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Prickly Prompts - 6. #774 Me and I

It has been a long week and . You spot this nice restaurant as you go home and decide to give it a shot. As you walk in the door the loud noise in the place becomes suddenly silent. You pause as you fear the place might be in the midst of a robbery. You notice everyone shooting glances at you and then toward the back of the place. Wondering what could be going on you follow their glances and find … yourself? Only your doppelganger seems completely different somehow. What happens when you meet?

I watch the huge, golden ‘thirty’ balloon bob up and down under the ceiling, following the hostess to my table. What a coincidence! Here I am treating myself to a nice lonesome meal, and there is another birthday party going on, much better attended than mine will ever be, mind you. As we get closer, I can see everyone staring at me. My hand shoots to my throat, adjusting the knot of my suddenly too-tight tie. Beads of sweat are running down my back. A guy wearing a green shirt steps aside just when we pass the table, and my gaze falls on familiar curly brown hair. I know the reason for the small scar bisecting the left eyebrow. Bicycle accident, and— Mum’s pearls. A tentative smile greets me. And all of a sudden I have my arms full of me, and I can see myself mirrored in my eyes as the scent of Jil Sander’s ‘Sun’ envelops me, and she whispers, “I’m so glad you came out today.”

Thank you @comicfan for providing this prompt, it took me a while to find the right spin.
:thankyou: @Valkyrie for the edits and comments. :hug:
Any comment or reaction are appreciated. Thank you for reading!
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I guess I’m not awake enough to have understood what was going on! How ironic after all those Comments I’ve made wondering (intentionally provocatively) if a character is Trans. I’m glad others understood and explained it to me before I said something dumber than usual.
;–)

I remember Heinlein had a protagonist who had two clones created who were younger, twin female versions of him – and all three had flaming red hair!
;–)

On 8/21/2019 at 10:15 AM, droughtquake said:

I guess I’m not awake enough to have understood what was going on! How ironic after all those Comments I’ve made wondering (intentionally provocatively) if a character is Trans. I’m glad others understood and explained it to me before I said something dumber than usual.
;–)

I remember Heinlein had a protagonist who had two clones created who were younger, twin female versions of him – and all three had flaming red hair!
;–)

Oh, Trans occurred to me right away too, drought, so we can be dumb and dumber together. :P 

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