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Green Lightning

   (7 reviews)
Genres: Fantasy, Horror, Mystery,

Jovan got two tickets for an escape room for Secret Santa, but he never found anyone to accompany him. Almost a year later, on a whim, he invites his lunch buddy, Arden. The props are plentiful, the puzzles clever, and the story creepy. They would even have made it out in time if that door hadn’t stood ajar and Jovan been too curious.

Please enjoy this story as part of the 2025 Secret Author Story Contest!
No character death
Copyright © 2025 Aditus; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (7 members)

  • Action Packed 4
  • Addictive/Pacing 4
  • Characters 5
  • Chills 6
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Compelling 5
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 4
  • World Building 4


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Bill W

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

If you're looking for a story that will make your spine tingle and the hair on the back of your neck stand on end, then look no further.  This short story will do that for you.  Don't let the SA's story description mislead you, because this story has nothing to do with a Secret Santa.  It's more like an evil and deadly Grinch before Halloween.  Just don't read this prior to bedtime, because if you do, you'll probably have trouble falling asleep.  Kudos, SA, for a creepy and haunting tale.  

Response from the author:

Haha, nope. This is not a cozy Secret Santa story. Thank you, Bill, for the awesome review. ❤️

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Slytherin

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Are you looking for a story that really gets under your skin? Do you like creepy escape rooms with a X-files vibe? Well you found it - this story is waiting for you! Read it ! 

PS: a new mobile phone is missing, that still annoys me :pissed: 

Response from the author:

Woo-hoo x-file vibes. Perfect, thank you, LBO! 👽

Oh, Jovan is still furious about the phone... but now he has an excuse to buy the latest model.

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Thirdly

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

Green Lightning? More like "Escape Room From Hell." I yell at fictional characters all the time, but I don't think I've yelled at any SA entry characters as much as I have at the ones in THIS one. 

Response from the author:

You aaaalways yell at my characters, and they never listen. Thank you for the review, Thirdly. It's my secret story ingredient. 😜

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chris191070

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

Thanks Secret Author.

Jordan and Aven go to an Escape room, where they discover secrets and mystery, plentiful.

Read on to discover more.

Response from the author:

Thank you, Chris, for the review. I started with one secret, and boom, a secret avalanche happened. I'm glad you liked it. ❤️

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