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What kind of wolf am I?

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Being at the bottom the pack hierarchy, Sasha is conflicted on an everyday basis. He does not feel like he belong, being a different species, being gay. His wolf wishes to protect but his human side wishes to surrender, only adding to his confusion.

When he finds out he is drawn to the pack alpha, it only complicates things.

 

Tristan knows how to run his pack, even though is has a lot of members, he is respected and no one dares to defy him. Until he comes across Sasha, the lowest ranked pack member who defiantly growled at him.

This story is a first draft and must be expected to have errors along the way.

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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This might seem harsh, but you really need a good editor.  I stopped reading your first chapter before I reached the half-way point.  There were so many errors that I found it difficult to understand what you wrote. 

For example, you used "sent" when I think you meant "scent". 

Where you wrote "a spec of freckled bridging his nose", did you mean "freckles bridging his nose"? 

Where you wrote "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it opposing.", did you mean "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it imposing."? 

I really enjoy reading stories about were-creatures, so please start over but with an editor. 

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3 hours ago, lEAFMOLD said:

This might seem harsh, but you really need a good editor.  I stopped reading your first chapter before I reached the half-way point.  There were so many errors that I found it difficult to understand what you wrote. 

For example, you used "sent" when I think you meant "scent". 

Where you wrote "a spec of freckled bridging his nose", did you mean "freckles bridging his nose"? 

Where you wrote "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it opposing.", did you mean "The door didn’t look very different from any other entries, but damn was it imposing."? 

I really enjoy reading stories about were-creatures, so please start over but with an editor. 

It is not harsh at all, all kinds of feed back is highly appreciated, so thank you for taking the time to comment 🥰

You are absolutely right, I should probably have sent it past my editor 😰 one of the perks of being too eager, and so I am very sorry that you did not enjoy, not that I can say I blame you, yikes...  and I will see to that the mistakes are corrected and make sure I reread everything before posting.

However, I did type a note about this story being a first draft and there were bound to be errors along the way, so you should not have expected the read to be flawless. But I completely understand you, I too have skipped stories because of errors.

Feel free to come by again, once I have the errors fixed and hopefully you will stay with me.

Thank you again for taking your time

Loves and hugses🤗

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