he turned to face his friend and said with concern, “Tait, please be careful with him okay? He’s got a bad reputation and he’s been arrested for assault before, please – ”

“Oh, Phil, he seems okay, but I’ll watch myself. I promise.”

Philip silently and fervently hoped that was true.

The two men talked for another hour before Tait finally made his way home.

 

Tait didn’t keep a house in L.A. opting instead to live in a penthouse in The Century building. The condo was spacious, with three bedrooms, five bathrooms, a large sophisticated kitchen, formal dining room and an incredible great room with marble walls, and a full balcony. Several walls were full-height glass, and the floors were oak spread over two levels. In addition there was safe room and gated entry for extra security and privacy. Because of this, Tait left notice with the security guards that he was expecting Sean and to allow him entrance.

 

The guard called Tait to let him know his guest was on his way up. It was 11:00 a.m.

Tait met Sean at the door with a smile. “Hi. Come in. It’s good to see you.”

Sean stepped into the large condo; he took in the oak floors and marble, and glass walls. He turned back to Tait and said, “Nice place.”

“Thanks; come in. Would you like a drink?” Tait walked across the great room to the bar.

Sean watched Tait walk away – enjoying the lithe, toned body of his host. He was filled with lust and desire – he wanted so much more than just a drink, but he said, “Yes please, whiskey if you have it.”

Tait poured two glasses, added ice, and soda to his. He lifted the soda bottle and Sean shook his head, no.

“Let’s sit here,” Tait said, and indicated a grouping that contained two loveseats and two large chairs, all covered in soft peach-colored leather, and located near one of the glass walls. The view was wonderful.

Tait settled into a loveseat and placed the glasses onto the square glass coffee table. Then he invited Sean to join him by patting the seat next to him.

Sean sat beside Tait and put a hand on his thigh. Noting that Tait hadn’t flinched or moved, he squeezed gently. “This is cozy, Tait.”

Smiling, Tait handed Sean his drink. “I like it. I like you.” He covered Sean’s hand with his own.

Sean sipped his drink and put it on the table. He took Tait’s glass and placed it on the coffee table next to his own. He turned toward Tait, leaned into him and pressed his lips to those of his host. The kiss was electric and Sean pulled Tait closer.

Pleased, when Tait moaned softly and slipped his arms around him, Sean whispered, “You’re mine.”

Tait pulled out the embrace and eyed Sean. “Am I?”

Sean smiled disarmingly, and appeared sheepish. “Did I say that out loud?”

Nodding, Tait smiled. “Yes, you did. The kiss … it was nice, Sean. But I’m no one’s property.”

“No, of course you’re not, Tait. It was foolish of me.” Sean smiled. “I’m sorry.”

“It’s okay. I guess it’s kind of sweet.”

Sean grinned. “Please ignore my stupid ways, Tait. Why don’t we go to lunch?”

Tait offered Sean a half-smile. “I hope you don’t mind, but I sort of wanted to be alone with you. So I’ve had lunch catered.”

Sean’s eyes darkened, his voice was cold and tinged with anger when he said, “But I invited you out.”

Tait took Sean’s hand and kissed his cheek. “I know, but … well, I know it was wrong of me, but I just wanted it to be you and me. I should have asked you first, though; I realize that now. Forgive me?”

Brightening visibly, Sean smiled. “Well, I’ll forgive you this time. It was a very sweet thing to do. And well, I’d like to be alone with you too. I’m a very bad boy, in that I don’t like to share.”

The weather was beautiful, so they ate out on the large balcony. Lunch was freshly shucked oysters, duck confit salad, cavatelli with beef cheek ragù, chard, lemon, toasted hazelnuts and aged gouda. With this they drank champagne and a good pinot noir.

After lunch they talked and sipped wine until the sun began to set. They moved back to the loveseat in the Great Room where they’d sat earlier. Sean set his wine glass down, and shuffled around a little and contemplated Tait.

“That lunch was lovely, Tait. And I probably should go, but the truth is I don’t want to.”

“No?” Tait moved closer to Sean, and reached for his hand. “Well, I don’t want you to either.”

Sean stroked Tait’s cheek. “How about if I take you to dinner?”

“Oh, I’d like that!” Tait covered Sean’s hand with his own.

“Well, I don’t know this area well, so what places would you recommend?”

“Hmmm.” Tait smiled. “Somewhere casual?”

“Yes, I think that would be good. What about Mexican? It would be nice to try a more authentic place. The tacos in Ireland leave much to be desired.”

“Okay, I know just the place.” Tait led Sean to the door, handed him his jacket and slipped his own on.

<<>*<>>

They left the restaurant a little drunk on tequila, and wandered back to Tait’s place. Ensconced in the den, they sat together kissing, talking, laughing, and drinking.

Tait leaned against Sean’s chest, in his arms. “Sean, you know this sofa opens up.”

Sean giggled. “Opens up to what?”

“A bed, of course.”

“Oh, so you want to take me to bed, Tait?” Sean kissed Tait and held him tightly.

Tait’s mouth lingered on Sean’s and then drifted across his jaw to his neck, where Tait mumbled, “Mmm, maybe.”

“Only maybe? Well, I think you do, so let’s get up and open this thing up.”

Both men were a bit drunk, but they managed to pull open the sofa bed amidst fits of giggles. Once they crawled back on, they lay in each other’s arms until Sean got up and went to the washroom. On his return, Sean sat on the edge of the sofa bed and stroked Tait’s cheek.

Grabbing his hand, Tait kissed it and gently bit Sean’s forefinger. Moaning, Sean lay down and pulled Tait close. They kissed – the heat between them rising, until panting and hard, they broke apart. Each picked up their now-watery drinks and sipped.

Tait leered at Sean and smiled. “So, should we … um … undress?”

Sean shared a lopsided grin. “You ya be upset if I said no?

“Upset? No … maybe a little confused.”

“Don’t be.” Sean’s eyes were dark with desire, and he spoke slowly. “Tait, believe me, I will have you. Just not tonight.” He kissed Tait then, deeply. “Tonight, I just want this with you – just to be here holding you. Does that make sense?”

Tait considered Sean’s words, and then nodded. Not wanting to spoil the mood, Tait lay down, and Sean snuggled behind him, wrapping an arm around Tait possessively and they fell asleep.

<<>*<>>

Tait awoke, knowing he’d been dreaming – reliving life with Sean from the early days.

‘I was so stupid, so blind. I let myself fall for him, just ignored warning signs,’ he thought as he sat up. He stood and gazed out the patio door. With the flat of his hand he smacked the glass blocks, leaned his head against the cool glass, and said aloud, “But it was so fucking good then. I loved him, I ….”

“I hope you aren’t going to finish that sentence with, I still love him.” Phil stood in the bedroom doorway, holding a steaming mug.

The odor of milky coffee drifted through the room. Tait turned to face Phil and he shook his head.

“No … no Phil, he beat that out of me. I don’t love him anymore.”

Thank you to AC Benus for his excellent reading and editing skills.
Copyright © 2017 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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A good chapter tim! It gave us some needed insight into that ...um ...'nice' guy Sean.
What a sh**head!

 

But you can see how Tait would have fallen. He was charming, somewhat mysterious and had an Irish accent which, for me, is always a fishing line which draws me in. :blushing:

 

I'm concerned he showed so many signs so early though. Did it stay at this level or get even worse? I guess I'll need to be patient. (Dragons are never patient! :gikkle: )

 

Thanks for sharing this story with us!

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OK, I'll accept that Sean was charming at first and that Tait ignored all the warnings. And Phil was (and is) an idiot not to tell Taif of his feelings. So please, no more 'happy' memories of that creep, I want to see Tait progress from where he is now. I think he was doing very well and sensibly in what he was saying to himself.

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On 03/03/2016 04:54 PM, skinnydragon said:

A good chapter tim! It gave us some needed insight into that ...um ...'nice' guy Sean.

What a sh**head!

 

But you can see how Tait would have fallen. He was charming, somewhat mysterious and had an Irish accent which, for me, is always a fishing line which draws me in. :blushing:

 

I'm concerned he showed so many signs so early though. Did it stay at this level or get even worse? I guess I'll need to be patient. (Dragons are never patient! :gikkle: )

 

Thanks for sharing this story with us!

Thank you skinny. I know what you mean about accents, English, Scottish, Irish ... doesn't matter. You'll know more soon...story is finished just a few more chapters.

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On 03/03/2016 05:09 PM, Timothy M. said:

OK, I'll accept that Sean was charming at first and that Tait ignored all the warnings. And Phil was (and is) an idiot not to tell Taif of his feelings. So please, no more 'happy' memories of that creep, I want to see Tait progress from where he is now. I think he was doing very well and sensibly in what he was saying to himself.

Hi Tim, your wish is my command. I think you'll enjoy the next chapter. I think Phil partly agrees with you, but I think he's protecting himself too. Thanks for your great comments and for reading this, Tim.

 

tim xo

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I don't think we ever grow out of the rebellious stage completely. Someone telling us that someone is no good for us will usually just make them more appealing. Even if our friends are right.

 

Great chapter and I'll look forward to more.

 

:hug:

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Love makes us blind. Usually a nice thing because we overlook the minor faults in lovers and friends. Dangerous though when we stop listening to ourselves and our loved ones...

 

I think seeing the good parts of Sean is important for the story to be credible. No person is pure evil or pure good. Characters written like that are one dimensional and not believable. Sure, it's very neat if the villain is a super nasty character easy to just hate. Having him display likeable traits makes things more complicated and frankly more interesting. The problem in abusive relationships is more often than not that hope that those good sides will suddenly win and your lover be a decent human after all...

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Good chapter. Was good to look into when Tait first met Sean. I feel bad for Philip for not telling Tait how he really felt about him. I now understand why he's standing beside him now. However, now knowing that Tait was warned about Sean before they were even introduced makes me feel less sorry for his current situation. I just feel that if ur not only warned that somebody can possibly be abusive, but stay with them as it escalates, ur just as much to blame for what happens to u than the person who's inflicting it. I would be willing to bet that Philip probably had many converstaions about the situation with Tait before Sean beat the hell out of him. Tait is very lucky to have someone like Philip in his life.

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Damn if Sean isn't a piece of work from the get-go! Manipulative, possessive, alcohol management issues--someone call Samsonite, their baggage is here! And Phil's warning wasn't strong enough to register on Tait's radar--or was Phil insecure enough in his feelings that he didn't make sure his message got through to Tait for fear of betraying his own interests?
Regardless, it's a chapter packed tightly with information, potential plot lines, and plenty of energetic interaction between the three players--and it makes for an involving read.
Damn fine writing here!

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I read this chapter twice, drinking in everything Tait told us. Sean reeled Tait in, made him feel happy and desired and perhaps something more. He discovered how to play Tait like an instrument. And poor Tait has to live with the memory of what happened and with the destruction Sean's control left behind.

 

The melancholy knowledge of the oncoming train wreck comes through so achingly well in this chapter. Your writing is at a whole new level here, and it leaves me wanting more. This so well done. Thank you!

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Sean gives me the creeps. He's good... at manipulating. "You're Mine" pretty much said it all, but Tait was too smitten to listen. Often, when we hope for something, want something or someone, we ignore what's right in front of us. I hate users, in whatever degree they are at, and Sean is definitely the worst degree of such. As bad as it was, it would be even worse if Tait didn't learn from what happened. I am so badly rooting for Phil to grow a pair, and tell Tait how he feels... good job, buddy... I can't wait for the next chapter... cheers... Gary....

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So no huge surprise, Sean was pretty much a creep from the beginning. I do have to say, Tait ignored about 1000 warning signs and completely ignored warnings from his friend even before actually meeting Sean. So Tait sadly does bear responsibility for choosing to pursue a relationship with somebody as volatile as Sean. I'm not sure if I picked up on every manipulation Sean pulled here, one in particular bugged me. I have to say, if it's your first date, and you do something as thoughtful as having the food professionally catered, and the person you're just starting to get to know is angry because it didn't fit with their "plan" that's a first date that isn't going well. There should never be a second date. Run the other way people!

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On 03/03/2016 08:29 PM, Caz Pedroso said:

I don't think we ever grow out of the rebellious stage completely. Someone telling us that someone is no good for us will usually just make them more appealing. Even if our friends are right.

 

Great chapter and I'll look forward to more.

 

:hug:

I think you're right Cazzie. I think Tait is a nice guy, blinded a bit by his own celebrity and Sean's. He's also not good at thinking of what's best for himself.

 

Thanks for reading and your comments.

 

tim

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On 03/03/2016 09:01 PM, Puppilull said:

Love makes us blind. Usually a nice thing because we overlook the minor faults in lovers and friends. Dangerous though when we stop listening to ourselves and our loved ones...

 

I think seeing the good parts of Sean is important for the story to be credible. No person is pure evil or pure good. Characters written like that are one dimensional and not believable. Sure, it's very neat if the villain is a super nasty character easy to just hate. Having him display likeable traits makes things more complicated and frankly more interesting. The problem in abusive relationships is more often than not that hope that those good sides will suddenly win and your lover be a decent human after all...

Hi Pup, thanks for the excellent comments and insight. Sean isn't all bad and I think if he stayed sober, he wouldn't get too out of control. But drinking and ego are his enemy.

 

Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts.

 

I appreciate it.

 

tim

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On 03/03/2016 11:44 PM, jaysalmn said:

Good chapter. Was good to look into when Tait first met Sean. I feel bad for Philip for not telling Tait how he really felt about him. I now understand why he's standing beside him now. However, now knowing that Tait was warned about Sean before they were even introduced makes me feel less sorry for his current situation. I just feel that if ur not only warned that somebody can possibly be abusive, but stay with them as it escalates, ur just as much to blame for what happens to u than the person who's inflicting it. I would be willing to bet that Philip probably had many converstaions about the situation with Tait before Sean beat the hell out of him. Tait is very lucky to have someone like Philip in his life.

Hi jaysalmn: Philip doesn't feel worthy of Tait, he feels he's not good enough. That's partly Tait's problem too. You're right of course but if you love someone, people can tell you anything but you wont listen. Not until it's too late. Thanks for reading and for your great comments and insight. I appreciate it.

 

tim

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On 03/03/2016 11:57 PM, Robert Rex said:

Damn if Sean isn't a piece of work from the get-go! Manipulative, possessive, alcohol management issues--someone call Samsonite, their baggage is here! And Phil's warning wasn't strong enough to register on Tait's radar--or was Phil insecure enough in his feelings that he didn't make sure his message got through to Tait for fear of betraying his own interests?

Regardless, it's a chapter packed tightly with information, potential plot lines, and plenty of energetic interaction between the three players--and it makes for an involving read.

Damn fine writing here!

Lol Call Samsonite! Sean is a strong personality, and Tait doesnt seem to mind being walked over. Leo kind of did the same thing but nor in quite the same way. Tait doesnt consider Phil as anything more than a friend and an over-protective one at that. Phil I think is protecting himself because he doesnt want to be hurt.

Thanks for reading Rex.. and for your comments. They mean a lot.

 

tim

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On 03/04/2016 02:30 AM, Parker Owens said:

I read this chapter twice, drinking in everything Tait told us. Sean reeled Tait in, made him feel happy and desired and perhaps something more. He discovered how to play Tait like an instrument. And poor Tait has to live with the memory of what happened and with the destruction Sean's control left behind.

 

The melancholy knowledge of the oncoming train wreck comes through so achingly well in this chapter. Your writing is at a whole new level here, and it leaves me wanting more. This so well done. Thank you!

Yeah we're getting closer to the trainwreck. Not quite there but the question is who is gonna survive it; what condition will they be in. Let's just wait and see.

 

Thanks Parker.. for your support and your comments..

 

tim

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On 03/04/2016 06:34 AM, Headstall said:

Sean gives me the creeps. He's good... at manipulating. "You're Mine" pretty much said it all, but Tait was too smitten to listen. Often, when we hope for something, want something or someone, we ignore what's right in front of us. I hate users, in whatever degree they are at, and Sean is definitely the worst degree of such. As bad as it was, it would be even worse if Tait didn't learn from what happened. I am so badly rooting for Phil to grow a pair, and tell Tait how he feels... good job, buddy... I can't wait for the next chapter... cheers... Gary....

Sean is a rather nasty piece of work. But like mentioned Tait doesnt help himself. He doesnt see what's around him. Phil needs to grow a pair, yeah maybe so. We'll find out soon.

 

Thanks for reading and your insight Gary...

 

I appreciate it.

 

tim

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On 03/04/2016 06:35 AM, spikey582 said:

So no huge surprise, Sean was pretty much a creep from the beginning. I do have to say, Tait ignored about 1000 warning signs and completely ignored warnings from his friend even before actually meeting Sean. So Tait sadly does bear responsibility for choosing to pursue a relationship with somebody as volatile as Sean. I'm not sure if I picked up on every manipulation Sean pulled here, one in particular bugged me. I have to say, if it's your first date, and you do something as thoughtful as having the food professionally catered, and the person you're just starting to get to know is angry because it didn't fit with their "plan" that's a first date that isn't going well. There should never be a second date. Run the other way people!

Hi spikey, Tait does bear a lot of responsibility. I think if someone got angry with because I was thoughtful, yeah time to say buhbye. But Sean is sexy, exciting, a bad boy, he seems to want to be with Tait.. is the attention enough to make some people overlook the others bad behaviour? Hope you like the last few chapters... I appreciate you reading and your comments.

 

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Hey tim
It took me a while to to start reading this chapter because, frankly, I didn't want to read about Sean and how repugnant he is. Having read the chapter, I must say you have done an excellent job writing his character with just a subltle undertone of his true nature showing. If this had been in chapter one, I think I wouldn't have looked so deeply to find meanings or ulterior motives in his words or actions.
Poor Phil, I now see how he came to feel guilt over what happened to Tait. If only, he had been more forcefull in his warnings... If only, he had told Tait how he really felt... He really isn't to blame, but his being a decent and caring man bring about these feelings. Not to mention being in love with Tait because it must be terrible to see the one you love hurt so much.
As always, nicely done.

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On 03/04/2016 10:13 AM, Reader1810 said:

Hey tim

It took me a while to to start reading this chapter because, frankly, I didn't want to read about Sean and how repugnant he is. Having read the chapter, I must say you have done an excellent job writing his character with just a subltle undertone of his true nature showing. If this had been in chapter one, I think I wouldn't have looked so deeply to find meanings or ulterior motives in his words or actions.

Poor Phil, I now see how he came to feel guilt over what happened to Tait. If only, he had been more forcefull in his warnings... If only, he had told Tait how he really felt... He really isn't to blame, but his being a decent and caring man bring about these feelings. Not to mention being in love with Tait because it must be terrible to see the one you love hurt so much.

As always, nicely done.

Hi Reader. People like Sean want their hooks in before you they stop hiding and that's what Sean did with Tait. I think you'll enjoy the next chapter once it posts. And I think you've got Phil down pat.

Thanks for reading and your comments. I appreciate it very much.

 

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I get why Philip feels guilt about Sean and Tait, but after reading this chapter he really needs to give himself a break. He DID tell Tait that Sean drank too much and was charged with assault AND he told him to be careful. Philip didn't have a lot of information about the actual charges or the level of drinking so he gave as much warning as he could. Tait was a grown man. If he wanted the bad boy nothing Philip said was going to stop him. If Philip pushed it, what are the chances Tait would have gotten angry, went after Sean anyways, and cut Philip out of his life? Heck Tait had his own warnings about Sean, with him being drunk at the party and his reaction to Tait's lunch surprise. He ignored what he saw and heard for himself. No warning from a friend was going to stop him. Walking down that path is on Tait. Staying on that path after the first time he got hit? I've known enough people in abusive relationships to say nothing is simple there. Emotional abuse, fear, loneliness, feelings of worthlessness... so many things can make someone stay, even long after they know they should have left.

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On 03/05/2016 12:09 AM, LitLover said:

I get why Philip feels guilt about Sean and Tait, but after reading this chapter he really needs to give himself a break. He DID tell Tait that Sean drank too much and was charged with assault AND he told him to be careful. Philip didn't have a lot of information about the actual charges or the level of drinking so he gave as much warning as he could. Tait was a grown man. If he wanted the bad boy nothing Philip said was going to stop him. If Philip pushed it, what are the chances Tait would have gotten angry, went after Sean anyways, and cut Philip out of his life? Heck Tait had his own warnings about Sean, with him being drunk at the party and his reaction to Tait's lunch surprise. He ignored what he saw and heard for himself. No warning from a friend was going to stop him. Walking down that path is on Tait. Staying on that path after the first time he got hit? I've known enough people in abusive relationships to say nothing is simple there. Emotional abuse, fear, loneliness, feelings of worthlessness... so many things can make someone stay, even long after they know they should have left.

Hi LL, You are right of course. Phil is a good guy and I think he's caught between wanting to protect Tait and himself. There's more to come...

 

Thanks for your insightful comments. I appreciate it.

 

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Hmmmm, so Phil's guilt is primarily based on introducing them and not being more persuasive in keeping them apart. It seems to me that Tait owns the majority of the responsibility.
I'm enjoying this. It's well conceived and the execution is spot on.

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On 03/05/2016 03:38 AM, dughlas said:

Hmmmm, so Phil's guilt is primarily based on introducing them and not being more persuasive in keeping them apart. It seems to me that Tait owns the majority of the responsibility.

I'm enjoying this. It's well conceived and the execution is spot on.

Yes defo Tait owns this, dugh. For sure. Phil is just one of those people who thinks he's never done enough, if this, if that... Tait needs to find his backbone, he's never run across anyone like Sean before. Hopefully he does..

 

Thanks for reading this and for your great comments. I appreciate it...

 

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Goodness. Somebody had the rose colored glasses on, didn't they? Tait wanted what he wanted and wasn't letting anything keep him from Sean. He was blinded by the light and paid dearly when the light went out and Sean let his dark side out. Phil really shouldn't feel guilty. He warned Tait, several times but he won't listen. Well, Phil has a chance now, sure hope he takes it!

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