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    Parker Owens
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Spice Rack - 8. Ablution

Maybe this will whet your appetite. Gaffes and goofs are all mine.

Cascade,

warm, clear water,

soapy hands slide on skin,

clean and detail every feature

with care;

dancing

crystals glisten in muted light,

painting your planes and curves

in a coat of

desire.

My thanks to AC Benus and Asamvav111. They were most helpful. Please leave a comment or note, if the spirit moves.
Copyright © 2017 Parker Owens; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Nothing like a good, hot shower, is there? ;)  Nicely done, as always, Chef. :)  

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Decided to come clean ... I find the act of bathing with another incredibly sensuous and in a few choice words you've captured that.

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2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

Nice images in this one Parker!! Great way to start the day!

Or to prepare for an evening...glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting.

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2 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

Nothing like a good, hot shower, is there? ;)  Nicely done, as always, Chef. :)  

 

You're right there. A nice hot shower. Thanks for trying another Spice from the Rack. 

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1 hour ago, BlindAmbition said:

I need a shower after that shower... Thank you for bathing me with your desires! 😉

 

Thank you for reading this. Hope you don't get all wrinkly from staying in the shower too long...

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1 hour ago, dughlas said:

Decided to come clean ... I find the act of bathing with another incredibly sensuous and in a few choice words you've captured that.

 

It is immensely sensual, I agree. If that came through, then I am very happy. Thanks for reading this and for your comments. 

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45 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

 

It is immensely sensual, I agree. If that came through, then I am very happy. Thanks for reading this and for your comments. 

Oh that came through quite clearly ;)  

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1 hour ago, Cdubya said:

Looking forward to a new story.........😁

 

Thanks. Hope this is good for the meantime, though.

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One of my favorite things to do, so sublimely expressed... the shower is an erogenous zone in itself... sigh... if only.... Wonderful, my friend... cheers... Gary....

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21 hours ago, Headstall said:

One of my favorite things to do, so sublimely expressed... the shower is an erogenous zone in itself... sigh... if only.... Wonderful, my friend... cheers... Gary....

 

You are absolutely right, and there are fewer more sensual pleasures than sharing a shower. Thank you for your comment, my friend. 

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3 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

Nice, Parker. A shared shower is a great pleasure. Your words reinforced that..

 

It is one of the most delightful pleasures I know. Thanks for your lovely comment, and for reading...

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