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Shuffle off to Buffalo - 2. Prompt 2 - The Motherland Calls

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Blinded during a freak lightning strike
The world’s tallest woman
Joins the first manned mission to Mars
Make sure and check out Valkyrie's Mission to Mars prompt post with the same criteria.

The Motherland Calls

Jesse looked through his bags once again, making sure he had all the items he’d need. It was a long flight to Russia and from there it was onto the space terminal in central Russia, just west of the Ural Mountains. The base, its name unpronounceable in English, could be roughly translated to Anya’s Keep. The mission was top secret and while he would be the only American on the team, his role was even more vital than some of his superiors knew.

“Are you ready?” a young woman standing at his open door asked.

“Almost,” he said, patting the last of his belongings in the bag. He zipped up one, quickly closed and latched another, and finally gathered his coat and stood. “I’m as ready as I’ll ever be.”

Sedgewick, his colleague and fellow communications specialist, watched him carefully with cold, grey-green eyes. She was the perfect co-worker in the field; professional, objective, dependable, and dull. The aerospace communications field was a highly competitive area where rivalries ran deep and wide. In Jesse’s experience, most of those in his line of work were cut-throat competitors.

Sedgewick, as brilliant as she was and probably better connected, had always been a neutral and supportive voice in his corner. When the subject of a personnel exchange with the Russian aerospace group had been discussed, it was the tall, lanky, cool and calculated Sedgewick who had been his most vocal ally.

Jesse greeted her with a smile, and she returned it briefly, almost ghostly, and then nodded toward the hallway.

“We should make our way to the plane,” she said, a little crack in her voice.

“Yeah, I don’t want to miss that flight,” he answered, grinning.

“They won’t go without you,” Sedgewick said.

Startled by her literal response, Jesse touched her shoulder as they walked down the hallway. “Sedgie, is everything okay? You seem a little off this morning.”

“I’m fine,” she said, chewing her lip as they continued toward the elevator doors. “I’m excited for you.”

Jesse analyzed her tone. She didn’t sound enthused or anxious. He’d worked with Sedgie for over three years now and they both knew each other’s moods intimately. The sound in her voice was strained, concise, and sharp.

Sedgewick was scared.

After using the biometric iris scan to enter the secure elevator, they began to descend quickly.

“Are you sure everything is cool?”

His colleague flinched, her eyes flickered at him, and then her head drooped, only slightly, but he knew her. Something was amiss.

“Superstition,” she finally uttered. “There was a lightning strike in Russia.” The grey-green eyes once again flittered over his face. “It’s nothing really.”

Jesse thought about letting it go. After all, Sedgewick’s Russian mother was a ball of superstitious fears and rituals. But, in all this time Sedgie had reflexively laughed them off. Not this time. She was worried about something.

“Just tell me what’s bothering you. If you say it, it loses power, right?” That’s what they always told each other when things weren’t working out.

Sedgewick brushed her hair, looked around the elevator car, and then back at him. Her gaze rested on his face for a moment, gauging his intent, as it always did. She was measuring his attitude, the curve of his lips and color of his cheeks.

Finally, she spoke, “Reports out of Russia are saying The Motherland Calls statue in Volgograd was struck by lightning.”

Jesse waited for the punchline. Volgograd was just south of the aerospace base where he and his Russian, Chinese, German, and English team were supposed to fly out of. This manned mission to Mars was top secret, but more because of the danger and risks involved than the objective. This flight would be announced when its success was assured.

But, of what significance was a lightning strike? Weather phenomena in central Russia wasn’t exactly out of the ordinary. It certainly wouldn’t endanger a mission that was inherently riskier than a random storm front. Sedgewick knew that as well as he did.

“So, a statue got hit by a bolt of lightning in a city close to the base. Is there something else?”

Sedgie shook her head, her mousey-colored prematurely graying hair flicked wildly. “I never should have said--“

Jesse touched her shoulder again, and she paused, looking intently at him.

“Tell me,” Jesse pleaded, in his softest, most vulnerable tone.

Anna Sedgewick’s eyes widened and she said quietly, “The report said it was a lightning bolt, but the statue, The Motherland Calls figure is constructed with cement. The Russian command has confidentially confirmed it wasn’t a weather event at all.”

Jesse asked, without thinking, “What else could it be?”

Sedgie leaned in and kissed Jesse, her soft, dry lips caressing his own. He instinctively opened them, and they briefly moved closer together. He could feel their heat rising, but she wasn’t moving in for passion. Anna was acting out of fear and desperation.

Sedgie pulled away, smoothed her uniform and continued, “It appears to have been a high energy explosion. There are satellite pictures and radar images that show it as electro-magnetic in nature, but there’s something else. They are concentrated in a way that doesn’t appear natural.”

Jesse blinked and leaned closer. “What do you think?”

“I don’t know,” Anna answered, her cheeks flushed. “But this energy explosion, or whatever it is, struck out parts of the statue’s face.”

“What do you mean?” Jesse asked dumbfounded by her reaction.

“It blunted her eyes. It blinded the damned statue.”

“Whaaa-tttt?” Jesse stammered. “How do you blind a statue?”

“You blast away its eyes and nothing else,” Anna said matter-of-factly, and as cool and calm as he’d heard her this morning.

The elevator doors beeped and slid open. Two uniformed officers awaited them.

Copyright © 2019 Cole Matthews; All Rights Reserved.
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Isn’t it likely that a concrete statue would have rebar reinforcing its structure? Is it possible that the rebar was closer to the surface near the eyes? There are scientific (if unlikely) explanations for phenomena like that.
;–)

Besides, an alternative interpretation is that the statue would be offended if it could see what was occurring during the secret mission.
;–)

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Hmm. Sort of a 'make of this what you will' approach, huh?

Interesting that both you and Valkyrie pegged the first flight to Mars as being a Russian gig, or at least in part. What brought that on?

Fun tale. Makes my imagination do somersaults!  :)

 

 

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Something to think...and now I have Manfred Mann's 'Blinded by the Light stuck in my head'

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Makes me think someone doesn't want them to see whatever they will encounter on their journey. Or Sedgie is trying to make him nervous and give up his spot for her...  

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2 hours ago, aditus said:

…and now I have Manfred Mann's 'Blinded by the Light stuck in my head'

That was a cover of Bruce Springsteen’s song and is the title of an upcoming (mainstream) movie…
;–)

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6 hours ago, aditus said:

Something to think...and now I have Manfred Mann's 'Blinded by the Light stuck in my head'

Love that song! :D 

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5 hours ago, Puppilull said:

Makes me think someone doesn't want them to see whatever they will encounter on their journey. Or Sedgie is trying to make him nervous and give up his spot for her...  

Oh... devious mind at work. :P 

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Oh Damn, Cole. You have to continue this one. What a great beginning, drawing me in smoothly and completely. Kudos and cheers... Gary....

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On 8/12/2019 at 7:22 PM, droughtquake said:

Isn’t it likely that a concrete statue would have rebar reinforcing its structure? Is it possible that the rebar was closer to the surface near the eyes? There are scientific (if unlikely) explanations for phenomena like that.
;–)

Besides, an alternative interpretation is that the statue would be offended if it could see what was occurring during the secret mission.
;–)

Concrete is a very good insulator.  It's doubtful an actual lightning bolt would be drawn to a cement encased form, or would it?  Perhaps that's what is happening here.  Maybe the structure isn't a statue at all?  

Thanks for the alternative ideas!

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23 hours ago, Geron Kees said:

Hmm. Sort of a 'make of this what you will' approach, huh?

Interesting that both you and Valkyrie pegged the first flight to Mars as being a Russian gig, or at least in part. What brought that on?

Fun tale. Makes my imagination do somersaults!  :)

 

 

Yeah, we both were a bit surprised by that, but that is the only viable governmental program now in the works.  The US program isn't really doing much outside satellites, and I think that's what made me go there.  

Thanks for the interesting question!

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16 hours ago, aditus said:

Something to think...and now I have Manfred Mann's 'Blinded by the Light stuck in my head'

Hahaha!!  Didn't mean to pipe Bruce Springsteen's lyrical musings into an earworm!!!!  

Thanks so much!

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15 hours ago, Puppilull said:

Makes me think someone doesn't want them to see whatever they will encounter on their journey. Or Sedgie is trying to make him nervous and give up his spot for her...  

That's an interesting take about Sedgie.  Yeah, but WHO doesn't want them to go on the journey?  I don't think it's Sedgie.  

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14 hours ago, dughlas said:

I'm gonna say it again ... more please.

Glad you're enjoying!  My mojo seems to be returning piece by piece.  

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13 hours ago, droughtquake said:

That was a cover of Bruce Springsteen’s song and is the title of an upcoming (mainstream) movie…
;–)

Hahaha!!  I just saw this!

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10 hours ago, Headstall said:

Oh Damn, Cole. You have to continue this one. What a great beginning, drawing me in smoothly and completely. Kudos and cheers... Gary....

Thanks Gary!  I'm just working on doing some mental and imagination exercises.  Hopefully this will get me moving in the right direction!!  I appreciate the support/

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On 8/12/2019 at 10:16 PM, Geron Kees said:

Hmm. Sort of a 'make of this what you will' approach, huh?

Interesting that both you and Valkyrie pegged the first flight to Mars as being a Russian gig, or at least in part. What brought that on?

Fun tale. Makes my imagination do somersaults!  :)

 

 

I came up with the name Natasha, and then went with the Russian names.  I thought that was interesting too.  :)

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This one was fun to write and I love the play on the world's tallest blind woman.  Well done :D  

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Very interesting... someone or something blinded a statue? A case of mistaken identity, or just demonstrating something to a party who needs to know? In either case, I don’t want to annoy that someone...

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3 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Very interesting... someone or something blinded a statue? A case of mistaken identity, or just demonstrating something to a party who needs to know? In either case, I don’t want to annoy that someone...

Yes, it would appear that someone or something doesn't like what's happening.  Thanks for the interesting comment!  What a great afternoon!  We had a great time.  :)

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6 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

This one was fun to write and I love the play on the world's tallest blind woman.  Well done :D  

Thanks Valkyrie!  We're having fun aren't we?

 

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16 minutes ago, Cole Matthews said:

Thanks Valkyrie!  We're having fun aren't we?

 

the office yes GIF

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