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Commencement - 12. Liars' Club

 

It was about noon when Brett opened his eyes again.

 

“Billy?” he called.

 

“Yeah, I’m here,” I said. I cast aside the newspaper I’d bought at the gift shop while Brett was asleep and knelt at his side.

 

“Billy, I think something’s wrong…”

 

“Are you sick or something? Do you feel okay?” I asked urgently.

 

“No… I… I think I broke my leg…” Brett said with a sly smile.

 

“Smart ass,” I laughed.

 

“Yeah. I actually feel better now, not so woozy.”

 

“Do you need more pain medication?”

 

“No. No, that’s okay. The less of that stuff I take the better.” Brett asked me to give him the newspaper I’d been reading. “This is going to be torture. Who knows what I’m going to do for the next month while I’m stuck in bed.”

 

“There’s plenty of video games, television. I’m sure you’ll have a bunch of school work you’ll have to do.”

 

“That just sounds terrific,” Brett yawned. “Say, has my mom even been here today?”

 

“I haven’t seen her. I know she was here with you all night. She probably needed to get some sleep.”

 

“Sure. You were here all night and you came back this morning,” Brett said.

 

“Actually…”

 

Just as I was preparing to tell Brett his mom had sent me home, a nurse came into the room.

 

“How are you feeling, Anthony?” she asked.

 

“Who in the world is Anthony?” Brett replied. “Nobody calls me that.”

 

“Do you go by Tony or?”

 

“He goes by his middle name, Brett,” I informed her.

 

“Oh! Well, we’ll make a note of that right away. Are you his brother?” she asked.

 

“No, he’s my boyfriend,” Brett replied.

 

“Oh!” the nurse said. “Well it’s nice to meet you. Well, Mr. Reilly, how would you describe your pain right now?”

 

“How would I describe my pain? He’s about six feet tall, blond with green eyes…”

 

“Oh shut up,” I laughed.

 

“I feel good,” Brett said more seriously. “I’d describe my pain as dull and thumping. I feel it, but everything’s still numb.”

 

“That’s completely normal. We’ll keep monitoring. Let us know if it goes from dull and thumping to sharp and stabbing, okay?”

 

“Sure.”

 

She turned to me. “It was nice to meet you…”

 

“Billy,” I replied.

 

“Billy…” she said. “Weren’t you a patient here a few years ago? Broken wrist?”

 

“I punched the mirror downstairs,” I said, connecting the dots for her.

 

“Oh yes! Well, it’s good to see you again. I’m sure you’ll take good care of Brett.”

 

After the nurse left, Brett and I just sat and talked for a while. Brett was impressed that he could just lay in bed and pee right in front of me because of the catheter they’d given him.

 

“I could be peeing right now and you wouldn’t even know it.”

 

“Are you?”

 

“I don’t know. I can’t feel anything below my waist right now.”

 

“So you could be peeing right now and you wouldn’t know it either.”

 

“Whoa!” Brett replied, his mind obviously blown.

 

“So, am I naked under this gown?” he asked.

 

“Yeah,” I replied. “But I’m naked under these clothes too.”

 

“I guess that’s true. How many of these nurses do you think have seen my junk?”

 

“All of them probably. I heard them talking earlier at the nurses’ station about how impressed they were. That’s why they had to throw a blanket over you, they couldn’t work properly with your thing exposed like that.”

 

“Dude, how am I even going to put on boxers with my leg like this?”

 

“Remember how you said you don’t care if your mom sees you naked? Well…”

 

“Ugh,” Brett groaned.

 

A little while later, Dr. Reilly appeared in the doorway.

 

“How’s my little peanut?” she asked.

 

“How do you think I am?” Brett replied, his tone of voice completely shifting to one filled with contempt.

 

“Billy, I’m kind of surprised to see you here. I thought I’d been clear when I told you to go home yesterday.”

 

“I…” I started, but then Brett jumped in.

 

“What’s that supposed to mean?” he asked.

 

“Brett, I don’t expect you to understand. Billy and I…”

 

“No. Isn’t it bad enough that you make me miserable? Now you have to make other people’s kids miserable.”

 

“If he hadn’t been so irresponsible as to let you get on that death trap…”

 

“Oh please! Do you really think that Billy could have made me do anything if I really didn’t want to do it? No offense, Billy.”

 

“He should have been stopping you, not encouraging you.”

 

“Oh, fuck off!” Brett snapped. “It’s not like you care about my safety any other time. I’ve practically been on my own since I was eight-years-old. I’ll be eighteen in three weeks. If I had put together a dirt bike in our backyard you wouldn’t have even noticed. It’s not like you’re such an awesome mother that you would have prevented this from happening.”

 

“If I had known that you were going to be riding dirt bikes up in the woods I would have stopped you.”

 

“You might have tried,” Brett said. “But the simple fact is, you weren’t there. You’re never there and you feel guilty about it and so you’re taking it out on Billy.” The monitor that was measuring Brett’s heart rate was beeping much more rapidly as Brett argued with his mother.

 

“Guys, if I need to go I will,” I suggested.

 

“Don’t even think about leaving,” Brett insisted. “If you go, I go.”

 

“I don’t think that’s possible at the moment,” I said.

 

“Brett, you need to calm down for just a moment and let me explain. I don’t blame Billy for what happened. But I am disappointed that he didn’t stop you before you got on that thing. He should have known that you…”

 

“How can someone who is supposed to be so smart be so stupid? I am responsible for my own actions, mother,” Brett said firmly. “And so are you. Billy’s got nothing to do with it. I got on the bike. I went too fast. And I’ll pay the consequences for what I did. It’s my responsibility, not Billy’s. And frankly, not yours either. So quit trying to lay the guilt trip on anybody else and shut up!”

 

Dr. Reilly stood there for quite a while. “I just…”

 

“Mom, I really don’t want to hear it.” He reached over to the call button and paged the nurse. Within a few moments, she arrived. “My pain is sharp and stabby now,” he said.

 

“You poor thing! We’ll take care of that right away for you,” the nurse replied. “May I ask the two of you to step out of the room for a moment? There’s a small waiting room at the end of the hall.”

 

“Billy can stay,” Brett insisted.

 

“No, it’s okay, let them do what they need to do,” I replied. I went with Dr. Reilly to the waiting room.

 

“I’m sorry he yelled at you,” I said.

 

“Oh, you think that was yelling? That’s just an ordinary conversation nowadays. I’ve totally lost him. He hates me so much. I don’t know how we can ever put things back together.”

 

“I have an idea,” I said.

 

“I know your idea. Destroy my best friend’s marriage and my whole life’s work.”

 

“It’s going to come out anyway, Jen. Better that he hears it from you. Jack came to the emergency room last night. He was out of his mind. Anyone could see that he was reacting as a father, not like an ambulance chasing lawyer. Have you seen Brett and Joey side-by-side lately? They look more alike now than they did before. You can’t keep this charade up for much longer. If you just tell him…”

 

“Billy, what do you expect to happen? Do you expect him to suddenly forgive me? Do you expect him to understand that his father has been living down the road this whole time and I never told him? It’s not just about him. Heather would be destroyed by what happened. I’ve worked years to build my credibility. Jack’s reputation as a leader of the community would be shattered. If it were as simple as just telling him and there were no consequences for others except for me, I would have told him by now. But it’s not about me. But the truth would destroy a lot of people.”

 

“No. The truth would destroy a lot of horrible liars. It would destroy the lie that Jack cares one bit about his family, since he was willing to throw it all away to sleep with his wife’s best friend. He doesn’t deserve the reputation he has. It should be destroyed. It would destroy the lie that you give a shit about anybody but yourself. This whole situation started because you were too selfish to realize that sleeping with your best friend’s husband would hurt a lot of people. You were afraid that the truth would hurt your precious career. You deserve to have people know what you did.”

 

“Does Heather deserve to have her marriage ruined? She didn’t do anything to deserve that. Does Joey deserve to have his parents get divorced? Does Brett deserve to know that he was the result of the worst mistake his mother ever made?”

 

“Yes. And all of those people deserve to know that it was you and Jack and your selfishness that made all of that possible.”

 

Just as I finished saying that, the door to the room opened. I was expecting the nurse to tell us that Brett was ready for visitors again, but instead Jack McKenzie entered the room. He looked much more calm than he had been the last time I’d seen him.

 

“The nurse told me this is where I’d find you. Joey is with Brett. Can’t say I’m surprised to see you here, Billy.”

 

“Where else would I be?”

 

“We were just having a little discussion about Billy’s continued cooperation,” Dr. Reilly said.

 

Jack closed the door and sat down. “I see. Well, Billy, I can understand your frustration. I’m sure from your perspective not much of what Jen and I have done has made a lot of sense. I’m sure you think Brett would be better off if he knew certain things. To be honest, sometimes I wonder if it’s worth keeping up the charade. It’s been eighteen years since everything happened. Sometimes it feels like the lying has become too comfortable.”

 

“Well there’s an easy solution. Quit lying,” I said. “Tell Brett the truth today. He deserves to know you’re his father. He’s been lied to enough.”

 

“Have you truly considered all the consequences, Billy?” Jack asked. “Are you prepared for Brett to hate you? Whether you like it or not, our lies have become your lies too. It was never our intention that you find out. But you did, and now you’re just as involved with this as we are.”

 

“Bullshit,” I said. “You have nothing to threaten me with, Jack. I fell for your lies before because I was afraid of your power. But I’m not afraid of you anymore. Your power is a joke. You’re just a smalltime lawyer in a smalltime little town. If you guys don’t tell him the truth, I will. This has gone on long enough.”

 

“No one is trying to threaten you, Billy,” Dr. Reilly said. “We’re trying to help you. You don’t know what it’s like to have Brett look at you the way he looks at me. Are you prepared for him to speak to you with the same contempt that he speaks to me? You could tell him, that’s true. But in Brett’s mind it will mean that you were the one responsible for breaking up Joey’s parents. It will mean that you were the one who lied to him for a year. Your relationship with him is built just as much on my so-called lies and selfishness as you claim my relationship with him is.”

 

“This is so stupid! I knew I should have never listened to you and just told him. I’ve been so blind! I thought I could trust you, Jen. You were never going to tell him. You don’t care about Brett at all!”

 

“You want to talk about trust?" Dr. Reilly said. "Let’s talk about a woman who claims that she loves my son, but then rejects him and tosses him aside like garbage when she finds out that he’s gay! I’ve never rejected you, Billy. I’ve been your biggest supporter! Your mother broke my son’s heart and treated him like garbage.”

 

“If you expect me to defend my mother’s actions, you’re sadly mistaken,” I replied. “You’re still trying to shift the responsibility for your actions to anyone but yourself.”

 

“No! I’m trying to keep you from making a mistake that would destroy your relationship with Brett. He needs you, Billy, especially now!” she said.

 

“No, you know what? You’re right, Billy,” Jack said. “You’re right. There’s no need to threaten you. You’re too smart for that. You know what? We’re going to go right now. We’re going to march right into that room and you’re going to tell Brett that you have hidden the truth from him for a year and that I am his father. Let’s go right now.”

 

Jack got up and opened the door. Jen and Jack exchanged a look, but she got up and stood by the door with him.

 

“Come on. You’re going to tell him right now,” Jack insisted.

 

Slowly, I rose from the chair I was in and walked to the door. Jack insisted that I lead the way. We walked back to the room to find Brett and Joey chatting and laughing together. When they saw us come in they stopped talking. Brett looked so happy and I was about to destroy him. I walked into the room and then Jen and Jack stood behind me. Brett looked at me with a hopeful expression.

 

“What’s up guys?” he asked.

 

“Brett, Billy has something he wants to tell you,” Jack insisted. “Go on, Billy. Tell him.”

 

I looked at Brett and Joey, then I glanced back at Jen. “I…” I stuttered.

 

“Come on. Tell him the news,” Jack insisted.

 

“What is it?” Brett asked.

 

“I…” I stammered. Now that it had come to it, I couldn’t do it.

 

“Aw don’t be so shy,” Jack said. “He wanted to tell you that I’ve offered him an internship at my law firm over the summer. And that your mom and I are going to pay for his college, anything that he has to pay for that his grants and scholarships won’t cover. Isn’t that right Billy?”

 

“I… Uh…”

 

“Aw, don’t be so shy, boy! I know talent when I see it. You’ve got what it takes to make it big. Anything I can do to help a bright young man like you along the way.”

 

“Uh… Yeah…” I said.

 

“Wow, that’s… That’s something,” Brett said. “I guess now you won’t have to worry about how you’re going to pay for school, Billy.”

 

“Yeah…” I said. Great, I’d just been bribed. That Jack really was smooth.

 

“Yeah, good for you,” Joey said, looking suspiciously at his dad and then at Dr. Reilly. I’d seen the glare he gave me before. It was the same look of contempt Brett had given his mom when she walked in the room earlier.

 

I felt sick. Jack didn’t even have to tell me the conditions of the deal, I knew exactly what he wanted from me. That he was willing to pay me to keep me quiet revealed his desperation. I told everyone that I needed to eat, but I really just wanted to get away for a while and process what had just happened. I walked to the elevator and pressed the button to go to the cafeteria floor. Just before the doors closed, Joey slipped into the elevator with me.

 

“I’m coming with you,” he insisted.

 

“Joey, I don’t have time to…”

 

“What’s your game Roberts?” he interrupted.

 

“I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

 

“Oh cut the crap. My dad isn’t paying shit for my college. If I didn’t get a scholarship, I wouldn’t have even been able to go. I was begging him for that fucking internship and he just fucking gave it to you! So what’s your fucking deal? What makes you so fucking special?”

 

“Why don’t you ask your dad?” I replied. The elevator stopped and we got out. I walked toward the cafeteria and Joey kept walking beside me.

 

“I just don’t get it. I work twice as hard as you. You barely study and yet you get all the breaks. Sarah has her dad change her grades if she doesn’t like them, gets a teacher to quit, fucks everybody… I don’t get it! Why am I always the one getting screwed?”

 

“Joey, I don’t give a shit about your problems. I really don’t.”

 

“That’s hardly surprising. You don’t care about anyone but yourself! You made that obvious today.”

 

“Are we going to go through this shit again, McKenzie? Look, I might give a shit about you if you hadn’t tried to shove your dick into my mouth and made my life miserable for years now.”

 

“Jesus, it’s back to that again! Look, Roberts, I’m sorry I did what I did. I was so fucking high that day, I barely remember it. I know that’s not an excuse, and I’m not trying to say it is. But it is what happened. I apologize.”

 

I stopped walking and faced him. “You apologize? Are you serious?”

 

“Yeah. And I’m not making one of those stupid ‘I’m sorry you thought I hurt you’ apologies either. I shouldn’t have done what I did. It was stupid and I’m sorry,” Joey said.

 

I looked at him for a long time. God, except for his dark brown eyes he looked so much like his brother. The dark brown hair and handsome face… It was almost like looking at Brett. Almost… “You don’t actually expect me to forgive you, do you? That was way too far. You should be in jail, not worrying about getting some stupid internship.”

 

“Whatever. I don’t really need your forgiveness. I’d just like you to know that I’m sorry. What you do with that is your business. You want to rat me out to my dad? Go ahead. He already thinks I’m worthless anyway. Hell, if it were me in the hospital instead of Brett I don’t think he’d even give a shit. He’d just complain about how much I was costing him in medical bills.” Joey turned and started to walk away.

 

“Where do you think you’re going?” I asked.

 

“I’m going back upstairs. Why?”

 

“Well, don’t you at least want to get something to eat? You did walk all this way. We’re almost there.”

 

“Why would you want to eat with me?” Joey asked.

 

“Because I don’t know anybody else here,” I replied. “Come on. We won’t be long.”

 

Joey and I grabbed a couple of sandwiches and diet sodas and then to my surprise he offered to pay for me. We sat at a small table and ate quietly. I pulled out Navi to check my sugar.

 

“How’s that working for you?” he asked.

 

“My meter?” I asked.

 

“Yeah.”

 

“It does pretty good. I haven’t had any issues.”

 

“Too bad they didn’t have that kind of thing when your dad was around. He might still be around. Hey, I’m sorry about what happened to him. That must have been hard.”

 

“Yeah it was.”

 

“I’ll bet. Is that why you grew your hair out?”

 

“I don’t know. I was growing it out before he died. I just never felt like cutting it until my birthday.”

 

“I could never have grown my hair long like you did. My dad would have killed me.”

 

“Yeah. Sounds like your dad’s kind of a dick to you.”

 

“Yeah he is. It’s like he expects me to be perfect all the time. I mess up one little thing and he’s all over me. All he does is yell at me. Nothing I ever do is good enough for him. Everything I do is wrong in his eyes. I hate him. I don’t even know why he had me. But nothing was worse than the day you told him about the abortion.”

 

“Why? Did he hit you or something?”

 

“I wish he would’ve hit me. He said I was the biggest disappointment in his entire life. I tried to say you were lying but he can always tell when someone is lying to him. He said he’d rather that you were his son than me.”

 

“Ouch,” I said. “Sorry about that.”

 

“Don’t worry about it. I didn’t give you much of a choice. I was high on speed or something that day. Andy would hook me up and I’d shoot up in that bathroom at the church. You almost caught me snorting coke in there the one day.”

 

“Is that what you were doing? Wow, I thought you were crying.”

 

“I probably was. That shit fucks up your sinuses pretty good.”

 

“So… You’ve done cocaine, then?”

 

“I’ve tried a little of everything; heroin, meth, speed, you knew about the pot, ecstasy, coke, LSD, everything but crack probably.”

 

“Holy shit! Does your dad know about all that?”

 

“I wouldn’t be alive right now if he knew. He’s sent me to rehab once. That was pointless.”

 

“Does Brett know what you’re into?”

 

“All Brett ever wanted to do was pot. Pot, pot, pot. Dude was such a stoner. I guess you must be important to him because when you told him to quit he did. Cold turkey. Not even a hit in years. I wish I could find someone who was important enough to give up everything for.”

 

“Why do you do all that shit? You’re going to mess around and kill yourself someday if you’re not careful.”

 

“What do you care?”

 

“Well, if you died from an overdose or something, Brett would be really sad. He likes you for some reason.”

 

Joey just smirked. “Some reason, huh? Okay. Whatever. Anyway, we should get back up there.”

 

We finished up our lunch and made our way back to Brett’s room. Joey had just enough time to tell Brett goodbye and then his dad insisted on leaving. Once again it was down to me, Brett, and his mom. But this time the conversation was much more pleasant.

 

“What are you going to do with me when we get home? I can’t go up the stairs to my room.”

 

“We’ll put you in the living room,” Dr. Reilly said. “We’ll have Billy bring your computer downstairs. You’re willing to bring his homework to him, aren’t you Billy? You can borrow Brett’s car to get to school and back.”

 

“Sure,” I said. If she was going to be paying for my college bills and lending me a free car, I guess I had to do whatever she wanted. Funny how we never had to have a conversation about it.

 

“What about Sneaker?” Brett asked.

 

“We’re not bringing him downstairs. Billy can feed him.”

 

“Sounds delightful,” I said.

 

“Guess I’m going to have a lot of time on my hands,” Brett said. “Better buy a box of tissues next time you’re out.”

Thus ends our time in the hospital with Brett. What is a hyperactive young man to do with nothing but time on his hands?

Next time: The Kids Aren't Alright
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3 minutes ago, jkwsquirrel said:

I agree.  Joey is every bad thing that everyone has said about him.  His life, while tough, isn't nearly as horrible as Dustin's.  Yes, his father is a manipulative, pompous, and emotionally abusive scum bag, but he's not exactly Frank Smith.  Joey gets a lecture for making his father look bad.  Dustin gets beaten if he swings at a bad pitch.  And yet, Dustin worked his behind off to get better while Joey retreated to substance abuse and taking out his frustrations on others.  But at least know we know why he's such a dick.  The drugs are a symptom of a bigger issue.

Joey doesn't have it nearly as bad as Dustin for sure, but in both cases the boys ended up feeling empty and worthless.  And in some cases I'd argue that emotional abuse is more destructive than physical abuse.

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On ‎2‎/‎15‎/‎2018 at 11:20 AM, Benji said:

B)....................Why is it I have a sneaky suspicion that Joey may already know ALL about the affair.  Joey may do some stupid shit, but he also sounds contrite for his actions. But does he know the truth or have suspicions of his own?  He has to see the similarities between Brett and himself, wonder why the interest his father gives Brett.  Brett may already know the truth, and way before Billy became aware of the facts.  I think what Jack did showed his true colors, pulling his ace card ace card to bribe Billy like he did with witness's, that is commendable (for a weasel like he is).   In fact; I think that Billy should publicly thank him say at commencement and tell everyone what a swell guy Jack is by also offering his 'son' Joey the internship,  yeah, that ought to do it! :2thumbs:

 

On ‎2‎/‎15‎/‎2018 at 11:51 AM, Okiegrad said:

Poor Joey.  I get the feeling he already knows Brett is his brother.  I think he’s smarter than all of them

 

On ‎2‎/‎15‎/‎2018 at 11:55 AM, BlindAmbition said:

I reread past few chapters. After this one, i have no doubt both Brett and Joey know. I wouldn’t be surprised that they’ve discussed it.

Of course, Billy could use the speech to ask Jack to give the internship to the son he loves the most, but he'll be screwed out of valedictorian before he gets the chance anyway, right?  But anyway, yes, you may be on the right track in thinking that Joey knows.  The funny thing is, that if he does know it just proves how right he is about his father.  After all, Jack and Jen are going through so much trouble to keep Billy quiet, yet it never occurs to them that Joey could have possibly figured it out.

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On ‎2‎/‎15‎/‎2018 at 3:57 PM, Freerider said:

While you are all focussing on Jack and Joey and their perceived wickedness, you miss the most important thing.

The only truth that was spoken in this chapter, was spoken by Jack:

 

 “You want to talk about trust?  Let’s talk about a woman who claims that she loves my son, but then rejects him and tosses him aside like garbage when she finds out that he’s gay!  I’ve never rejected you, Billy.  I’ve been your biggest supporter!  Your mother broke my son’s heart and treated him like garbage.”

 

Amen! (pun intended)

I hate to do this, because it started a good discussion, but I meant for that line to come from Jen, not Jack.  Entirely my fault, as I wasn't as clear as I needed to be.  I've edited it to clarify it better.

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4 hours ago, jkwsquirrel said:

I hate to do this, because it started a good discussion, but I meant for that line to come from Jen, not Jack.  Entirely my fault, as I wasn't as clear as I needed to be.  I've edited it to clarify it better.

 

That is a pity. I would have loved to find out what Jack had been doing in the background to support the boys.

Now it seems he is just a scumbag...

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20 hours ago, jkwsquirrel said:

 

 

Of course, Billy could use the speech to ask Jack to give the internship to the son he loves the most, but he'll be screwed out of valedictorian before he gets the chance anyway, right?  But anyway, yes, you may be on the right track in thinking that Joey knows.  The funny thing is, that if he does know it just proves how right he is about his father.  After all, Jack and Jen are going through so much trouble to keep Billy quiet, yet it never occurs to them that Joey could have possibly figured it out.

 

B)..........................Nah, a repeat performance of the 'Harper Valley PTA' as desirable as it would sound, would probably do more damage then it would be worth! :unsure:   However, as it stands Billy won't be valedictorian anyways if politics has its way, Sarah will be giving the speech unless she does something very stupid publicly and gets caught.  As far as Joey goes, if he does have the 'knowledge' of the affair and his relationship with Brett, if I were him I'd blackmail dear old dad into a summer job and money for college.  I still wonder if Billy's father did leave him more them a coin collection, or if part of the collection is worth more money then he would need for college. Should be interesting to read further chapters!

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On ‎2‎/‎15‎/‎2018 at 10:09 PM, Bushman60 said:

As much reason as anything ,Joey does silly things to vet noticed by his father.It would seem Jack notices Brett far more than Joey and acknowledges this not realising how stupid it really is or how destructive it can be.I am quite surprised that Dr REILLY and Joeys mother haven't taken Jack to task for this bad behaviour.

 

On ‎2‎/‎15‎/‎2018 at 11:07 PM, Shadow086 said:

I'm not surprised that Dr. Reilly hasn't taken Jack to task, since she's doing pretty much the same thing with her own son.  She's not exactly Mother of the Year material.

We'll explore Jenny and Jack's "relationship" in a future chapter.  But there is a hint of what Jen thinks about Jack waaaaaaaay back in chapter 2.7 when Brett describes the conversation Jenny had with her sister:   “You said he hurt you!  He used you!  He ruined your life!  I heard you say those exact words!”  Brett thought she was talking about her boyfriend then, but now we know who she was really talking about.

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On ‎2‎/‎16‎/‎2018 at 1:03 AM, glennish said:

If....... “if”. Billy excepts the bribe then there will be issues between the b’s.  Billy seemed to be in shock over the offer but he did not say that he accepts the deal.  If and when he comes clean to Brett I think it can all be smoothed over.  Brett has always said that he knows how much of a coward that Billy is. Billy was smooth enough to defuse the situation early in the chapter with Jen because if she would have finished her statement about Billy being there it would have turned ugly very fast.

“The kids aren’t alright”. Is this just Brett and Billy or are we including Dustin Joey and Sarah in this mix too?

thanks Jeff. 

We haven't heard the last of the bribe.  As for the next chapter, I think it's a little more the adult reaction to these crazy kids than the kids themselves.  "Boy, those kids aren't alright!"

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On ‎2‎/‎16‎/‎2018 at 4:34 AM, Bushman60 said:

Dr Reilly is certainly not mother off the year stuff. That is very true. She then tries to ban Billy from Bret in  the hospital but never really gives a good reason for this. Billy to his credit at first and even later accepts her wishes without much of a fuss or fight and it is Brett that insists his must stay so she gives in like she always does. I also think it there is a very in dependant streak in this whole group of kids where they very much do their own thing regardless of what parents say or thinking things through. But they are at that invincible I am superman stage anyway.lol

I saw her initial sending away of Billy as more of a heat of the moment thing.  She was angry and didn't feel like having Billy hanging around, and there really was nothing he could have done at that point and it was better that he get some rest.  I think the heart of the story is about finding one's own way, even when one's parents or society tries to make you conform to their way.  It's not a perfect journey by any means.

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On ‎2‎/‎16‎/‎2018 at 7:18 AM, Shadow086 said:

Jack threatened to sue Billy and his family into bankruptcy if he didn't keep his mouth shut.  He also threatened to out Billy to the entire town.  That's not what I call 'being a supporter'.  I also think that Joey saying Billy was a loser not good enough for Brett was a line fed to him by Jack.

 

I guess we'll have to disagree, because I don't think Jack is supporting Billy at all.  He's very manipulative, and he'll do whatever it takes to keep his secret safe, even if it means pretending to be nice to Billy.

I've thought of Jack as an adult version of Brett without the redeeming qualities.  Brett can be manipulative too, but Jack has had more practice.  And his earlier treatment of Dustin reveals how vicious he can be to someone he doesn't like.  Jack is a bully.  Joey learned his boorish behavior by example.

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On ‎2‎/‎16‎/‎2018 at 7:19 AM, Bushman60 said:

My thoughts on Billy's comments about the likeness of Joey and Brett being more noticeable now than previously and his other comments about that are likely very true. I suspect that even though we aren't told this , he has heard a number of comments from others along those lines.It is naive and silly not to expect that type of thing on a small community.

    The same holds true about Billy's comments about Jack being not as important or influential as Jack thinks he is. Billy would have heard plenty of comments on the small town gossip vine along this line of thinking and would know from his own observations as to whether Jack is a wind bag and blowhard!

 

On ‎2‎/‎16‎/‎2018 at 7:30 AM, Freerider said:

 

Don't you think that that is just Billy finally growing up? Realising that your town is not the center of the world, daddy is not superman, etc?

 

And the similarities between B and J. You'd be amazed at what people don't see if it isn't spelled out to them. Billy knows, so he'll see it...

Billy is definitely discovering just how petty and small his little town is.  I think many of us eventually come to see our childhood community as a place that we must break away from in order to grow.  I also think people see what they want to see.  Lots of people look alike.  We see all the clues because Billy sees them.  Someone else in that community would have no reason to be looking for a family resemblance between two relatively unconnected friends.  Jack has lived in the community for years.  Dr. Reilly moved in when Brett was eight.  Even though they went to the same college, how many people in town even remember that Jack was away for a few years?  In a small town, inertia is king.  Jack "always" lived there.  Dr. Reilly moved in years after her son was born.

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19 hours ago, Shadow086 said:

Joey doesn't have it nearly as bad as Dustin for sure, but in both cases the boys ended up feeling empty and worthless.  And in some cases I'd argue that emotional abuse is more destructive than physical abuse.

Yeah, I might have been too dismissive of Joey's emotional abuse.  I've made the case that Brett and Dustin were both neglected by their parents.  They've adjusted well, mostly because they found other role models.  Particularly, Brett had George and Paula and Dustin had Miss Winston and his coaches and therapists (and later his sister who took him in for a year).  Joey hasn't had that interested adult in his life, and so his response to his pain is to seek relief from drugs.

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7 hours ago, Benji said:

 

B)..........................Nah, a repeat performance of the 'Harper Valley PTA' as desirable as it would sound, would probably do more damage then it would be worth! :unsure:   However, as it stands Billy won't be valedictorian anyways if politics has its way, Sarah will be giving the speech unless she does something very stupid publicly and gets caught.  As far as Joey goes, if he does have the 'knowledge' of the affair and his relationship with Brett, if I were him I'd blackmail dear old dad into a summer job and money for college.  I still wonder if Billy's father did leave him more them a coin collection, or if part of the collection is worth more money then he would need for college. Should be interesting to trad further chapters!

Joey is far too afraid of his father to try anything like that.

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I guess the entire comment section is agreeing with me with one thing: Brett and Joey must've known for a long time already. Remember when Brett told Billy that he plans to make Paula believe she's winning? Maybe that's what they've been doing all along. After all, they've been reaping the benefits of their parents' reputations, that is, until Joey was 'disowned' by Jack. Maybe that's what will force them to hunt for the truth.

This leaves Billy in the most pressing situation all by himself. If the above is true, all he needs to do is to work up his courage to tell the two brothers. But that will be anti-climactic won't it?

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“You said he hurt you!  He used you!  He ruined your life!  I heard you say those exact words!” 

Oh sh-t. Now that I remember it. I have a theory:

Spoiler

Jen was also blackmailed by Jack. That explains why she still has the characteristics of a good person. That's why she still cares so much about Billy even though she's a threat to her reputation.

However, it leaves more questions than it answers. Like why Jen chose to live in Donora.

On ‎6‎/‎28‎/‎2020 at 2:46 AM, noahthesmallpotato said:

I guess the entire comment section is agreeing with me with one thing: Brett and Joey must've known for a long time already. Remember when Brett told Billy that he plans to make Paula believe she's winning? Maybe that's what they've been doing all along. After all, they've been reaping the benefits of their parents' reputations, that is, until Joey was 'disowned' by Jack. Maybe that's what will force them to hunt for the truth.

This leaves Billy in the most pressing situation all by himself. If the above is true, all he needs to do is to work up his courage to tell the two brothers. But that will be anti-climactic won't it?

Oh sh-t. Now that I remember it. I have a theory:

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Jen was also blackmailed by Jack. That explains why she still has the characteristics of a good person. That's why she still cares so much about Billy even though she's a threat to her reputation.

However, it leaves more questions than it answers. Like why Jen chose to live in Donora.

Billy is his own worst enemy sometimes.


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