Welcome to Absurdistan - 1. Chapter 1

I like Absurdistan, Adi. These are more complex than Haiku, but still concise enough to bring haiku to mind. #3 is wonderful. I totally get #4. Sometimes it seems that is what it would take to start fresh.   #5 gives me the same feel... a rebuild decided by the Earth Mother's cold intervention.   #1 I've walked through those fields, kicking up the dried dust, and it feels like the whole world is dying. #2 Sometimes, metaphorically speaking, the earth needs a good shower.

Thought-provoking and entertaining adds up to great poetry. Thanks, Adi. Cheers!

Thank you for this brief glimpse into your head. I like the term "head prison"  - it conjures up a kind of self-imposed capture which shows up in over-thinking the same stuff, over and over again. At least it presents that way in my "head prison". 

Very thought provoking. 

14 hours ago, Headstall said:

Sometimes, metaphorically speaking, the earth needs a good shower.

Exactly, and sometimes a sandbath! Thank you, Gary. I knew you would understand my erratic mind.

11 hours ago, Doha said:

Thank you for this brief glimpse into your head.

You're welcome. I'm glad you didn't find them too dissuading.

12 hours ago, Doha said:

like the term "head prison"

Your interpretation was spot on. At least there is a way out when we open our eyes. Thank you for the great comment.

Very thought provoking, and the glimpse into you mind and what it see is at times very prophetic, enlighting, or downright scary.  I enjoyed it nonetheless.