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Blackbird Singing - 1. Just Desserts

My response to GA PTPrompt #128

Describe your favorite dessert without explicitly stating what it is. Use all five senses.

There is nothing more delightful,

than to take a great big bite full

of my favorite dark obsession,

and pop a sweet cherry Hessian.

 

The vanilla cream white frosting

tops the dark brown chocolate ring.

Adding silky luscious texture,

excites this eager racanteur.

 

Sensuous scent of kirsch liquor

makes my heartbeat race much quicker.

Decorating with dense ganache?

Pleasing visual with panache.

 

I love to take a fresh cherry,

Depraved! Relishing! Verily!

The white cream erupting sweetly,

I lap with my tongue quite quickly.

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raven1

Trust me when I say there was nothing innocent in my mind when I wrote those words! :yes:

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Mancunian

You have just increased my shopping bill, I have to buy Black Forrest Gateau now. I love to drizzle a little cream over mine, no not that sort of cream, lol.

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raven1
1 hour ago, Mancunian said:

You have just increased my shopping bill, I have to buy Black Forrest Gateau now. I love to drizzle a little cream over mine, no not that sort of cream, lol.

Sorry for the added expense, Man.  It is my favourite dessert, and I do love cream on mine.  And like you, I like my cream sweet, not salty.  I'll save the salty cream for snacking in bed.

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chris191070

You could always take the gateau to bed and have salty and creamy at the same time, with extra sticky cherries to suck on.

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Mancunian
10 minutes ago, chris191070 said:

You could always take the gateau to bed and have salty and creamy at the same time, with extra sticky cherries to suck on.

depending on how it's served up it may even save on washing up. :gikkle:

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4 hours ago, chris191070 said:

You could always take the gateau to bed and have salty and creamy at the same time, with extra sticky cherries to suck on.

I definitely would like that, although I like my cherries fresh...not candied. There's nothing like a ripe cherry just waiting for me to pluck.

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2 hours ago, Mancunian said:

depending on how it's served up it may even save on washing up. :gikkle:

But licking off the mess is one of my favourite things to do when cleaning up the mess!  I can savour the flavour!

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